Reading Reviews From Member: Ginny_Potter99
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Review #1, by Ginny_Potter99 Delicate: Blood, Sweat and Tears

3rd December 2008:
You did a great job with it. I liked the changes in pov. But one question... when didn't they just send a patronus to scorpius with a message. I know its not as dramatic and everything as trying to find him. actually its sort of like when your watching a scary movie and the girl runs up the stairs away from the killer instead of out the door and your like OMG IDIOT makes so much more sense to go outside where your not trapped... Yea it felt like that.

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Review #2, by Ginny_Potter99 Harry Potter and the Life After Death: The Article Release

31st October 2008:
What! Dawlish is always the bad guy! And I'm not to worried if this is staying even somewhat cannon that she's not dead but that remains to be seen... Great story though I love it and I'm waiting in anticipation for the next chapter now great cliffy

Author's Response: Haha, who says it was actually Dawlish?! Now theres a thought! Thank you for the compliment. Now, as there seems to be a lot of impatient reviewers, the next chapter is being posted tomorrow, so it will be up as soon as it is validated, as I do not have trusted author status.

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Review #3, by Ginny_Potter99 Defying Gravity: 14..Chasing Reality

27th October 2008:
Oh please don't make James stuck with this girl anyway, not like I want you to kill her off or anything. Make be live and disapear. Not much Al and Nat in this chapter which is disapointing. And I'm wondering if your really going to make something happen to Harry it seems like a bit much with everything else going on. Or I could have completely misread that part and took it the wrong the way and he's just got some heartburn...

Author's Response: There wasn't much Nat and Al in this chapter, but I really wanted to get the Jennifer stuff taken care of. Next chapter will have more Nat/Al in it, I promise! They are the main couple after all.

Is it really too much? Maybe nothing will happen...we'll see!


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Review #4, by Ginny_Potter99 Breaking Tradition: Chapter Four: One Second

26th October 2008:
The portraits to the dorms are my favorite part of this story. Great chapter, I can really see Draco as a crazy drunk, very entertaining.

Author's Response: Ahaha, I can see Draco as a crazy drunk too!!! Thank you so much for the read and review and I hope you continue with my story!

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Review #5, by Ginny_Potter99 Delicate: Becoming Parents

26th October 2008:
Draco seems genuinely upset about the situation but I wonder is that because he is upset or because he got ratted out to his son... hmmm. anyway it still a great chapter no matter the length. I have to say this is one of my favorite stories, always something to look forward to.

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Review #6, by Ginny_Potter99 Defying Gravity: 13..Because I Care

26th October 2008:
This is my first review of this story because my account was missing forever =( but thats ok I can review now. I just wanted to say I love this story, although I'm gonna be mad if Albus is cheating on Nat that would be pretty messed up on his part and I like him. And I like the rushed letter to James it's funny. I'm not sure where I remember this from but isn't it james steals the maps, and Albus gets the cloak, so it would make sense for James to keep the map from Albus and he's definately not going to give it to Lily. What overprotective big brother would give his little sister that so she can use it get in trouble, or more likely, sneak around with boys!

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Review #7, by Ginny_Potter99 The Last Five Years of Lily and James: Chapter Four

25th October 2008:
Well you can definately tell those were written by a man, they were rushed, a little dirtier than usual for this site i think. that doesn't really mean its a bad thing it just doesnt flow like the rest of the story. I hate to say it like this but leave it to a man to fly through the beginning just to get to the "good stuff" =)

Author's Response: lol i know he's also not the best writer in the world. hopefully u all can just focus on the good parts and ignore what he wrote. thank you so much for reading and reviewing!!!

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