{reviewid: 2195326, reviewer: 'Strawberry_heaven'}
16th August 2009:
yay a new story!!! the writing style is differant than your other story(if that makes any sence), with i think is awesome if authors can do that. i love this story almost as much as i love your other one! 9/10 stars! (for minor spelling errors)
Author's Response: yeah sorry bout sp errors.i kinda get what you mean. thanks for the review ;p
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{reviewid: 2120787, reviewer: 'Strawberry_heaven'}
19th May 2009:
i love the first paragraph, so deep!!
Author's Response: thank you so much !!
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{reviewid: 2120786, reviewer: 'Strawberry_heaven'}
19th May 2009:
one of the best chapters :DD
Author's Response: thanks alot!!
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{reviewid: 2120785, reviewer: 'Strawberry_heaven'}
19th May 2009:
love the cliffhanger
Author's Response: really because most people hate cliffhangers...lol jk thanks for the review!
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{reviewid: 2120784, reviewer: 'Strawberry_heaven'}
19th May 2009:
wats up with the alvin part lol
Author's Response: lol idk . thx for the review
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{reviewid: 2120782, reviewer: 'Strawberry_heaven'}
19th May 2009:
you didn't make the next chapter exxxtra long lol idc though
Author's Response: yeahhh sorry about that lol
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{reviewid: 2120780, reviewer: 'Strawberry_heaven'}
19th May 2009:
aww it's like a happy ending, isn't it? great chap. the story was short though...unless something else its going to happen?
Author's Response: thanks for the review! n youll just have too see!!!
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{reviewid: 1987434, reviewer: 'Strawberry_heaven'}
13th November 2008:
i love the ending about how she wanted to get on the broom and keep going.lol yeah short though :/
Author's Response: i'm sorry :/
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