ARRRGH

My first thought. How could James be such a prick?
D:
And no hurting Ellie. That's not cool.

I'm not to rambly today. I think my argh suffices as how i feel. ;D
I love this as usual. ;D

Katie.

Author's Response: Hehehe. . . but hurting Ellie is fun! She can be so annoying sometimes.

And I love the Argh. It made me think of a pirate and pirates are all that is amazing in this world. :)

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I can't believe I havent reviewed yet.
Well, I can. I've been busy
As usual I loved this chapter; Remus is cute.
I think Ellie should just slap Peter.
Hard. Knock him out for a few days, or weeks, or months. Possibly years.
Kay, that isn't happening -- but a girl can hope.
Can't wait for more!!
Katie

Author's Response: Hahahaha. . . Yeah, I second the suggestion that she should just hit Peter, but that probably won't be happening for a while (if ever). She can't really afford to make anymore enemies than she already has.

And yeah, I've always thought Remus was a very sensitive and sweet person, so I wanted to try and show that in this chapter.

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Awwh, I am so mad at Lily. Stupid girl. DX
How could she think that Ellie would ever want to hurt her.
Gr.

I've decided you are so lucky your a trusted author - I could kill this site. Ive been trying to get a chapter validated forever, It rejected me twice for not being "mature" only to tell me it needed a language warning. They never said that. I'm like ready to avoid HPFF but, Lineage is definitely a reason not too. : D The usual love.
I had a question all planned out for Ellie, and I forgot it. D :
Makes me sad.
10/10 As always

I'm just so mad at Lilly. >:K
Like, How can she be so, arg.
And just... stupid red head temper.
I'm glad the boys are being all protective though
and the ever horny Siri is always fun.
I'm thrilled to be back at Hogwarts - the family stuff was getting me down. Some marauder pranks to cheer Ellie (and me(!)) up? :D
So if there are 11 more to go, that means it's like half way done. Depressing thoughts.
Sequel in the midst? That would make me uber happy. :D
K, im going to go now.
And i promise no more reviews at midnight - they're far too odd.
teehee
~Katie

Author's Response: But Katie, reviews at midnight are twice as entertaining because they're odd! :)

And yeah, I won't lie, but if I were in Lily's position I'd be angry too. Looking at it from her perspective, she feels like if she distances herself from Ellie a bit it may help protect her family in the future. To be honest though, Lily is just completely terrified of what could have happened and she's reacting more out of fear than a real hatred of Ellie and her family.

And yeah, only 11 chapters left. I am planning on writing a sequel to the story, but I need to flesh out an actual plot line that would be both believable and entertaining.

Being given Trusted status was definitely a blessing. I love not having to wait in the queue, but it also means that if I don't update when I promise to that I don't have the excuse of "well, the chapter didn't get validated yet." I usually just put a mature rating onto my stories in case I do wind up using swears or anything slightly risque.

And thanks for the compliments! :)

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Ellie, you go girl!
That's the thought that is consuming my brain.
This was... amazing, I really didn't see this coming.
Awesome job Anders. xD

I'm working out a question to ask Ellie about this, when I get the wording right I'll tell you. If you don't mind another question.
~Katie

Author's Response: Of course I don't mind. As for Ellie, well, she really has no say in the matter. :)

And yeah, when I was planning the story this was sort of the central change in the plot and her character that will wind up affecting a lot of other things in the chapters to come. Besides, I like throwing curve balls at my readers.

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Much better the JKs.
loved it.
The muggle on the train and the doctor Who references. Definately made me smile. XD

Author's Response: We thought so too :) and we're glad you liked it. We wanted a way to tie up all the loose ends and you gotta love David Tennant.

Thanks for the review...

