They're an item, they kissed the second time, they got their first date and having their first French kiss on their first date? Wow!! ^ ^ there is so much happening on this chapter!!

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I like how James is actually quite self centered! ^ ^;

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It's still funny. You do have a way with words. I never even thought about elephant brain and most of the words here. It's pretty witty!

Author's Response: Thanks! Some of the vocab words I memorized for the SAT have managed to stick in my mind =P.

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Yea, I like it! Too much things that I like I can't point one which one... hmm...
probably some of them like this:

- But during the little chat Mam referred to all the nasty anatomy parts as bajingo and hoo-hah, and you get the drift.
- You can do it Tegan! I exclaimed aloud, though I only intended to do so in my mind. You can do it, you wonderfully semi-suicidal woman! In regards to your dedication to catching the Snitch, that is!

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Fictitious kids and dogs! O.o Wow, James is either really serious or he's a great dreamer!

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the journal makes me go oooh :)

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I can imagine James shouting and trying to get the attention! Hahaha, it's very funny! And he finally had showed some feelings for her... :x

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I love it! The thoughts of Weasley multiplying like rabits makes me laugh! XD

Author's Response: Thanks so much! And hey, there are a lot of Weasleys...which must be a result of...multiplication :P

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