It's good. A couple of spelling and punctuation errors but good none the less. Keep up the good work.
Kort Report Review
This situation has trouble written all over it. Which is something that draws me into reading this kinda stuff. Minus a few spelling and puncuation errors, hehe I cant spell either, it's actually really good. It just takes a little bit of time to improve your writing and it gets easier. Keep writing.
Kort Report Review
Okay pranking and then revenge? Why do I get a feeling the revenge is goin to make me love this story even more?
*~*Kort*~*Author's Response: Ha, with those three you never can tell, can you? I'm glad you love the story- thank you! :-) Report Review
I was really into all three of these. It gave me ideas. I really think you should write another story. It'd be cool. I like A Pretty Little Slytherin too.
*Kort*Author's Response: thank you I am trying some things...just a little bit of writers block right now... hopefully i will be back soon Report Review
I told you I'd reveiw and I am. But I have no comment on the story except for DRACO'S WOBBLE BUT THEY DON'T FALL DOWN!
*Prongs Owns All*Author's Response: Well.FANFICTION IS SUPPOSED TO BE FUN AND IMAGINATIVE.and this story is imaginative...but you know.i hate mean people.and that one chick was mean...and ur being mean.cuz i depended on you to let me know the story was good or bad BEFORE i posted it...now people are hatein on me.which isnt fair...and umm prongs is a filthy flea bitten DEER...
SNUFFLES OWNS ALLL Report Review
I LOVE IT... I MEAN IT I REALLY LOVE IT. THE SONG MAKES IT FUNNIER.
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haha im the friend.(padfoot..aka Mrs_RonaldWeasly)
this chapter is automatically owned by me!
hahah i wINNN
SNUFFLES HAS NO FLEAS!!!Author's Response: Dude Mrs_RonaldWeasly made it look like I reviewed my own story!
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