I hope Larissa felt like absolute rubbish after that and seeing Daisy upset and knowing she had taken a child away from her mother and understood that what her and Kevin were doing was wrong and has split from him and is bring Daisy home.
Am I on the right track!?
OR the jury came to their senses and decided to change their mind.
I Love this story
-x-Author's Response: thank for your review! I'm sorry for the late in replying! I just updated (april 25) so you should be able to find out whether your guess is right or not ;) but I believe in happy endings.
I'm so glad you like this story! I love your thinking on what will happen! you're a great guesser and that's all I'll say. :)
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No no no no no no no no no no no no!
Don't let that happen :-( Please tell me you have a happy ending? That Natalie gets Daisy and Kevin gets a slap in the face. Or a hex!?
This made me cry :-(
-x-Author's Response: aw I'm sorry it made you cry! *hands tissues*. Don't worry, I am an author who believes in happy endings (most of the time). haha I would love to see Natalie slap Kevin again. lol. I'm going to update soon, don't worry! thanks for reviewing! Report Review
I Hope it is Larissa and she has come to say she is divorcing Kevin too!!! Haha. Please please please tell me this will have a happy ending!!! It is such a beautiful story and I want the characters to be happy :-)
Also, you should totally (once you are done, of course) write a one shot with Kevin. Just because I feel guilty hating him :-)
Your BIGGEST fan xxAuthor's Response: awww thank you so much! *blush* you're one of the sweetest fans I've ever had! :)
I won't say who it is.. you'll find out soon, I promise. I am an author who believes everyone deserves a happy ending but my lips are sealed as far as this story goes! I don't want to give it away! But you'll find out soon, I promise!
A one shot with Kevin would be interesting, though, I'm not sure what it would be about. I'll think about it! Thanks for reviewing! I'm going to update soon! Report Review
Took so long for them to be friends, when will they be **MORE** than friends!? Yeah, totally waving the Dora/Drake flag :-)
-x-Author's Response: Hehe, they're just THAT stubborn. :) The ice is finally broken. Better things are on their way for both of them, so don't worry. ;) Report Review
Now I feel like hurling cheese across the room. Can't wait to read more :-)
-x-Author's Response: Me, too, and in my imagination, only a few shins get bruised, hehheh.
I put the next chapter in right after this one posted, so I'm crossing fingers the one day wait still holds. Report Review
When you said it would be a surprise my first thought was that he was pregnant. Then i remembered the whole gender thing and decided someone else was pregnant. Haha. But wow, awesome chapter. Those Trackingballs would be soo freaky. Talk about making stalking easier.
But poor Molly :-(
-x-Author's Response: Not that kind of surprise! :D Oh yeah, they would absolutely make stalking easier, something Ron and George probably didn't consider before now. They'll be making some changes, I'm sure! Report Review
So. Much. Awesome. Now I am dying to know what message the owl has. Good? Bad? Scary? Evil? Haha.
And I can honestly say that the closest I have ever come to properly reading Pride and Prejudice is this story. I tried, once, but I just couldn't get past the first few pages. Haha.
-x-Author's Response: The film adaptations use the best lines/scenes from the book, so if you watch one (even the Keira Knightly version where the Mr. Darcy is NOT my idea of Mr. Darcy) it would almost be like reading Pride and Prejudice: the good parts edition. :D
I'll give you a hint about what Maleficus has brought. The chapter title is "Surprise" ;). Report Review
I hate Keven. Gosh. Soo mean. Natalie and George can get married and be all stable and stuff and then she can win the court case! And then live happily ever after!
-x-Author's Response: haha yes Kevin is really mean! I'm not sure what I'm going to do with the ending just yet but I won't give anything away! I'll update this week! :) Report Review
YAY! This freaking rocks. Such an epic start to a story :-)
-x-Author's Response: Thanks :D ! Report Review
And his name is Drake!? That is sooo cool. I thought Faldo was his first name. But Dora was so mean! And so was Faldo (he will always be Faldo). They should kiss and make up ;-)
-x-Author's Response: Hey! Thanks for reading and reviewing, as always. :D
Yes, his name is Drake. You can go back and read that in chapter number two, I think. :) And yes, that name is cool, lol. That's why I chose it. His full name is Drake Chilton Faldo. :) According to Dora, it sounds too pretentious, lol.
