I'm really glad I stumbled upon this story; it's quite original, and very funny. I've got a feeling I'll be reading it all the way through tonight...
10/10 so far!Author's Response: I'm really glad to have a review from you! :) And I'm additionally glad that you've found it funny, because sometimes I have a wonky sense of humor, in that a lot of people don't get it. So if something I've written is funny, well, I can assume I've accomplished something major! :D
Marathon reading is always acceptable. Again, thank you so much for taking the time to review -- I really do appreciate it! Hope to hear from you soon! ♥ Report Review
I keep checking obsessively to see if you've added a chapter yet...
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AMAZING. Truly. Thank you so much for updating so quickly!! And I mean, I understand about school if you have exams coming up or whatever, but pretty pretty please can you update soon again?!! You're killing us, here.
During this chapter, the reference back to Along Came Sirius with Adara got me thinking about how much improvement I see in your writing between then and now. It really is incredible. I mean, Along Came Sirius was lovely, but I see quite a lot of development in your style and a much better command of your writing.
This story is definitely among my top five favorites ever on harrypotterfanfiction. Keep up the good work. And keep writing; you're a true talent. Report Review
Absolutely hilarious, and very cute. I loved it! Report Review
This was such a lovely story! It was just the perfect length; you may have turned me into a novella fan.
Keep up the good work!! :)Author's Response: The story didn't need to be long, the characters were slightly stubborn, it was supposed to quick and sweet.
Thanks! ♥ Report Review
SO GOOD! Pleasepleaseplease update soon, because I'm DYING to read more... James is so dumb, they just need to break up. AHH it's killing me!!!
Anway, love it. Love you. Report Review
... Grr. I've been checking this compulsively to see if the new chapter's up but it's not yet!!! It's taking too long to get through the stupid queue!!
Ps. I love this story so much :) Report Review
i personally like the switching points of view. it spices it up a bit. and the story is TOTALLY worth sticking with!! don't mention abandonment ever again! the only thing that needs abandoning is elizabeth. by james. because all this tension is getting to me! RAH! tension! relieve it, PLEASE! Report Review
when are you going to alleviate the aggy/potter tension?!?!?! it's driving me crazy!! I get so stoked every time a new chapter of clash is up (and they're all AMAZING, don't get me wrong) but it's like... ugggh you write the whole tension thing so well!!!
anyway, thanks for updating so quick.
andd the quote that had me peeing myself:
"Pratface Douchepants and the giant pimple on the face of my life"
PERFECT description. aah i love it. 10/10 as always. Report Review
Oh. my. gosh.
I thought I'd just let you know that I am completely hooked by this story... and i may or may not have stayed up until 2am reading it last night... but that's not important.
Anyways, this is the first time i've ended a chapter and not rushed onto the next one because i wanted to know what happens so badly!! haha. So i thought i'd drop a review to make up for all the chapters i didn't review so far. So here goes:
This is AMAZING!! I absolutely love the way you portray all the characters, but especially Rose. I identify with her personality a lot- not that i'm pregnant- just often the way she responds to things sounds a lot like something I would say. She's a great heroine- cynical, sarcastic, but not so bitchy that you can't love her at the same time. :)
The way you write and describe things shows a lot of insight and truth to life. Despite the whole fantasy world, you make it realistic because of how the characters interact and such. I really like how you show the whole big family aspect. The way the Weasley's act around each other is so true! I dunno if you have a humongous family like that, but it's totally how you describe it- everyone in eachother's business and on their nerves, but so close at the same time.
You also have a great ability to not get wrapped up in details and keep the story moving, which is something I struggle with in my own writing. So kudos to that, i guess. haha
I'm totally in love with your story. It's addicting, funny, juicy, clever, and actually interesting on an intellectual level (which can't be said about the many fluff stories i may indulge in reading/writing sometimes... heh heh)
Well, this has become too much like a love letter, so i'm gonna go now, before i make a complete idiot out of myself fawning over this story. God, I never write reviews this long!!
But, I definitely wish I'd started reading this sooner. You're a fantastic author and I'll be reading more of your stories from now on, so keep up the good work!
XOXO Report Review
how bogus. hmm.
anyway, it was amazing, as usual. I loved the shrink and the angsty moment, but you don't need to know about that because now i'm officially mad at the too-short chapter and unfair cliffhanger.
So im going to go sulk now.
10/10 if you update soon! :)Author's Response: Hahaha, I'm sorry! Will a super fast update cheer you up? Hint hint nudge nudge...
Thanks for the review! Report Review
"the day I saw the school counselor was the day Filch started his career as a professional underwear model - a.k.a. never"
"Hey! I'm potty-trained and I have a basic understanding of the English language. What more do you want?"
the best for sure!! You updated so fast! I'm stoked.