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So, this review starts out harsh, but I have to be honest. It get's better. I promise xD

I'm pretty sure I am going to be alone in this; but I have to say it.
I can not, and I repeat can NOT stand Allegra. I think she is the downfall of this story. She, as a character hasn't aged in a while. She's been at the same level for a while. She is also spoiled. Parents of three would not treat a child like that, she should be throwing tantrums, and being punished. Leaving the story because she was going to cry? Horrible. How does anyone get anything done. Then she got rewarded, by getting chocolate. She knows she can get away with stuff and seriously, if I could I would yell at her parents. Shes such a spoilt brad that needs to grow up. Yes, shes young - but that doesn't means she should get EVERYTHING her heart desires.

I love pretty much everything else. Not greatly fond of your naming, they go from really elebrate to, plain jane. But Terese is awesome, one of my favorite O/Cs. Sirius is such a cutie and James how I loveth thy James. He's just perfect. Tonks is my hero. I love her, both Cannon and yours. You write her awesomely. Maybe she should fall a bit more ;D.

I'm going to get critical again, but only a bit.
What the heck is going on with Voldy? Death eaters are around, and there are occasional attacks, but what is he up to? What's Dumbledore doing? How is the war waging? It feels like, too much focus is being put into the family life, and not enough, outside of it. Speaking of outside the family who is Steven's Girlfriend?? Did he get with Gabrielle? I hope so, shes a cutie.

Well I'm going to stop now. Overall, I think this story is wicked, and besides my dislike of Allegra, and confusion about the war, I have nothing else that is negative. Your writing style, grammer, all great. I am definately moving on to your other stories now.

Sorry this is so long, but at 111 chapters, you deserve my full input. Even though I am just a humble writer, I think everyones opionions count. Free speach for the WIN!

~Katie

also, normally Im a lot more fun-centric and like to joke, tonight I wanted to seriously review and tell you how I felt.

(9/10

Author's Response: Wow! I appreciate your honesty. Ok where to begin with the reponse; Allegra. She is mainly a comedy thing, with her parents sense of humour. She\\\'s a caricature of various children I know or have seen. And she is spoilt but I have tried to make it clear that they know.

I\\\'m glad you like James, as he\\\'s based on a member of my family. And I love Terese, I have enjoyed creating her, and Sirius... well I\\\'m not sure where he came from to be honest. Tonks is just fun. I do love her. I haven\\\'t put too much of the war in because I\\\'m hopeless at writing stuff like that to be honest. And family is the main focus of all the characters, so it is strong in the story. Steven is very private; and he knows his mother might not react well to another girlfriend.

I appreciate your honesty, and I\\\'m sorry that there are some aspects you don\\\'t like, but pleased there are some you do.
Thank you.

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-snarle-
Seriously. Not Lily. (By the way, I started to write Siriusly)
Okay, now I am really hating Ellie's father. Screw this don't betray him crap and go to the police.
Her best friend? Oh EM Gee.
Oh I have decided that If I were ever to be a witch, I am so a half blood. xD... like I would get the choice.

Definately an awesome chapter, even though some of the content was not awesome.
You never stop amazing me with your talent.
~Katie

Author's Response: I write \\\"siriusly\\\" instead of \\\"seriously\\\" all the time. And Ellie had a difficult time with it because she has had it drilled into her for so many years that you don\\\'t betray the family no matter what. Sort of like a form of brain washing in my opinion.

And being a half-blood would be cool. You\\\'d get to do magic, but you could astound and amaze your magical friends with your muggle knowledge (especially Mr. Weasley).

And thanks for the compliment! I don\\\'t think I\\\'m too arrogant, but it\\\'s always nice to have a little ego boost.

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Hiya.
I love this story. It's awesome.
I am just slightly confused on the sequal(s). How does the order go? Or are they all seperate from eachother?
Soon im going to be starting Lost... and found? and im excited.
-Katie

Author's Response: Thank you :)
Lost...and Found is the canon sequal; All is not lost is an au sequal and Found again is aualternate ending to prisoner of azkaban. Hope that helps.