Yes, both Dora nad Faldo were very mean to each other. As for the making up part... don't miss the next chapter. ;) Report Review
Who is her brother!?!?!?!?!? I hope he is cool. And alive.
-x-Author's Response: lol. I love your reviews; they always make me laugh.
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Ef yes. This is without a doubt the most exciting story EVER. I have re-read all the chapters DYING for this one, and tadaaa!!! Here it is. Totally made my day.
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YES YES YES YES YES! They should most DEFINITELY give it a try!! And then they can get married and Kevin won't get Daisy!!!
-x-Author's Response: haha you got it all planned out don't you? We'll see what happens between them...but Kevin will be entering the picture fairly soon. ;)
I'll update soon, I promise! Thank you for reading and reviewing! Report Review
I hope they are nice to Scorpius :-)
-x-Author's Response: In the next chapter, I think he'll be happy if they're not hostile. :D
Thank you! Report Review
Yay someone who doesn't ignore Peter's existence! Haha. I really like that. He seems pretty awesome.
But yes, awesome chapter, and it was nice to see Kate with her adoptive parents. Can't wait for the next update!!!
-x-Author's Response: Yeah, I don't like it when Peter doesn't exist in a story either, or when he's portrayed as being very shady. I want to know why he was a Marauder and why he betrayed them, but then hesitated with Harry. (I don't know if I'll completely give a reason, but maybe at least an inkling as to a possibility.)
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing! Report Review
Yay an update!!!
This story rocks. I love how you have portrayed Lily, you have wonderful characterisation. Update again soon? Please?
Love this story so much :-)
-x-Author's Response: Thanks for the vote of confidence on my characterisation! I work hard to create unique characters, and I'm glad you like Lily, not many seem to.
I promise I'm working on the next chapter. :-)
Thanks again for the lovely review!
Gail Report Review
:-O Ohmigosh wow. Her mum was preggers!?!?!?!?!?!?!? Wow. Wow wow wow.
She should kick Desdemona's butt. What a horrible person. But did her mum have the baby!? Is the baby someone Nora knows!? Dying to know. Super excited for your next update!
-x-Author's Response: :D It all shall reveal itself in time. *spooky fingers* Did I sound like Trelawney? That's what I was going for. Yay-hoo! Thank you so much for reviewing! :) Report Review
Yay! Dying to read more. Like is Ann good or bad? Haha.
-x-Author's Response: Thank you so much, GreyLady! The next chapter will be posted soon. ^_^ Report Review
I think she should be bait. Haha. So excited for more!!! :-)
-x-Author's Response: :D
Yay! I know, that's so lame to just say 'yay', but that's what's in my head so that's what I type!
Yay again! Report Review
I still love it!!! So beautifully written, as always. Poor George. I just want to give him a hug.
-x-Author's Response: awww thanks hun! I am so glad you are still loving it!!! yes, poor George... I'd love to hug him too. He's my favorite Weasley. :)
thanks for the sweet review! I shall update shortly. :) Report Review
I like that you have made this story so dimensional. It is so lovely to read! Molly is mean though. Yes, she is doing what she thinks is best for Nora, but she should just lay off.
-x-Author's Response: Molly's nosy and meddling. If it weren't for her, Nora and Sirius could have gotten to third base by now!
:) Report Review
No!!! Stupid child services lady. Should hex her. I love this story soo much. :-)
-x-Author's Response: yes child services are ridiculous. I debated on having Natalie hex her or not... lol. I am thrilled you like the story so far! I'll update as soon as the queue reopens! :) Report Review
Crying again. You write so beautifully.
-x-Author's Response: awww. really? don't cry hun! I am glad you like the story so far! I hope you like the rest. Thanks for the sweet review! :) Report Review
Dora so has the hots for Faldo. She should forget about Louis.
But yes, LOVED this chapter. Totally your biggest fan :-)
-x-Author's Response: XD Dora is so confused right now, lol. Thanks! Aww, my biggest fan. Hug! :D
I'm writing the next chapter as we speak! It should be a fun one! ;) Or rather, a quite dramatic one. Intrigued? Lol. Keep reading! :D Report Review
Kick ass chapter. Now I am craving Pizza. Sooo much. Gosh. And lemonade. Pizza and lemonade. MMm.
-x-Author's Response: Thank you, and Merry Christmas a week early! I hope you go out for pizza soon, or make your own. I've never had fizzy lemonade, what they were drinking, but I just might go looking for it at an import store after your review. :) Report Review
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