i love this story, please update more! all your twists were fantastic! i really want to hear kasia's explanation and this hypnotic (no pun intended) aura sorrel has! Report Review
only two words come to mind when i finished reading this story...absolutely amazing! i have always been a huge fan of your stories (especially hippogriff fever!)
i can't wait to read thin ice!
~cloverAuthor's Response: Aw thank you so much! I'm glad you like my work! Thin Ice should be out today!
~Lauren Report Review
i have to say i was so surprised to see my name on the list, i am truly honored! in case i haven't told you before, i love your story. and i espeically admire the change of POVs. usually when i read a story that changes points of view with out labeling who's pov it is at the beginning of each chapter, i get confused. however, with your story i follow along each time and understand which character it is immediately. this is probably cuz i feel as though you have definitely developed your characters well.
update soon! (which you are very good at doing)
~cloverAuthor's Response: samitaclover,
No problem, love. You deserve to be on that list! :D And thank you so much, it really means a lot when people say that. I'm glad you think I've developed the characters enough to switch POVs without telling their names, that is a really huge compliment.
I will! Report Review
oh my gosh! that was the funniest piece of literary work i have ever read!...i fell off my chair laughing especially whenever Sirius talked.
Great Job! Just to let you know that I also love all of your other stories as well. Your a fantastic writer, and you never disappoint me!
Thanks for adding humor to my life today!
~clover Report Review
REALLY REALLY well written!
Update soon! can't wait for more
~cloverAuthor's Response: samitaclover,
THANK YOU SO MUCH! Heh heh. I will(: Report Review
this chapter was really good because there was more dialogue between rose and Scorpius...you make the reader really feel connected with rose which I like even though I have never been in her position
keep up the great writing!
and i LOVE the quick updates!
~cloverAuthor's Response: samitaclover,
Really good constructive review, so thanks for that(: I'm glad that you like the dialogue and I'm really glad that you can feel connected with her:D Report Review
1st review for the final chapter! yay! but i am so sad at the same time for your story ending...you are an amazing, fantabulous writer!
your writing is full of vivid imagery, descriptions, and literary tools which you use perfectly to convey your story...and needless to say that many writers cannot write the way you write, which is sad because many of them get published...unlike you who definitley deserves to be known for your wonderful writing techniques...basically i'm trying to say that your writing DEFINITELY stands out (in a good way!)
my favorite character(s) were remus and james...of course i loved mary, sirius, and lily but I think you gave a dimension to the other characters to make them stand out!
and i am so excited for the sequel, because it will give a more indepth look on lily/james and the hopefully the after effect of mary's death on the long term.
again, i am so happy that you have finished this novel, but am sad at the same time to see it finished...i wish you the best of luck as you (hopefully) keep on writing...and i definitely hope you get published one day...making you famous...and rich!
hopefully i'm still the first review even though i wrote so much!
~cloverAuthor's Response: Waahheyy for you and your 1st review :D
I expected to feel sadder about this comming to an end. I expected to have a longer wait for the last chapter to be validated - but this literally went through the queue within an hour. It was madness!
Thank you soo much! My writings improved so much since the beginning, and I guess I'm so much... well, I'm way better now, but all these compliments and stuff still shock me a little bit :)
Ahha I went ott with my characters I feel, they're all so. way developed, but hey! These things happen :)
I'm pretty excited about the sequel, I have four/five chapters written already - which I think is pretty good!
I am really happy that I've finished it, because ever so often when I'm like "Oh I want to be a writer so much, buut... I'VE NEVERE FINISHED A STORY!!!" *wails* but. I have now! No more excuses, I guess... :D
(Getting published... woah, that would be absolutely AMAZING, I wouldn't be so bothered about being famous and rich though, but stil. :D )
Thank you so much! :D Report Review
I AM SO HAPPY! not only because i get to write the first review for the final chapter but also because this chapter was PERFECT! and i loved the way you ended it. you are just a GREAT writer, i'm really sad that the story ended up at the same time I thought it was funny, happy, dramatic, and romantic at the same time.
the funniest part was definitley when pansy and blaise were electrocuting themselves (hahaha)...and my god i am in love with your blaise because he has kept me laughing throughout your whole story!...but of course i loved the part when draco ran to his mommy for help (lol)...i would definitley do the same if i was in his situation :)
anyway...i'm rambling now and I hope someone didn't beat me in sending the first review. but again i love your writing...and i think i will go as far to say that i love you (jklol).
keep on writing!
~clover Report Review
I AM SO EXCITED THAT YOU UPDATED! ITS BEEN SUCH A LONG TIME!
please please please keep on writing this story!
~clover Report Review
i just want to tell you that you are an AMAZING writer! this is the first time in a while that i found a story that is so good and well written as your's! the character development is fantastic and the plot line is perfect!
please please please UPDATE SOON!
~clover (your new #1 fan...lol)Author's Response: Thank you :) I'll update asap, so stay tuned. Thanks for the review and I'm glad you like it :) Report Review
AMAZING!!! i hope you know you are one of my favorite-est writers! i immediately fell in love with this story as soon as i read the summary!
p.s. can you put up the "hippogriff fever" banner? i never got a chance to see what it looked like and the story is on my top 10 list (inside my head...lol).Author's Response: Aw thank you so much :) And I don't know what happened to the banner, somehow the link was broken and I no longer have the banner :( But thank you for having it on your top 10!!! Head or not, it counts! :P
~LB Report Review
really good start! i like the idea of your story...but i think that it needs to flow better.
i feel as though you are running and jumping through scenes...also it wouldn't hurt to maybe describe the main character and what she thinks about the other characters
~cloverAuthor's Response: thanks i will try to incorperate your ideas and i think i will completely rewrite chapter 2 Report Review
YOU ARE AMAZING! IT WAS PERFECT!
