OMG!! IT'S AWESOME! I LOVE REMUS LUPIN! Author's Response: Thank you so much. (And so do I !) Report Review
Omg! I can't wait until you are finished with Remus' story! Remus Lupin Rocks My Socks!!Author's Response: Mine too -- he's my favorite character. Remus's chapter is waiting for validation right now. I'm hoping it will go up late this week or during the weekend.
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Oh My Gosh. This is so sick nasty! It's great!! WHy Neville, my hero! Oh that just made me love him more!!Author's Response: Yep, me too. Report Review
WOW!! This story is bloody brilliant!! Please make more!!!Author's Response: thanks, I will. Report Review
This is extremely addicting!! Good Job!!Author's Response: thanks. Report Review
Constructive Critiscim: There are a lot of spelling errors, punctuation errors, too. Add detail. Make the reader want to keep reading. Sorry, but you lost me when Lily came back after going back to the castle. Later.Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'll try to fix the errors and add more to it! :) Report Review
That was very good! Please, make another story following this! Perhaps, and this is a suggestion, Remus and Daisy go to Hogwarts and they stay too late, on THE night! (Wink Wink). Later!!Author's Response: Thank you so much! I may continue this in the furture, so your positive review is very encouraging! (: Report Review
Wow! I laughed at this one! Please! make more chapters!! This is really good! Please, a request, could you put more Remus Lupin in the story? You don't have to if you don't want to! It's your story!Author's Response: Thank you very much for your complements. I love hearing that people enjoy what I do.
Each chapter will be from the point of view of a different character. This one was Sirius, the next will be James, and the third will be Remus. (My favorite character too). Report Review
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