God, I keep waiting for something to happen with Agatha and Potter and it's not!! ughh!! it's frustrating!
10/10 as always :) Report Review
uhh, i think some of your chapters got switched around. Cuz I definitely read about the dance off before the chapter that im pretty sure goes before it... and then i started reading this one and i was really confused. So i'm gonna go read Kidnapped First Years before i come back and read this.
Yeah, so you might want to switch those back around... unless im just completely stupid and don't know what im talking about. It happens sometimes, haha
Well, it was awesome as far as i read, other than the obvious mix up.
10/10 as always!Author's Response: Oh brother! Not another mix up! Well... I'l try to fix it, all right? I'm really sorry! And thanks for telling me, and liking anyways! Report Review
"Oh for the love of Merlin’s sooty underpants"
aahaha. I laughed for that one.
And about the Anti-Valentine's Day thing, I totally agree with you.
10/10 as always!Author's Response: Thanks! Yeah, v-day. not the best day on the pleanet for single people... sigh. Report Review
WHOOP WHOOP!! I love it!
10/10Author's Response: AWESOME! Thank you!:) Report Review
amazing, as always.Author's Response: Thanks! Posting more tonight! :) Report Review
Ohh!! They're going out! I'm stoked.
Okay, so I think it's really cool how Britney and Lily communicate with the wind and all that. Yeah, it's awesome.
And the cute sunrise moment!! ahhh!!! When will she finally realize that she loves him!?!?!Author's Response: Not quite! Glad you like though! :)
Yeah, I love that part. i wish I could talk to my friends like that... SIGH. lol
Sunrises rock! SHe'll find out... eventually!:) Report Review
Sirius and Britney... oh, man.
10/10Author's Response: Arent they adorable though?! Thank you! :) Report Review
"Acio the pants James Potter and Sirius Black are wearing!"
I was rolling on the floor, I swear. ahaha
What the crap is wrong with Bellatrix? what a bogus move. But Lily was sooo bad ass, so it's all good.
Love it, as always! 10/10Author's Response: I know! They totally got the boys on that move!
Bellatrix is just... well, Bellatrix! Lily's to tough to be taken down by HER though!
thank you! :) Report Review
AHAHAAA!!! I love girl nights!
"We stuffed chocolates into all of our pockets, our sports bras, our waistbands, two huge sacks, a couple of random battered back packs, and Holly and Rose refilled their mouths."
- sooo true! haha
i love it :DAuthor's Response: The more chocolate the better- there is no such thing as enough! :D
thanks! :) Report Review
I would just like to let you know that I've been reading this story and I LOVE IT!!! I've just been reading and reading and I hadn't thought to stop and leave a review! ahh! I'm hooked.
I can't believe more people aren't reading this! It's really good so far. I love the plot, and I love the way you write! You capture Lily and Sirius and James and all them perfectly.
The only regret I have is that I haven't had time to read the whole thing yet! AHH!!
So from one author who gets barely any reviews to another who deserves more, this is me encouraging you to keep being amazing! :D
10/10Author's Response: Hello!
I'm glad you decided to read my story- I love any reviews and readers I can get, and I like entertaining you people! :)
SO I'm really glad to hear you're hooked!
Thank you! I guess you could say i have my own style of writing. ANd i hope more people do read, but i'm so greatful for the readers i do have! Thank you so much- i write them the way I envision they must have been, is all, and I try to get the way everyone else might see them, too.
Well, you have all the time i can give you! SO read on! And thank you! i'll come and check out some of your stuff now- we all deserve reviews, and I'll give you some!:)
Thank you! Report Review
WHAT?!?! I can't believe you're just leaving it like that!! Man, if you're gonna do a cliffhanger that big then you'd better update fast!!! ah!! I wanna know what happens!!Author's Response: Hahaha, I'm so sorry but I couldn't resist. Thank you for the review! Report Review
i don't even know what to say. it was so good!!! i love your take on a love story because there are so many that are just sappy and corny- this one is perfect.
20,000/10Author's Response: Aw, thank you! I'm glad all the fluff overload wasn't too overwhelming--I was worried it would be. Thanks for taking the time to review! Report Review
Oh!! So cute!!
Millie is my favorite musical.
Anyhow, good job.
10/10Author's Response: Thanks so much! I really appreciate it :] Report Review
I wish there was more!!!
I know this one's on hiatus, but the idea is really cool...
So if a little encouragement would help you keep writing, I will give you, uh, cookies!
Oodles of cookies! :)
(So pretty pretty please write some more!)Author's Response: I will try and chew out a second chapter for this by the end of the month, but thank you so much for your support (and cookies!). Report Review
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