This entire story is so unique and adorable. It makes me want to hug it (and Ranny) every time. I absolutely love fairy tales (just not at the extent that Ranny does, which makes me really wish I did) and to see Ranny bring them to life is nothing short of incredible.
Although, to be honest, I still have it somewhere, in the back of my heart, a little flame of hope that Ranny will end up with Scorpius. The beginning was filled with Ranny and Scorpius and it just made my heart completely fall for the Malfoy boy. (Besides, the whole RosexScorpius thing is pretty overdone I find.)
I'm curious to see what Perry will do and if there is any truth to what Jack is saying about Maleficent.
Hope you feel better soon! I can't wait to read your new stories as well.Author's Response: Thank you for the review, I'm so glad that you're enjoying this! I'm sorry it's taken me so long to get back to you, life's gotten in the way :)
I love writing Ranny; I guess in a way, doing as such is my way of trying to outlet how much I love them, but I'm not as dedicated as her either.
Haha, you're not the only one. I do have to point out though, as said in a couple of reviews actually, that Scorpius is simply the 'gay best friend' completely over-stereotyped thing. I'm sorry to say that there won't be a relationship between the two that is anything more than platonic.
I do love to write him though, I really, really do.
Actually, I have to agree with you; I adore them both, but storylines are getting overdone; although, if there's a good story, there's a good story, and I can't not read it! ;)
Thank you again, I hope that you enjoy the next chapter! I am feeling a lot better, thank you! :) Report Review
Aww, that was a bittersweet ending. I really liked this story and the way you developed the characters, especially how Sirius slowly warmed up to Eliza. I would love for a sequel where Eliza and Sirius meet back up and she ends up remembering. =3Author's Response: aww. thanks! i'm glad you liked the ending, even if it wasn't what we wanted! I'm not sure about a sequel. maybe if i get really bored or lovesick one day! Report Review
That was really good, I felt like crying. I really like how you put it in Remus' point of view because he kept going on about how Mary was ruining everyone's life. Except my own sadistic mind was hoping for you to write about how Lily was overwhelmed with guilt because it was kind of her fault that Mary fell. =P
Oh, if you search up "the Art of Breathing Harry Potter" in Google, your story should be the first thing that pops up.
Can't wait for the next chapter!Author's Response: Everyone seems to be talking about googling my story as of late! I typed in 'the art of breathing story' and I think it came up - it was V. exciting, I'm not gonna lie.
I liked Remus's pov, and I thought it was kind of neccesary, so I'm glad you didn't just think it sucked or anything... ahh, Lily did feel bad, Remus just wasn't present at her little breakdown, that's how she ended up crying on Sirius...
Thanks for reivewing :D Report Review
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