YAY!! I see you took advantage of the short queue as well. ^^ Yay for minimum wait!!
When is he going to take that horrid necklace off of her??
^^ I love the little flying lesson. It would have been great if she puked all over him. ^^ He would have deserved it.
So, is she going to tell Harry Draco doesn't have the Dark mark or is she going to keep his secret, because obviously that was something that he's trusting her with and it would be aweful if she betrayed him like that BEFORE they even get married.
KarriAuthor's Response: Yes, I want to get 19 finished and posted as well, but I'm not feeling very motivated today. I'm sure if I just get started it will pour out of me... le sigh. But I do love a short queue. :)
Only her husband can remove it, so he can't actually take it off until they're married.
Lol. I couldn't do that to him! ;)
I'm not sure yet, I think she will but it will be a while bfore she has a chance to relay any more information to him. There will be, I'm sure, a bit of inner conflict coming regarding the whole spying on him thing. It will be more and more difficult to betray him the more she cares for him.
Gah. Ok, ok. I'll get back to work on Chapter 19. :)
Thanks for the review Karri! Report Review
well, that's.quite a surpriseAuthor's Response: yeah it is...
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I know how you feel. :( All my reviews vanished as well, and I didn't have nearly as many as you did.
I would have posted a comment earlier, but I was having log in troubles.
Anyway, I love this chapter! ^^ It makes me happy that Draco got jelouse, even if it wasn't because he likes Hermione. I think it probably had something to do with losing face. YOu know him and his all high and mighty attitude. But, I'm going to pretend it was because he's falling for her because that makes me happy!!
I'd really like to know what Draco and Lucius are up to. It's driving me crazy! It's so frustrating that I know they're up to SOMETHING but I don't know what it is!!
So, how does Draco feel about the Asteria situation? Did he even like her? Did he love her? Did she break his heart or free him from the retched marriage? I'm also curious about how he feels about what Ron did to Hermione. He's such a complex character that he could go either way. Are you going to explain this in a later chapter? If not, could you explain it to me? ^^ I like behind the scenes information.
LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE this chapter. Keep up the good work!
Well, thank you for leaving me one. I appreciate your dedication. :)
I'm glad you liked it. :D I don't want to spoil things but at this point, there's a lot of denial still and a lot of his jealousy (in his mind anyway) stems from the narative near the end of Chapter 13. If you want to know, go back and look at it, if you don't then don't :). But like I said... there was denial then and still denial at this point.
Well... that's too much of the story to reveal. What they are doing is basically my whole plot line so you have to wait! :D I'm trying to reveal bits and pieces slowly, like a mystery. You're getting the info as Hermione gets it. :)
I plan to cover the Ron/Hermione Draco/Asteria relationships a bit in the future, possibly in Chapter 18, I'm not sure yet. But I will def. be addressing it. Bit by bit, see now you know a bit about why Asteria had her temper tantrum at the party. Like I said, when Hermione finds out... you'll find out. And I have a feeling it will come up in discussion soon. ;)
Thank you, thank you, thank you! :D I'm glad you liked it. I will try, I can only hope my subsequent chapters are at least on par with their predecessors. I'd hate to post a chapter that was dissapointing after all the glowing reviews. :)
Chapter 18 will be up soon, so check back later in the week. Thanks Karri! Report Review
omg. i have to admit, when i first started reading this i sort of skipped the first 9 1/2 chapters but that was just me trying to get to the good part. now I want you to write as much more as humanly possible!!! Hurry!!
ps- i've read way to many draco stories that have made me cry for one reason and one reason only. So, if you kill draco in this story, or hermione. i'll...well...i don't have any good threats. but as a writer i can make horrendous things happen to you on paper. lol. just, please can i finally read a happy ending??? Report Review
OMG, you just broke my heart. What ever happened to happy endings?
It was good but I think that it could use a little editing to make it flow a little better in places.
I have to go cry now.Author's Response: If you have to go to cry then i'm successful!!!!!!! lol..it was meant to be sad ending. Thanks for reviewing! Report Review
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