~cloverAuthor's Response: I'M AMAZING? Thank you so much. Sometimes, I tend to forget, haha. Report Review
OMG! i am bubbling with happiness right now!
p.s. i love the the idea about the flowers not dying!Author's Response: There's a joke about how you give someone you like flowers and you're like "now watch these die" so I went around that, haha.
Glad you liked it. Thanks for reviewing! Report Review
THEY ARE FINALLY HAPPY! kinda lol
anyway, i am kinda confused about sirius and jules and when they got married, can you tell me the chain of events?
~cloverAuthor's Response: That actually is explained in the next chapter! So you can finally understand. Thank you for reviewing! Report Review
OMG OMG OMG! I have been WAITING for this since chapter uno!
p.s. brownie points for such a quick update!Author's Response: Yay! I get brownie points!
And I know a lot of people have been waiting for this particular chapter :p Report Review
HE DID IT! HE SAID THE 'L' WORD THAT EVERY GIRL WANTS TO HEAR!
UPDATE SOON! i need to know her reaction!
~cloverAuthor's Response: Hi again! Thanks for the review!
Yes, he said it. It took a lot of guts (and self-analysis, which for Sirius doesn't come easily) but he said it. I thought the timing was right, even if he was being selfish and manipulative at the time. Then again, I don't think that was OOC of him so it worked.
As for her reaction, well there's a hint to that in the previous chapter, though how that will play out in this context remains to be seen. *evil grin*
cheers, Mel Report Review
awww that was so sad at the end!
but i am glad remus asked dorcas, even though i secretly wished ivy would just let go of sirius and ask remus.
and before when remus was saying that slyvia was physically attractive, does that mean ivy isn't pretty? what does she look like? (like the picture on the banner?) and is she considered "pretty"?
UPDATE SOON! another fabulous chapter by the way. like always!
~cloverAuthor's Response: The battle of Ivy, Sirius, and Remus lasts for...a long time. Longer than you think actually...
And it isn't Ivy's not pretty or anything, it's more she has average looks. Her beauty comes from within (corny, I know) and it takes awhile to see it, rather than with Sylvia where it's basically BAM, BOOM, OMG, GORGEOUS. Ivy's not ugly at all, and she's rather pretty, but it's not immediately noticed. It takes awhile. She does kind of look like the banner, but I can't find anyone PERFECT for how I imagine her. I was saying today about how I wished I could draw people so I could make my own characters and people could see how I imagine them, but alas, I cannot.
I'm glad you liked it! Thanks for reviewing! Report Review
GO DOMINIQUE! this chapter was SO good!
and i wish hayes was MY boyfriend!!! wish the whole world was filled with men like hayes...lol
p.s. 10/10Author's Response: haha ME TOO. hayes is awesome. and hot. Report Review
awww. slyvia was so sweet! i am glad that you didn't portary her as the jealous (insanley bitchy) type of girl! its just goes to show that their are normal girls at hogwarts who like sirius...lol
can't wait for more!!!
your #1 fan
p.s. 10/10 and 5 gold starsAuthor's Response: Yeah, I don't like portraying the girlfriends (or...somewhat girlfriends) into evil characters just to make the main character seem like a perfect little angel. Nope, both of them have faults.
Thanks for reviewing! Report Review
alrite even though deebie is the main character...she is starting to really annoy me (but its a good thing...lol)
by the way...i am siding with sirius on the whole argument...i don't think debbie is being fair to him...but that is what makes your story so GREAT!!! because the readers have to pick who's side they are on!
and i really like the switching of the POV's
~cloverAuthor's Response: annoy you in a good way, hmm? haha, i know how youre thinking, she's just plain stupid! but by now she's kind of being the more forgiving one but since he hates her she's not going to be the one to make the effort, stubborn. anyway, im sticking to debbie for the time being POV-wise, but if/when it seems appropriate we may hear from Sirius again!
Thanks for reviewing, I'm glad you like the story! Report Review
AMAZING! like always!
xcept i got a bit confused because everything is in italics and usually you put the stuff in the past in italics and the stuff in the so called 'present' in regular
UPDATE SOON! gotta know what happens to sirius!
p.s. 10/10 and 5 gold stars!Author's Response: It's all intalics?! .I'll go take a look. I didn't notice that when i published it. I will update soon and fix that problem. Thank you for letting me now and reviewing! Report Review
such a great cliffie! but PLEASE update as soon as possible! i REALLY need to know what happens!...great chapter by the way...and its great how draco and astoria are so similar but they don't realize it...
p.s. 10/10 and 5 gold stars!Author's Response: Thank you!
You're the first to notice how similar they are... I'm glad to hear it! Report Review
congrats on ur 50th chapter!
and charlie's past is really interesting...it proves that every1 has problems!
~cloverAuthor's Response: Thanks for noticing the big 50 :D I won't be hitting anymore milestones with this story ... =/
And yes, everyone does have problems lol I can speak through personal experiences that are very present for me at the moment.
Update will be soon =) Report Review
great twist! and i'm really glad draco and astoria are getting along better!
~cloverAuthor's Response: Thank you!
Twists are fun... Report Review
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