Reading Reviews From Member: dracos_girl101
  
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Review #1, by dracos_girl101Give A Little: An Unexpected Visit

10th April 2009:
Hello Iz from the review thread.
You told me to look for the characterization for George. I think you wrote him very well and I enjoyed reading this.
It went smoothly and I look forward to future chapters.

Author's Response: Thank you!!! I'm sooo glad you think he's well written, he's one of my favorite characters and I felt like I wasn't doing him justice, but you've given me hope! :] Thanks again!!

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Review #2, by dracos_girl101Vegetable Soup: Vegetable Soup

3rd April 2009:
I am not sure what to say.

I love that you had a good plot and even created a new department. Should have been in the epilogue honestly.

But it was really hard to follow and the detail was long and drawn out. Made it harder to read. I did not see any grammar mistakes and it was a really good read. But it was quite hard to follow. Bits of it were all mashed together.

Good plot though.
Iz

Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing. I'm not quite sure what you mean by: it should have been in the epilogue though.
Sometimes simple is better, right?

Nonetheless, thank you again for reviewing.


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Review #3, by dracos_girl101I Me Mine: Part I

16th March 2009:
Okay. How to start? I am not really a Lily/Sirius shipper and not much of a Lily/James shipper either. So to me the pairings in the story are not what i really read.
But i loved the story. The passion was there and obvious and i felt how she was torn between the two. there is not much to say but it was well written.

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Review #4, by dracos_girl101Is it too late?: Out of Time

5th June 2008:
One simple word.amazing

Author's Response: Well thank you. :D

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Review #5, by dracos_girl101Winning Hermione: The Suitors Game

2nd June 2008:
this whole fanfic is amazing

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