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Great chapter. xD
I don't think I like Ellies family too much. :-/ I dunno, Quinn's cool though.
Ben meh, Siri's coolier.
She got a Howler for dating? LAAME. Dx
~Katie

Author's Response: I actually did know someone once who wasn\\\'t allowed to even hang out with boys because of her religion. Her parents were from another country and were really strict about it, which is kind of where I got the idea for this from.

::Grins:: Lets just say that Ellie\\\'s parents are. . . uh. . . very strict. And yeah, Sirius is pretty awesome (and Quinn too! I find him hysterical).

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I'm kinda tearing up a bit.
It was amazing. the flash backs - awesome. wished there was one with Bob though. I lvoe bob.

I don't even know what to say, im speachless. The last few lines gave me goosebumps.

Just. Awesome.
best.story.ever.written.

now im off to read chapter 1 of THE SEQUAL! and then harry potter 7 cause im cool like that. xD

Love it ~ Katie

Author's Response: I figured I already had a Bob flashback . . . A second might be overkill, you know?

Speechless? I'll take that as a good thing.

Wow! Best story ever written. That makes me feel QUITE good. So, thank you! :)

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-runs to homepage-
once a week? -fakesob- that's it? sigh, I guess school is important.
I didn't get the first review ): meh. Had it for the other chapters. xD
Loved it. Like extra love this time. I feel so bad for Ellie, like it sucks that she pretty much is torn between family and stuff. I saw it coming though. (:
Remus actually annoyed me for a moment... it didn't last long, but it happened. When he was talking about the prophet I was just like shut up duuude.
Teehee, Siri could so kiss me, and I am a Lesbian xD LOL! (ps I loved the les talk, it made me smile.)

HAha, Ellie, can you curse my hair pink? xD
This waitness is gunna suck, but yeah I'm off to sleep... woke up to early. xD
here's one last:
I LOVE YOUR STORY!!!

kk, buh bye
~Katie

Ps... god my reviews are starting to get long

Author's Response: Hahahaha. . . Yeah, I probably wouldn't object to Sirius kissing me, but my boyfriend totally would. And Ellie probably would curse your hair pink if you gave her a reason to. She claims to be little Miss Patience, but she's not.

And don't worry about the reviews being long. It makes them twice as entertaining.

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Definately saw Sirius freedom coming. If it didn't I would have to hunt you down with a spork!
Haha, good chapter. Almost happy
~Katie

Author's Response: Yeah, there was no way I couldn't let Sirius not go free. I mean, really - where would the sequels come from? :D

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Sigh.
I'm too sad to give a good comment.
Your writing was amazing - I just wish it wasn't so sad.

Author's Response: Aww, well thank you!

And PS: Sorry for making you sad. :(

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Guess what?. I loved this chapter.
lol; big surprise there.
Do I sense a reunion in the future?
I hope so. xDD
Stupid Blake. I really can't stand him...
~KAtie

Author's Response: Hehehe. . . but Katie, Blake is so much fun! I mean, between threatening family members, swearing in Italian, and dueling his cousin, what's not to love?

And thanks for reading!

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I hate you I hate you I hate you I hate you I hate you I hate you.
I'll have you know that I am currently bawling my eyes out. It's A/U you so could have let them live.

Great update - terribly sad... stop making me cry... kay?

~Katie

Author's Response: Aw . . . I'm sorry! I didn't mean to make you cry!

But, like you said it IS AU. And there are still three chapters left. Not to get your hopes up too much, but there is a silver lining to all of this.

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So I was about to go to bed, had my mouse on the X to close firefox and decided, hey; I wonder if there is a lineage update... and what do I find. LINEAGE!

I really liked this chapter. A Lot.
Sirius was seemed; really realistic. Which is an odd thing to say but he seems to be how he should be. Which a lot of writers don't do.
I still think Remus should tell Ellie; that cute little bookworm he is.

Uh oh; is Blakes dad a Deatheater... not cool.
What else, what else. Haha WHenever I review I like to mention parts that popped out to me. SPeaking of popped out.
OHANA! I don't know if you did do it purpousely or not; but you did give me the urge to Watch Lilo and Stitch.

