aww Jonell! You almost made me cry! (and you know how hard that is xD) Loved it, 10/10!Author's Response: JAMES i killed youre son and name sake of course lol
comeover we need to write one!!
hugs hugs, youre freind Jew
ps. you made my day Report Review
oh my god! I love Aidan, and I love this story! I was upset because the baby was a boy, because I lost a bet (with pretty frickin high stakes), but now I don't mind. I will happily *sob* surrender the right to naming my first born child to Nell! (There, I wrote it, happy?)
Anyway, you did a great job with Scorpius and Rose, and you managed to untangle the confusing Weasly family tree and create an amazing story out of it!
I worship you and your writing! (even your lack of gender choosing skillz) :D
LPAuthor's Response: Aw, sorry you lost the bet...if I won that bet I'd make you name it Jamima Puddleduck (for a girl) or Cornelious Frazzlebottom (for a boy). Just some ideas for your friend! Thanks so much for all of your reviews! Report Review
lol, me and one of my friends are betting on the gender too! She says it'll be a boy, I say girl. The winner gets to name the losers first born child. And yes, we'll remember.
great chapter! I think Hugo's a great choice for godfather. Report Review
Woah, that's weird. How did Harry get the book anyway?Author's Response: Hmmm, I don't know how he got the book. Just use your imagination =] Report Review
wow... that was random! Me and my friends invented a house called Slytherclawgryffinpuff about 3 years ago, so this reminds me of us. :DAuthor's Response: LOL thank you!
Aww, that's neat!
I'm glad my story brought back some fun memories for you!
Thanks for reviewing!
-Nicole Report Review
Okay, I just realized something. I've been reading this story since chapter 2 and I've NEVER left a review! So, this is my review for everything so far. :)
I really like Mercy's character. She has this imperfection about her which really makes me like her. For some reason, she reminds me a bit of Scarlett O'Hara from Gone With the Wind.
I think it's really cute how she kissed Remus. I absolutely loved that part! Him being a werewolf and her being a vampire might cause some problems though.
I feel so bad for Mercy having to drink the blood of rats. Eeeew! I wouldn't be able to handle it. But then again, would I even be able to handle being a vampire?
I kind of knew that the Marauders wouldn't just ditch Mercy after finding out about her. Did Peter know before, or did he just get a bad vibe around her, or what? I find it hard to believe that he would discover something before the rest of them.
Sooo, that's my review.
LPAuthor's Response: Thanks for reviewing! I've never actually read or seen Gone With the Wind, so I'm not sure about Mercy.
The reason Peter knew about her was because he was the rat that got away when she was "feeding". Thank you again, LP! Report Review
“The Cruciatus curse,” proposed Longbottom.
How ironic that it was Neville who said that one! Anyway, great chapter. It's almost better than fish sticks. yum!
LPAuthor's Response: YES! I am so glad someone picked up on that. I had Neville say that on purpose, just for the irony of it. Golad you caught on. :D Report Review
OMG IT'S THE CREEPY GUY AND HE'S GONNA RAPE HER!!
Sorry about that, but caps seemed appropriate. :) PLEASE update soon, I'm in love with this story!Author's Response: OMG YES YOU ARE TOTALLY RIGHT!
thanks for the review!
xxx Report Review
*gags* Snape? When you could have picked ANY other character! lol Report Review
Great chapter! Umm, 8 seats?!
Hey Nellie, do you have a beta? If not, I can just edit stuff for you at school if you want.
Shannon is up, so pleeezzz review!
~Lauren Report Review
lol, I really didn't see that coming. Cloning freaks me out, but this story is really good. btw, how far into the future did they go, because they are still Hogwarts age so it doesn't make much sense.Author's Response: Thanks. And they are only 2 years into the future, not like 276784 years, haha :P Report Review
umm, wow. just wow... Report Review
And the plot thickens! dun dun dun...Author's Response: LOL! :P Report Review
lol, random much? :) Report Review
Ok, you are officially going on my faveorite authors list. *click!* Great ending.Author's Response: Thank you so very much!! Report Review
OMG that was absolutely brilliant! I just discovered this story, though I wish I had sooner. I can't WAIT to find out what happens. :)Author's Response: Thank you so much! Sorry, there's no more though :( Report Review
OMG that is so ausome and original! Never seen anything like it. I really liked it, but the last line kind of ruined it a bit.
Halfway through when I saw this line: "A brilliant flash of fire appeared at her table, and disappeared just as quickly, leaving a thick envelope and a phoenix feather behind.", it made me think for a moment. I thought: well maybe when Dumbledore leaves letters a pheonix feather is a kind of symbol or something to mark it as his, so that means OMG HE PLUCKS FEATHERS FROM FAWKES! Duh. I then realized that Fawkes probobly delivered it.
Sorry that I couldn't say anything important, but reviews arn't really my thing. Anyway, you just BROUGHT the ausomeness, so be proud. :)Author's Response: Thank you!!
I hope it would mean Fawkes delivered it; Fawkes is too awesome to have his feathers plucked, lol. ((Now I'm picturing Dumbledore plucking feathers off of random birds...))
You actually did. I'm having a lot of trouble with that last line, which I didn't really like from the beginning, so I've changed it, a little, and am hoping that took away at least some of the ruin-ness of it.
Thank you!! Report Review
Wow, that's really sad. For some reason, my reviews suck today so please excuse the few short sentences. It was really good. :)Author's Response: Thanks. And no problems, mine are even worse : ) Report Review
o crap shes gonna kill the gryffie whores. Report Review
OMG!! *favorites* 10/10Author's Response: Ta Report Review
I'm so happy that she has Remus, cause it seems like it would be hard for her to cope with it all without him. lol, fighting with Dumbledore! I love it. 10/10, cause I absolutely adore this story!Author's Response: Absolutely, Remus is her rock- she's pretty temperamental, and Remus is her leg to stand on when they pull th wheelchair out from under her.
As for the fighting.. I totally laughed when I thought about that. I can just imagine the scene in my head, and it's some pretty awesome stuff.
10/10? Hooray, I feel so very loved! I'm glad you liked it, and thank you so much for reviewing!
♥Rini Report Review
I normally don't like slash too much, because it kind of goes against what I believe in, but this was really good. I think you really captured Sirius's character and emotions, and I like the way you portrayed James. 9/10Author's Response: thank you! i'm fairly liberal, but my family is hardcore catholic, so i really appreciate you viewing this objectively and taking the time to respond. i'm glad even if you don't believe in it you didn't immediately dissmiss the story because of that. Report Review
This was you're best one, aside from Remus's. That one made me cry. This one really explains though, how he could be such a backstabber, that he just made a wrong decision saving his own neck. You are a brilliant writer, just so you know. :)Author's Response: i'm glad you like this one (and Remus - no one really reviewed that one to my dismay!) Peter was always going to be a troubling one to do and i'm glad so many people like it, i'm glad that it explained what i wanted it to! thanks for your compliments - they're way too flattering for someone of my callibre.
love SF Report Review
lol polyjuice potion! I was suspecting it the entire time and I actually finally got a prediction right! Ooh, I really need to find out what happens next. Lily will be mortified.Author's Response: haha yay i'm glad you got it :]
mortified is right... plus she's super pissed! gotta love that redhead temper lol Report Review
Oh wow, that's really interesting! I was just wondering what book this takes place in. I was assuming DH, but just to be sure. :) PLEASE continue with this story.Author's Response: well it's post hogwarts the trio should be about 24 years old! thanks for the review and ill try to post next chapter soon! Report Review
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