And what a perfect ending! So Draco and so romantic!
Definitely going to add this to my favorites XD
~ LauraAuthor's Response: Thank you very much, I'm really glad you enjoyed the story!! Thanks for favoriting!!! Report Review
I hate Harry/Hermione, I hate Hermione in general!
But I love the Draco/Luna parts!
~ LauraAuthor's Response: I don't mind Harry/Hermione, but I prefer Ron/Hermione, I love those two together! But I need some drama lol.
Draco/ Luna are my favorite ship!! Report Review
Hey there! I though I would give this a read since I have nothing better to do. And I must say I am quite interested now. I can tell this is going to be an exciting plot, so please update soon!
P.S. Glad you like the banner.
~ LauraAuthor's Response: Aww thanks, I'm tring to update really quick. And the banner is amazing. Thanks! =D Report Review
Hmmm, not sure how I feel about the ending. This story started out all happy and funny and then kinda morphed into angst in this last chapter. I'm all for twists but I just don't think that fit very well.
Nevertheless I am still looking forward to the sequel, (which I read about in your answers to other reviewers) do you have any idea what it will be called so that I can keep an eye out for it??
Ox-LAURA-xOAuthor's Response: The angst fits in with my sequel which I will be posting very soon. I\\\'ve neglected my FF lately due to real life, hate it when life gets in the way lol.
I think it\\\'s going to be called Burning Regret & you\\\'ll be able to find it under the Draco/Luna section.
thanks for taking the time to review. I\\\'ll be posting soon!! Report Review
Gah! I love christmas stories. I loved this, and the sweetness of it.
I have a question also, I looked on your authors page and saw your bio image is centered, how on earth do you do that, it drives me nuts that mind is sticking to the side?!
Ox-LAURA-xOAuthor's Response: I believe i used tags
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Pretty good first chapter, looking forward to the next update.
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Fantastic. Loved it! Song was great, and really sad but also kind of happy. 8/10 :)
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Awww thats so sweet. Absoluetly hate Miley Cyrus but it kinda worked. 7/10.
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Haha awkward, but in a good way. Loved how you ended it.
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That was great, love the last few paragraphs. Amazingly sweet.
Ox-LAURA-xOAuthor's Response: thanks so much for the review! It means a lot and I'm glad you enjoyed this!
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Amazing as always! That was a wonderful way for them to meet, I could feel the tension. Can't wait to see how Edward and Bella are introduced lol.
Ox-LAURA-xOAuthor's Response: Thank you! I tried to make their meeting as realistic as possible and I knew that there'd be a ton of tension between the two groups, with each in fear of the other. And Edward and Bella will be introduced in the next chapter ;) Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Keep it jazzy,
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Aw cute. Ron can be a real prick sometimes, I wanna smack him. But Cedric on the other hand... there are no words!
Ox-LAURA-xOAuthor's Response: Aw..thanks and Ron can be a prick. And you are not alone on the slapping part. And I'm glad that you like Cedric.
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The quotes at the start are good, so I was kinda expecting them to have a snog this chapter. And you seriously didn't disappoint!
"That was the right time."
Too right it was, good old Cedric/Robert/Edward...whatever! XD
Ox-LAURA-xOAuthor's Response: Oh, goodie! That's what I was trying to get at! And I guess I did! And I'm glad that I didn't disapoint you! =D!
And yes, all three of them are extremley good looking! =P!
Thanks for your review! =D! Report Review
Why must you leave it there?!?!
Loving it so far, can't wait until they finally meet up.
And please please please don't have Jacob break Edward and Bella up, they belong together! I will seriously murder you if they split!
Ox-LAURA-xOAuthor's Response: Lol, well, lucky for you I'm Team Edward, so, there won't be any breaking up, but that doesn't mean Jacob can't have a little fun...thanks for reading and reviewing!
Keep it jazzy,
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Love it, most wonderfully. Update quickly! And did you enjoy Twilight. I though it was awesome, although I had to watch it on the internet, but I still loved it.
Ox-LAURA-xOAuthor's Response: Yay! You loves it! =D! And I will! And yes! I did! I loved the movie! It was really great! beyond my expectaions of what it was going to be! I loved it as well! =D!
Cedric Diggory + Edward Cullen = Robet Pattinson! Who is awesome! Thanks for the review! Report Review
Hmmm, I think I will like this story, keep writing ;)
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OMG! Love it. And Draco being involved makes it even better! Can't wait for the next update!
