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Review #1, by goldenvHarry Potter and the Greatest Truth: Epilogue - My Small Universe

24th November 2008:
don't let it end there contiune it and let me know when u make it. it was really good thank you.

goldenv xx

Author's Response: hehe thank you for the wonderful words and review, you can find "The Real Potters" the series already posted in this site, it's a series of shots based on this story :)

thanks again


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Review #2, by goldenvI Love You Completely: I Love You Completely

24th November 2008:
this is fucking brilliant, you dhould do a story of them secrectley dating for the year during the war. i think that would be fantastic. anyway brilliant story.

Author's Response: I have an idea that's like that, but it might take me a while to pull together an outline. Right now I only have the basic storyline floating in my head :]Thanks for reviewing!

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Review #3, by goldenvWhy Us?: Of Books and Cleverness

25th October 2008:
the sex scene was good but could be improved with a little more intimacy. like u don't just have sex like that you should add some before delight like hermione could go down on harry or vice versa. but it was good i enjoyed the first 13 chapters. keep up the good work.

Author's Response: yeah, i'm not the best at writing those types of scenes. not to mention that i was real nervous since it was my first fic :/ they'll get better, i promise ;)

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Review #4, by goldenvBaby Of Mine: The Wedding

18th October 2008:
yeah this is really cool please finish it make some sort of pot hogwarts job its really good.

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Review #5, by goldenvIt's Gonna Be Love: Chapter 9: The Woman In Black

17th October 2008:
I like your writing style,but the scenes between Harry and Hermione are underdescribed. They seem to have a very childish passion between them. You insuiate they are having sex but no highlight on their first time. It seems all very succint. But I do like your writing keep up the good work.

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Review #6, by goldenvJust revenge or perhaps something more?: Chapter 1

28th March 2008:
You are the best writer i have come across. You have such a eye for deatil. Well done and i will look out for ur work in the future

Author's Response: awww... thanks so much! extremely happy you liked it, love you for reviewing,


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