That was sweet. I wonder what'll happen when McGonagall figures out neither of them slept in their dorm rooms!

Author's Response: Ahaha I was considering writing a sequel like that! Thanks for reviewing!

 Report Review

That was something. From the books, I remember how difficult it is for Harry to deal with crying girls and you changed that here, making him more understanding and empathetic than in the books. I'm surprised that she feels so strongly, even in the middle of her breakdown. I'm most struck by Hermione's belief that she could kill someone, even by accident. It's a very different take.

 Report Review

I have to say, I'm a little confused. What I got from it was that Hermione is having trouble identifying with her old friends - she can't relate to them the way she used to and she can't really explain her school and life at Hogwarts to them. I don't think I entirely understood the last section with relation to Harry. It was interesting, but I think the second part should be clarified - especially since you listed it as H/Hr and why you did that isn't entirely clear.

 Report Review

That was fascinating. I'm not sure about Ron standing outside the tent while Harry and Hermione do whatever, but it was an interesting read.

Author's Response: Thanks! I wanted to do something a little different with Ron this time, rather than have him run off. So he stayed to keep watch outside the tent.

 Report Review

That was certainly different. I'm at a loss for words.

 Report Review

LOL It would make more sense, Harry? Cute and funny. I'm surprised Ginny didn't come to investigate too.

 Report Review