Ahhh, so this is the first time that I have EVER read a slasher fic, and I was very scared, I can't lie! However, I enjoyed this, I like your writing technique, and I liked how it was down and to the point, I think this has the potential to be a much longer story if you wanted it to be, but it is also spectacular left as it is.
For my first slasher fic, I am very impressed, 9/10! Good job! Report Review
Very well done! I really enjoy the description that you use when you write, as well as how you manage to engage your audience.
10/10Author's Response: Thank you very much! I am glad you enjoyed it! More to come! ^_^ Report Review
WOW! Great chapter, I love how Malfoy has gotten protective suddenly, it was very cute, and Blaise interupting Viktor and Hermione really added to the story I think! Keep up the great work! Report Review
This is my favourite ship and i can't wait to see where you go with it. Keep writing and I can't wait for more! Megs Report Review
I'm really enjoying your story and hope you continue with it too.. Although I dont' write Hermione/Draco, I enjoy reading it, and this one seems like it's going to be a good one! Keep on going, I only have one other thing to say, try and use a little bit more description in your writing. It will make everything stand out a lot more! Other than that, great job and please keep writing!
MegsAuthor's Response: woo! thnx for the review and thanks for the advice! I really appreciate it!!! <3 xo Report Review
This is a very good story, normally I don't read Harry/Ginny but this is great! Please keep going, I 'm really liking it!Author's Response: Thank you! More to come! Report Review
This is a wonderful story and I'm really enjoying it. Not only is the action good, but your descirption is wonderful, making it a very enjoyable read and I believe that it has the potential to be a huge and very popular story. Great job, I'm loving it! Megs Report Review
This is a very interesting story and I really hope you keep going with this. I love Draco/Ginny stories! Author's Response: I'm going to keep on writing this until the story is over, because I read lots of good stories before where the author just gives up after chapter five or something and leaves me wondering how the story ends, I find that so frustrating. Report Review
This is a one of a kind story. It's beautiufl in a sick way, but so well written. I've never seen one of these before and it's almost scary the way you have written. Don't mind not having quotation marks, it makes the story flow better the way it is! Great job and keep writing!
MegsAuthor's Response: Wow, thank you so much. Almost scary, eh? Wow, thanks again! And I thought it flowed a bit better too, without the quotation marks. Thank you again! Report Review
This is a very interesting story that I really enjoyed reading. Keep going and I'll keep reading. I suggest you get a beta though, at they're a great help with your grammar. Other than that, this is a very unique story and I really liked it! MegsAuthor's Response: I'm glad you liked it Megs! Beta...hmmmm....I am not crazy about the idea because it will take longer for the chapters to be posted. I want to keep them updated as soon as I can, and the admins take a long time as it is to ok a story, but I will keep the beta in mind. My grammar does suck, so I may get one. Thanks for the advice love! More soon! Report Review
This is an awesome story so far! The way you have descirbed Myrtle's character and everything is so realistic and I just can't wait to see what happens from now on!Author's Response: Thanks, megs! I'm glad you liked this, and found it realistic. =) Report Review
Wonderful story, hope you keep going!Author's Response: Sorry I'm not continueing. Thanks for reviewing. Report Review
I'm very glad I foudn this chapter! It's wonderfully written and I really enjoyed reading it, not only is it amazinlgy unique but the dialouge and grammar is wonderful! I love how you are portraying Rita and can't wait for another chapter! Great story and keep writing! MegsAuthor's Response: Thank you so much! It means a lot! Report Review
This is a very well written story and I was really surprised by the pairing. It was very well written and not over exagerated, which I like. Great job and keep writing stories like these! MegsAuthor's Response: Thanks for the encouragement, Megs! I'm still a little hesitant about this story, partially because it's my first published response to a challenge, so it means a lot to me that you liked it. There were a few parts that I tried to tone down (they bordered on melodrama, to put it lightly), and I really hope my editing made a difference for you as a reader. Again, thank you for your kind words. Nothing makes me happier than a reader who leaves a kind review! Report Review
What a wonderful chapter! It was so hillarious, I was laughing and grinning through the whole thing. I could just picture everything happening and it was wonderful! Great job and keep writing! Megs Report Review
This was a wonderful chapter! It was so interesting and I really enjoyed reading it. Not only is Luna wonderfully written, but Tom... is as I imagined he would be. He is amazingly convincing, and I loved how you portrayed the headmaster!
Great job and keep writing! I look forward to more!
MegzAuthor's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you thought I did a good job with Luna and Tom, and that you like my take on Armando Dippet. Thanks for the review! Report Review
This is a very inspiring story. I really enjoyed reading it, the mysterious atmosphere and the way you wrote it was beatufiul. Not only was Hermione wonderfully in character but the feelings you showed were genuine., The way she felt sorry after what she did... excellent. I'm going to stop rambling now! It was awesome! MegsAuthor's Response: Thanks so much Megs! Eek! That review made me smile. See? * ^_^ * hee hee thanks so so so so so much! Report Review
This is very short, but that is not always a bad thing. Sometimes, when an author writes something short, it gets the message across that a story, no matter how short, or how long, can change how you think, or look upon a character. This was wonderful, full of depth and concentration that even a novel length story cannot conquer at times. Great job and please keep writing! Megs Report Review
Nice chapter, I especially like the end, it's sweet and simple. Great joba nd keep writing! Megs Report Review
This was such an enjoyable read, not only was it magnificiently written, but the story line, the love, the affection, was all so real and... magical. It made me realize that there is always something good inlife, not only did you make a story with happiness, but you showed that you should love life for all you have, and I just... I just... I love this! It was a truly amazing story, and every minute I spent reading it was wroth it. Thank you for writing this... it was beautiful! (Especially sing Maurader strories aren't my thing) but this... this has changed not only the way I read, but my outlook on... a lot of things! Thanks again, Megz Report Review
Wonderful chapter, I really enjoyed it and think you wrote it excellently. The sorting hat song was hillarious and Myrtle is still exactly how I imagined her to be! Great job! MegsAuthor's Response: Thanks, Megs! Glad you liked this chapter! =) Report Review
Intersting, and very creative! I really liked it, it was funny in places and seemed a lot like something the twins would do! I don't understand why she's asked him to come though? It just changes names! Anyway, great job! Megs Report Review
Lovely chapter! It was a great tie in that the boy is Amos, I enjoyed that twist. It was also written very well and you made her confusion very real, exactly how you think a child will react to something like that. Great job and your off to a great start, pm me when the next chapters up! MegsAuthor's Response: That's not a twist, that's my RP facts megs. (Keana is my RP character) That's how I know what she'll do in any circumstance...I've Rped as her for practically a year! I'll be sure to PM you, it's getting beta'd at the moment. ll-Merry Report Review
Nice chapter I really enjoyed it, can't wait till it gets happier! Keep writing, Megs Report Review
Ah... that was a very funny and cute chapter. I love how they fight, I had a constant smirk on my lips! Great chapter, Megs Report Review
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