Woo an update...I don't think I have ever reviewed this story even though its one of my favourite.

It was a great chapter, I can't wait until the rest of the Weasley clan find out. Drama! Good job and glad to hear your exams are out the way. I have two assessments in for next week then I am finished with Uni til May. YAY.

Anyway 10/10. Will be looking forward to your next chapter.
WF x

Author's Response: haha. aww thanks for reviewing then!!! haha. yeahh. me too. yay! haha. =]

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Great story. I will keep my eyes peeled for the next chapter. 10/10

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I simply love this story.
Amazing!

Author's Response: thank you so much! i hope you enjoy the rest!

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Keep writing, I am dying to know what these two get up to.
Well done, I really enjoyed reading this story.

Author's Response: Will do, I'm working on chapter 4 for my other story then chapter 3 for this one will be out.
I'm so gladyou enjoyed this, thanks so much for reviewing!

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I love this story. Well done, I can't wait for the next chapter.

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Seen as your hoping for a review.heres one.
I love this story, it is well written and interesting.
Can't wait for the next chapter. Don't keep us waiting too long please.
10/10

Author's Response: yay! a review! im always luving those! very appreciative of them!

ill try to avoid keeping u waiting =] the next chapter is written and will be posted soon!

thanks for the review! =D and the rating!

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Great story...can't wait to read the next chapter.

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Wonderfull story.10/10
I can't wait for the next chapter.

Author's Response: Thank You :)

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Great Chapter. I liked how Rose has the same fear as Ron. She totally freaked out. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Author's Response: thanks! i know, i just put her fear of spiders in there while i was writing it, so it wasn't planned =]

thanks so much for the review! =D next chapter is written and soon to be entered into the validation queue!

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Hey
Glad you updated quickly. I enjoyed this chapter but a few things bothered me slightly. (I don't want to be mean just trying to help you improve the story).

Firstly, you write dialogue sequences wonderfully and the interaction between characters is great. I think you have room to make more of the description, not so you have to describe everything you can see in platform 3/4 but maybe a little more. Whats the atmosphere on the station like, Is the air full of steam from the train, what about the sound of people and the train.

Also the bit when Lily ask if Victoire is his girlfriend, you describe her eyes and her cheeks. To me the description does not make sense and could be re-written.

*Albus, who was walking by his side, looked like her was nauseous* Do you mean, looked like he, not her.

Apart from all that its still a great chapter, with good pace and flow. Keep going and improving. Can't wait for the next. :)

(Sorry if I come across bossy, I just want to help. Honest. Feel free to completely forget about my suggestions. Its your story after all)

Author's Response: Hiya! :D

Wow, this was by far the longest review I've received on this story!

Believe me, no offense is taken! I very rarely receive constructive criticism, and when I do I really strive on it. So don't feel bad: feel free to continue following my story and point out irky lines and paragraphs! :D

I've looked into the things you've pointed out for me. I fixed the part about Albus (yeah, an 'R' snuck in unexpectantly) and Lily (Haha, don't know what I was thinking when I wrote that line), and I'm gonna edit in some descriptive details of the station when I have time :)

Thanks again for taking your time to write me a long review such as this one, and again: don't be afraid to criticize me all you want in the future! :D

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Hey
It's a great idea and I have it develops into a great story. I will keep my eyes open for the next update. Good Job.

Author's Response: Haha, thanks a lot :) I really enjoyed brainstorming for this one, and I predict that I can make quite a few interesting twists on the plotline, so do keep your eyes open ;)

Oh, and thanks for the review! =D

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Great story. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Author's Response: Thank you :)

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Wow.and here I was thinking she wasn't going to tell him. Great build up but I hate Chiffhangers. Hoping you update soon.
Turning into a very addictive story. Good Job!

Author's Response: haha. thanks! sorry. =]

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Great story.. I really enjoyed reading it.

Author's Response: Thanks so much, I'm glad you're enjoying it!

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That was simply the most amazing ending to your story.
Thank you for writing this story.
I hope your happy with how it turned out.
It has to be 10/10..

Author's Response: Thank you so much for reviewing, and yes, I'm quite happy with how it turned out. I think if I had the time over I could write the earlier chapters a bit better. :D

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I really am enjoying this story! Keep up the great work.

Author's Response: thanks!!! =]

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Great story and Can't wait for the next chapter so please update soon.

Author's Response: thanks!! i will! =]

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Well done and keep writing..I love how this story is developing.
Thanks for writing a wonderful fanfiction.
10/10

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There were some excellent lines in this chapter.
Keep up the good work!
x 10/10

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Wonderful story, it gave me chills. Well Done x

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It's a great start, it does it's purpose. By setting up the story and introducting the plot.
I can't wait to read more.
Excellent! Well Done!

Just a little mistake I found:
*slid his had up another girl's shirt.*
I think you ment hand, just a little mistake.

Other than that, 8/10. x

Author's Response: Thanks for the constructive review:) I will fix that little mistake ASAP. Keep reading:)
-hpf14

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I love this story. Plain and simple. 10/10 xxx

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I have to say that I really do love this story. The way you have written Rose. It's very real and comical at times. Well done, wonderful story. I just can't wait to read more.
A well deserved 10/10.
xxx

Author's Response: Thanks so much! (",)

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Wonderful, love it.10/10

Author's Response: Thanks! : DDDDDD

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Amazing, I really love your story!! I can't wait for the next chapter. 10/10

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