Everything is happening WAYYY to fast. Like, this story has great potential (plot, characters, etc) but you're making things move so quickly, and it's throwing me off...

Sorry if that sounds harsh... :)

Author's Response: no problem, I understand (o: this is my first 'fic so that's something I improve on; I'm better with pace in my second story.

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This is interesting so far but one thing I've noticed is you keep switching between first and third persons... it's disorientating, but I can keep on reading. :)

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Lovely story, can't wait for the next update!

Author's Response: Thank you!(:

- love Rosie!

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Ah, I love this story. Please update soon!

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Oh, goob job, that was a wonderful ending.

I really enjoyed this story; you definitely have a skill for writing.

Spectacular job!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm really glad you liked it! *hugs*

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This just made me cry. I can't really see properly, now it's all blurry.

Well done, that was absolutely amazing. You captured the twins so perfectly.

Author's Response: -hugs- thanks so much!! I'm really glad you liked it (:

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I love this :) Please update soon!

Author's Response: will as soon as i get the time off my busy highschool career hun. :/

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ANDWARD! GHONDE! ANDEEE! This was really, really good! You write so well!

:)

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I'm kind of confused... though it was brilliantly written. Your use of words flow together very well, and your grammar is flawless.

Well done. Maybe explain to me why tough guy knows Hermione, and why they don't know Ron? Sorry, I'm confused.

Author's Response: Sorry it was confusing! Ron and Hermione were just goofing around. And poor Harry knocked on the door at just the wrong time. ^_^

Thanks for reviewing!

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That was spectacular! Well done!

Author's Response: thank you so much for the lovely review! it's great to hear such a positive response i something that i pulled together within an hour or two. thanks!!

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This is great! Please update soon!

Author's Response: Thank you!!! I will really try!! =)

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This is a brilliant story so far, please update soon!

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This is great! Please update soon :D

Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing ^^ It really means a lot!
As for the updates... That might take a bit...

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I'm liking this, can't wait for the next update :)

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Aw that was so incredibly cute! Well done!

Author's Response: Thank youu
I'm glad you enjoyed it :D
-Midnight

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I like this so far :)

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I like the beginning :)

And gorgeous banner, dearie :)

Author's Response: Thanks Deni :) I hope you like what follows.

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I don't normally read Marauder era fics but my oh my, wow, this is great! I knew I made the banner for you, so I was like 'hey why don't I go read her story?' and it's great!

Can't wait for your next update!

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That was great, well done :)

Author's Response: Thank you very much! :)

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That was really good, well done :)

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Banners are 700 x 110 pixels in size, hon :)

Author's Response: Thank you!! =]

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Please update soon, this is pretty good so far.

Author's Response: hey deni :)
thanks, fourth chapter is awaiting validation.
thanks for reviewing :)
means the world.
x
eliseelove

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Oooh that was very good :)

Author's Response: thank you!

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:o x 4 billion!

AKUHRFKIBFLKENA?KLB?:GN?SKL!!!

Stupid Draco.

LOVE the story :)

Can't wait for the next update :)

Author's Response: :D I'm so glad that you liked it!

I'm working on the next chapter and I hope you'll read it when it's up.

Thanks so much for reviewing for me.

--Emily

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This is a very good story so far, but I've got to go to soccer now, so I'll pick up reading when I'm back :)

Author's Response: Thanks for leaving another review!

Glad that you still like it.

--DF11

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