Anywhoo, I'm going to go to sleep before this review gets any pointlessly longer.
(Hope I was extra fun this time!)
LOVE it. tee hee
~Katie

Author's Response: Hahahahaha. . . Katie, you are my favorite reader. I actually watched Lilo and Stitch while I was writing Chapter Nine this past weekend. I have to say, Disney is amazing.

And yeah, I love Sirius. I'm trying to flesh him out more than I have in past stories and make him moodier and darker, so hopefully that works.

And I totally agree, Remus is a cute little bookworm!

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I was late for school cause I was too busy reading lol. xD
Loved it.

Author's Response: Haha, way to go, lol. Well, I actually almost missed my big final exam because I was responding to reviews. XD

But I didn't - so it's all good.

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Awh; poor Remus.
He should tell Ellie - it's not like she would tell anyone else.
Sirius just seems to get himself into more and more trouble lately. Poor thing. Starting to feel bad for him.

Sounds like that ball is going to suck. I wouldn't want to go. xD
Loved it, as usual hun
~Katie

Author's Response: Hahahaha. . . Katie, I love your reviews. They're always so much fun to read.

Yeah, I feel pretty bad for Remus. Poor guy just can't catch a break. And he may or may not tell Ellie his secret.

And yeah, trouble is Sirius' middle name. :)

Thanks!

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Yay!
Not so unhappy chapter.
Loved it.

Author's Response: I like not unhappy chapters. :)

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That's it? :O
Wow, definately not one of my favorite chapters. :-/
It think you should update again, because it's so short. xD
~Katie

Author's Response: It's not mine either. Not at all. It's boring and it's crappy . . . But it's necessary to set up the next few chapters.

Haha, next chapter's not finished yet . . . I gotta wait till Friday.

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No need to thank me hun - I love your story. xD
James is so sweet, I just want to glomp him! lol.
Sirius was being a prat though :-/
I have a question for Ellie:
You say that you would never betray family, but what if Blake was doing something to hurt Lily because she is a muggleborn? Would you stand by and let him hurt her, or go against him and protect her?

So yeah - I loved this chapter.
~Katie

Author's Response: ::Grins:: Thanks Katie. I just added your question and Ellie has answered it (a bit reluctantly on her part). Thanks for the question and thanks for being nice enough to review! And it is totally necessary for me to thank you. It's only polite. :)

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Awh! I love it.
I can believe that Sirius and Jason forgot about Anna. lol.
Kinda not sure what else to say haaha, just the usual. LOVE!

Author's Response: That 'forget about Anna moment' was a bit self inspired. So many times I'm rushing to do something quite important and get distracted, forgetting about what it is I needed to do. Oh, well. XD

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Yay!
LOVE!! haha. you must get that a lot. :P

I can't wait for more. XD Anna rules my life haha. Seriously.
I am like so excited for versicolor but I'm sad Polychormatic's going to end ):
xD LOVELOVELOVE. and yeah - love hehe.
xD
~Katie

Author's Response: Personally, I'm more excited for the second sequel. It's killing me not being able to tell you guys about it! (Versicolor is not going to be as long as Polychromatic . . . I'd venture at half the length.)

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I never thought this is the type of story I would read - but it's awesome. (:
I want more lol

Author's Response: :-) thanks so much! I'm really glad you liked it ;)

-Hp Fanatic

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yay! an update was just what I needed - There's nothign else to keep me busy in class. xD

Lol poor Sirius. Although he should keep his hands to himself.

LOL at Peter - lysdexic haha. Remmy is witty - I love it.

+ some general love for this story :P :)
~Katie

Author's Response: Hahahaha. . . Yeah, I love Remus. He's so fun to write sometimes.

And Sirius should really learn to keep his hands to himself too.

Thanks for reading and reviewing. (And I'm glad I kept you occupied!)

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