Ox-LAURA-xOAuthor's Response: I'm so glad you loved it! I'll try my hardest to update soon; thanks for reading and reviewing!
Keep it jazzy,
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Aw, I want more! You can't leave it there!
Ox-LAURA-xOAuthor's Response: i admit, it was a little unfair to leave it there
but if i have time over the next week, i'll try to (hopefully) post a sequel.
thanks for your review! Report Review
Great. *Does a happy dance* So the other woman was Luna. Never sawthat coming.
And that was really cute by the way. Sounded really nice. Ginny is a real bitch, but I do kind of understand in a way. You would do anything to be with someone you love, even if that is stabbing a friend in the back.
How did Luna die. Hoping to hear more about that too. Glad that Harry felt comfortable enough to confess all that to Draco. I love all the little bonding moments they have. And not just this story but all stories in general.
Some people find them really boring but I love to hear the back story and all that jazz. Looking forward to youe next update. Although I might not review right away, but no worries I will get round to it eventually... I hope!
Ox-LAURA-xOAuthor's Response: haha (i'm seeing that dance, too!) Yes, the other woman was Luna. I thought that would be a nice little twist for you all. What better person to help Harry through his depression than Luna? Ugh, Ginny. Her obsession just got the best of her.
I'm still working on this story, so I'm not sure what I'll be doing regarding Luna's death. I'm sure whatever I do will surprise me. My characters seem to like to take this story in their own hands at times. :)
It was really nice to see Harry tell Draco about it. I like their bonding moments, too. Those two just need each other. :)
Thanks again for your great review! Another chapter will be coming very soon (probably tomorrow, Friday). Can't wait to hear what you think of the rest of my story!! :) Report Review
Whoop great! I didnt mind you switching into third person at all. If you didnt then I wouldnt be drooling over the image of Draco and Blaise getting all steamy!
So things are starting to happen. Draco likes Harry. Draco Likes Harry. You have to imagine I just childishly sung that while dancing in circles around you.
And btw, I am at a friends house right now, staying over for halloween and I am getting very strange looks for giggling at the computer screen. Thats your doing missy!
Can I just say that you are really very good at sex scenes, but must you leave me wanting more?! Grrr!
Andrew? Hmmm, hoping to find more about him. But now I will be thinking of my cousin whenever I read about him who happens to have the same name and that can't be good since he is only like 14 lol.
DRACO ABRAXAS MALFOY! YAY someone else uses that. I think that sounds really awesome. I can't remember, I think Abraxas was Lucius's father... was he? But anyway whenever I get bored in class I start doodling 'DAM' on my books, so my teachers get works handing in with a random DAM in the corner!
Incase you failed to notice, I am a little bit hyper, that was candy apples and bubblegum do to me. That and singing Dirty Little Secret on Rock Band!
Ox-LAURA-xOAuthor's Response: Aw, good. I know some people don't like changes in POVs, but it had to be done. And, I know! Draco and Blaise... mmm :)
haha Yep. It's true. He likes him. And omg... totally visualized you doing that. (heard it too) lol Your friend must think you're nuts. :) Unless she's into the whole HP thing too, and then perhaps not. :) Hope you had a good Halloween, btw.
lol Thanks for the comment on sex scenes. Sorry I had to end it there (rules, you know...) However, I do have this fic on another site, so it gives me a bit more freedom with it. :)
haha I hate when you know someone who has the same name as your character. Then all you can visualize is that person. Yes, you will learn more about Andrew. Don't you worry. :)
I know! I rarely hear that name. People usually go with Lucius instead. And yes, Abraxas was Lucius' father. LOL That is so funny about DAM. If only they knew. :)
haha I have not failed to notice that. Sweets can make anyone hyper! Mmm Candy apples. I haven't had one of those in AGES!
Thanks, as always, for your great review!! :) Report Review
Haha, awesome chapter. I really find is sooo amusing when Harry tries to flirt. I like it better when he tries to filrt with muggle women becuase they dont know he is famous so it is alot more entertaining.
I like how well you go into Harry's head. I can't write first person very well... actually I suck! Thats why all my stories are in thrid person, atually I attempted Dracos POV, I don't like it much though lol. But you do it very well.
Tough look getting a girl called Ginny. He was doing so good as well. Poor Harry. But if having Draco's arms wrapped around his waist wont make him feel better I dont know what will.
