I love this story! It's pretty good!Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing, I'm glad you think it's decent! Report Review
I really like this story so far! Keep it up. :)Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you like it! Report Review
I'm so happy you updated! Wonderful, as always.
-coco Report Review
This is sad. I feel like we have been lead to believe that Al is one person, then SUPRISE! He isn't. Ugh. This affirmed my belief that guys suck. Why would this even happen? It's not like they were really using each other. I DON'T GET WHY THIS IS HAPPENING. Report Review
This story is hilarious! Thank you from stopping me from reading depressing and angsty fics. I needed that. Also, the quotes in the chapter summaries are awesome.Author's Response: well, not to brag or anything, but i'm pretty much the saviour of the world. many times over.
er, that might be a mild exaggeration (I did save my sister from a daddy-long-legs once though), but i agree, angsty depressing fics seem to be cropping up a lot. so i'm glad I did my bit and saved you (:
glad you thought so! i love researching those quotes, so i'm glad someone else enjoys reading them. thanks for the feedback and sorry for the slow reply! ^^ Report Review
This story is absolutely awesome. That is really all I can say. Report Review
I adore how original this story is. I mean, who else would think of this plotline? I love your writing.Author's Response: haha, that's ironic cuz I based this story after Lisa McMann's novel, Wake. It's a great book. Unfortunately I can't take credit for the premise :( But Thanks so much for reviewing!
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I love Mason, he's funny! When will Heidi tell Tosh? It's driving me nuts.Author's Response: Me too! He's one of my favorite characters! And soonish! I like building the suspense :D Report Review
I read your story today. Next I'll read the sequel. I've been crying for 4 chapters. And eating a plum. But, you didn't really need to know that. I just want to say that your story is really beautiful, in a very sad way. I wish it wasn't sad. But it has to be, and frankly, I'd be disapointed if it wasn't. I guess this story is just really honest. Because sometimes life sucks. And that's it. Wow, I'm depressing myself. Maybe I'm overemotional like Mary. Oh well. Anyway, your story is probably the best I've read in ages, and really nicely written. So, thanks for writing it. I'm going to go read the sequel. Is this one sad too? Just wondering if I should get more tissues.
-coco Report Review
Hahaha, this chapter was funny! Just got into your story, and I like it! Report Review
Ohhh, good start! I like the general plotline, and seems to be good! Report Review
woah. cue internal screaming. i know that pretty boy was supposed to be next, but please, please, pretty please, update this first! cliffie's are making me sad. but it is sooo good!!! Report Review
Words cannot describe the happy dance I did when you updated! And its so long! Please update this story next, Ms.Cliffy-writer. I need it! Loved everything. I'm heartbroken over Leah and Michael though.
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sad, but sweet. also, i completley get what jane is saying and i also agree with oliver. i'm so torn! update please! loved it.Author's Response: Hmm. Coke sounds good right now.
Haha, I'm glad you see both sides :) That's what I really wanted to showcase. As with a lot of the arguments in my stories, there really is no right or wrong answer. They're both right. They're both wrong. Which I love!
Thank you so much! Report Review
DUDE. I'M SCREAMING. I love them. Awww . . . . But why is Al so hot though? Grrr. Okay, if you don't update within a week, you will be a total meanie-puss. Is that what you want Saval? To be a meanie-puss? Amazing job (as always). Report Review
Oh my goodness, you should be given an award for getting me so obsessed with this story after one chapter. When I saw you updated, I FREAKED. I love it! Pretty, pretty, please update again? Or update Love Goddesses, I don't care. I just am slightly in love with your writing.
2349247622349070/10Author's Response: I actually might update this one first cause I'm in love with this one at the moment (: Report Review
Hey, I love the story, but I saw it on another site, too. Do you have it posted there as well?
-CocoAuthor's Response: Yup, I'm also on fanfiction dot net, so if you saw it there, that's me. :) Otherwise, we have a problem... anyway, thanks for looking out for me, and I'm glad you like the story! :) Report Review
I LOVE THIS. I actually did not see it coming. Amazing!!!
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I'm sooo happy! I thought you were dead! :(
Great, as usual.
Best part: trying to snap Alice out of it. That was funny.
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Artemis is looking happy again! Goody! I think I read this chapter about 5 times. It is just so cute/devious. OMG WAIT.
Its December in this chapter, right? 'I go back to December all the time' I am a freakin genius. I liked this chapter a lot. Awesome job!
-Coco Report Review
Sleazy is coming back! Yay! I love/am scared of/hate him! (I get what you mean.) But, the wonderful thing about Sleazy is that he has a wonderful talent for causing drama. I love drama. Go Ariadne! Girl Power! (Wow, that was as cheesy as it sounded in my head.) Now, please, please, please, do not take this the wrong way. Its just that Ariadne is starting to annoy me with her calm down everyone stuff. Like last chapter, with Hugo? Instead of laughing, she had to freak out. The same with this chapter with overprotective Al. Sigh. I feel bad. I just prefer your other characters. But overall, I love the story and it's plot. It is insanely funny. Great work!
BTW kudos for quick updates.
-coco Report Review
awww, how cute! i love it and it is such a feel good story.
-cocoAuthor's Response: Aw, thank you so much! :) Report Review
oh my heavens.
oh good lord.
words do not describe how amazing that was.
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This was so good. I actually cried. Really, really fantastic. You should write another one like it!
-coco Report Review
fantastico! ...if thats a word.
really great job, i was smiling like an idiot during the fred/alex part. somebodys gettin some action! oh lalala.
7181881815/10Author's Response: ;D oh la la c'est vrai, mon amie.
je pense que tu vas l'aimer.
studying for french...check!
haha ;) Report Review
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