{reviewid: 2536699, reviewer: 'luvlunageorgefred'}
22nd June 2011:
eep a ring! *squee* omg this is gonna have a sad ending and crush me wont it -_-
Author's Response: Don't give up hope yet :) Next chapter will be coming soon. Thanks for the review!
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{reviewid: 2536225, reviewer: 'luvlunageorgefred'}
21st June 2011:
LLOOOVVVEE OMG LOVE SO MUCH *tears* beautiful! Daphne was so bad but she died for Elt! the twists! I just couldn't pick it! and Draco and Hermione! oh just wonderful! *claps* only one thing...There's no mention of James II in this and he'd older then Albus?
but still love love love xoxo
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{reviewid: 2536117, reviewer: 'luvlunageorgefred'}
21st June 2011:
your writing style is really good :) I hope Severus and Hermione get together :)
Author's Response: Thank you very much! No worries, they just have to get to each other in their own way and time!
Thanks for the review!
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{reviewid: 2536108, reviewer: 'luvlunageorgefred'}
21st June 2011:
ok it must've been a long time since I've read this..Because the Snape and Hermione, Ron bit was fine but I have no idea why this Jake kid and Emma are in the story..lol
Author's Response: I guess so...Jake was introduced in Chapter five and Emma in chapter 11.sorry for any confusion/long delays in updating. Thanks for reading and leaving a review though!
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{reviewid: 2536101, reviewer: 'luvlunageorgefred'}
21st June 2011:
damn it all. stupid Lily...I'd forgive him!
Author's Response: Haha, well I'm sure it must have been really difficult for her. I don't know if I would have forgiven him if I were her. It's hard to say.
Thanks for the review!
-Dem-
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{reviewid: 2535626, reviewer: 'luvlunageorgefred'}
20th June 2011:
ommmggg amahzing I love Severus so much
Author's Response: Aha, me too! Another chapter on the way :)
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{reviewid: 2535587, reviewer: 'luvlunageorgefred'}
20th June 2011:
LOVVE *tears* love love love
Author's Response: thanks for reviewing :) x
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{reviewid: 2534981, reviewer: 'luvlunageorgefred'}
19th June 2011:
Hmm. I've read it so far and it's written very well. Except I don't deal very well with stories where someone takes all the crap. Because I just keep thinking what I'd do. I'd break all Albus' teeth :) But hopefully it stops being a one sided war of the world against Cassidy and balance out to Albus as well :) xx
Author's Response: Thanks you'll just have to wait and see how it pans out with Charlie and Al. :D Thanks for the review!
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{reviewid: 2534972, reviewer: 'luvlunageorgefred'}
18th June 2011:
ooo hope more comes soon I like it :)
Author's Response: I'm so glad that you like it! :) Next chapter is in waiting! :)
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{reviewid: 2534675, reviewer: 'luvlunageorgefred'}
18th June 2011:
theres a bit of inconsistency in your story with the description of Cassie. and previously when shes 5 months old and you describe her hair, and it goes from straight to curly..also I dont really envision blaise as one to use 'mate' in his speaking. but other then those little criticisms (sorry if I seem harsh) I really like it :) its a good story :) x
Author's Response: Thank you. And no offense taken. I've been out weeks after I've written chapter four when I write chapter 5. Details are a bit messy in my head when I did that. Also, I'm sorry if Blaise wasn't your Blaise in mind. I do try my best to make them sound English, and Blaise to retain his Italian ethnicity still. I'll check what I can do it with. Thank you again.
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{reviewid: 2534667, reviewer: 'luvlunageorgefred'}
18th June 2011:
oh oh oh *dances* I love snape and lily stories! yours is great! I really want to read more! this is more coming yessum? x
Author's Response: Yes, there will be more! I've got 4 chapters planned, and the next one is already written and ready for posting. :D
I'm glad you're enjoying it so far! Thank you for the review!
-Dem-
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{reviewid: 2534665, reviewer: 'luvlunageorgefred'}
18th June 2011:
loved it! oh my god! so good! love love love :) xx
Author's Response: *squeals in delight* Awww! Thank you so much!
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{reviewid: 2534586, reviewer: 'luvlunageorgefred'}
18th June 2011:
beautiful! just beautiful! *applauds*
Author's Response: Aha, thanks! More on the way as soon as the queue reopens :)
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{reviewid: 2534583, reviewer: 'luvlunageorgefred'}
18th June 2011:
angsty/cute. :) I like. Good humour in it.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you like it :)
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{reviewid: 2531191, reviewer: 'luvlunageorgefred'}
7th June 2011:
eep! end of this chapter so sweet :3
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{reviewid: 2531189, reviewer: 'luvlunageorgefred'}
7th June 2011:
NO dont stop here!! I want to keep reading lol
Author's Response: Ahaha, yay, another avid fan! I'm SO GLAD you like it and I definitely appreciate you taking the time to review. Trust me, it's definitely not over. Another chapter is currently awaiting validation as we speak :)
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{reviewid: 2531188, reviewer: 'luvlunageorgefred'}
7th June 2011:
AH sfhpwsiofhl!!! they kissed! YAYAYAYAY
Author's Response: Thanks for your kind review :)
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{reviewid: 2531187, reviewer: 'luvlunageorgefred'}
7th June 2011:
ooh I stumbled across this when I was looking at banner requests on tda and I really really like it so far :) x
Author's Response: Thanks for your kind review :)
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{reviewid: 2315076, reviewer: 'luvlunageorgefred'}
16th March 2010:
omg this is simply my favourite story i absolutely loves it :):)its really good and so clear i can see it all unfolding before my eyes i love the mistletoe thing is so sweet an imaginative :)
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm exctatic that you like it that much to consider it your favorite :) I guess I've done good.
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{reviewid: 2247029, reviewer: 'luvlunageorgefred'}
1st November 2009:
this is really really good xD i lik it heaps
Author's Response: Thank you!
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{reviewid: 2247022, reviewer: 'luvlunageorgefred'}
1st November 2009:
lol smooching aye :P
it was really good Jack i love the McG inferi from space lol nice description
Author's Response: Ohh just a little bit :P
I'm glad you liked it, I'm thinking of doing a re-write actually - so look out for that when NaNo finishes ^^
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{reviewid: 2241149, reviewer: 'luvlunageorgefred'}
21st October 2009:
aww lovely chap this is a great story xD
Author's Response: Thank you very much!
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{reviewid: 2240590, reviewer: 'luvlunageorgefred'}
20th October 2009:
hahahahahahah friggin hiliarious love it :)
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17th March 2009:
Ooo a lady was come 2 see them i wonder who it is.
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{reviewid: 2076781, reviewer: 'luvlunageorgefred'}
17th March 2009:
lol good good they shud sneak some products into Ron and Hermiones bag...hehehe *shifty eyes*
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