I hope you write another chapter soon, make sure you don't stop writing though it sounds like a great story; even if you do keep the chapters short.

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Sounds good can't wait to see what will happen

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For a while i thought they were going to get really drunk and wake up married the next moring, i can't wait to see what happens next great job!

Author's Response: haha, thanks for the great review and keep reading:)
~hpf14

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I love it i can't wait to find out what draco blaise and luna are going to be. Please don't let not getting ton's of reviews get to you; and whatever you do don't abandon the story i hate when writers do that. P.S. i'll be on pins and needles till next chapter so please don't take too long.

Author's Response: Thanx, i never thought this story would be successful - so this means a lot. I no i shouldnt let the reviews being deleted get to me, but i really loved some of them, nd i wish they weren't deleted :(

the nxt chapter should come out soon

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I can't think of anything else to say but that was just sad, i want to cry!

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This is not complete, you have to say what he did or it's no good; or at least put if she stay or goes. I was going to give a seven or higher, but theres no ending. This is a scene from a story, not a oneshot. So please finish it or turn it into a short story.

Author's Response: I'm sorry you feel this way, but I assure you it is finished. I wanted to leave an element of ambiguity to this story, I felt it gave it slightly more meaning.
Thank you.

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I'm sorry but i didn't like it maybe if it had a happy ending i could say it was ok but i think you secretly hate hermione i mean to have her raped, cheated on, cheated on again, have to kill a little boy, get pregnant, lose the baby and then have draco die on her. Plus the emotions changed every two seconds without going deep into their thoughts and feelings, and for only having 14 short chapters it was like a consitrated script for a soap opera you should have had her reason her feelings with each guy instead of instently changing her feelings and put more events inbetween the relationships and big events. Also some of the sentances were unrealistic. And last but not least the desire potion they were going to drink on sunday, i don't know what happened but sunday never came.

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Keep posting chapters i keep checking for another one, but when you read it all in one sitting and are dying to know what happens you end up not being able to wait for the next chapter, so you start pulling your hair out. So to save me from going bawld please please hurry.

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