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Reading Reviews From Member: Morgaine of Avalon
4 Reviews Found

Review #1, by Morgaine of AvalonWhy Better When There's Best?: He Had It Coming

18th August 2010:
(aka Juliet)
Again, nicely done. Rose's character remains quite consistent, and Muriel, even in such a short scene, seems to have a well-defined personality. Time flows smoothly in this chapter as well, and the breaks and jumps seem natural. I quite like your writing. =)

Author's Response: I'm happy that you liked Rose and Muriel! I'm glad the flow is good, as well. :)

Thank you for another great review!

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Review #2, by Morgaine of AvalonIf You Hit Me Baby One More Time!: Of You Hit Me Baby One More Time!

31st May 2008:
good...but you might want to work on the formatting a little, as there is about 2 inches of space between every paragraph. but otherwise, pretty good.

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Review #3, by Morgaine of AvalonGo Ahead: Go Ahead

31st May 2008:
that was amazing. i can't say anything else, really!!

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Review #4, by Morgaine of AvalonBroom Handles: Broom Handles

31st May 2008:
wow...that's all i have to say
wow in a good way though...i like it!

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