Btw I'm loving Draco's attitude in this, he is kind of bubbily and free spirited, I like that more than I should lol. Why do american girls love British mens accents? Trust me, living in Britain for your whole life gets you pretty sick of them. But I do love Irrish randomly. XD!
"Protected Witness Protects Protector" LMAO *sniggers*
Ox-LAURA-xOAuthor's Response: :) lol Yes, it is pretty cute to see Harry make a fool of himself. And you're right. Much better to go after muggles then witches. No one knows him this way. :)
Thanks for your comment on how I write Harry's thoughts. First person can be a bit tricky, especially when you can only write your main character's thoughts, instead of what others may be thinking. Oh what I would love to know what's going on in Draco's head. :) Maybe later on I will do another story, seeing it through his head. :) Ooh.. I'll definitely have to keep that in mind.
I know. Of all the girls he chooses, it has to be one named Ginny!! Life can be so cruel sometimes. :) But what a wonderful end to have Draco's arms around him. haha
Yay! I'm glad you like Draco's attitude. He is pretty free spirited. I like that phrase for him. :) haha You know. I don't know why we like British accents. Actually, I think it's just accents in general that gets me. :) Italian, English, Australian, Irish... YUM!
LOL Glad you liked that little headline. That would definitely be something I would see in a newspaper.
Thanks for your review, Laura!! :) Report Review
Simply WOW. That was awesome. Good job!
Ox-LAURA-xOAuthor's Response: Thank you for reading.
*sniggers* good chapter.
I love Draco's logic. And if you think about it, it is completely true. Ok so if Harry has only slept with two people who are they. One is Ginny since they were married, who is the other?
And how many people has Draco slept with? I'm betting on a hell of a lot more than two.
How old are they btw? You might have mentioned it but as you probably already know I don't pay much attention to little details??
Hmmm, looking forward to see what happends when they go out on the town lol. Maybe one of them will get lucky with some random girl... or together... whatever works. As long as Draco is shirtless!
Ox-LAURA-xOAuthor's Response: Thanks, Laura. Glad you liked this chapter. :) Yes, Draco does make sense. Harry should listen to him more. haha
And the question about the other person comes up. :) Well, don't you fret. That will be answered later. And Draco's partners? Well, yeah, more than two. lol Actually, I didn't mention their age in here, so you didn't miss that detail. I really haven't thought about an exact age, to tell you the truth. I would say they're in their late 20s.
Next chapter will be posted soon. Draco shirtless? Hmm... not so much in the next chapter. But eventually. haha Thanks, as always, for your reviews!!! :) Report Review
Hahahahahaha. The mile high club! Classic!
You made my day. Draco on a plane discussing with Harry about having sex lol. And loved the part where he flirted with the girl and got a smack lmao!
Maybe they could discover exactly what the MHC is together, in the cramped little bathroom.
Btw didnt Ralph Fiennes have sex with some random woman on a plane? I remember reading about it somewhere. Well that though actually makes me shivver. Voldermort and the mile high club. Urg!
Ox-LAURA-xOAuthor's Response: Yay! So glad you liked that part. I was laughing when I wrote it, and I was hoping others would do the same. :) It's just so funny how innocent those two are about it, too. They have no idea they're talking about sex, or the fact that Draco inadvertently told some random guy that Harry would know if he was or not. :) I liked the smack, too. He really should be careful with saying that too much around people. :) haha I think that would be a nice little discovery for the both of them.
LOL Voldemort and the mile high club. You're awesome. :) Thanks for your review! Report Review
Haha like the way this is going.
Yeah, you so can't get away from me that easily.
Hmmm I wouldn't mind being stuck on a plane with Draco. The seat tend to be small and there would be alot of touching and coughsexytimecough. Well if it were me and Draco it would be.
Nice tactic Draco created though. Wish someone did that to me when I was flying to America! I frigging hate planes... unless I'm with a fictonal blonde haired grey eyed guy.
Kinda do feel a little sorry for Harry though. Having to be stuck on a plane for a long time with someone you don't particulary get on with. I feel his pain.
Ox-LAURA-xOAuthor's Response: :) haha I didn't think I would. I'm glad you decided to stop over here and give this story a try.
lol Yes, being on a plane with Draco would be nice, unless you're Harry, that is. :) But, come on... close seats, knees touching, elbows bumping... Got to love it. :)
I'm glad you liked how Draco helped Harry. I thought it would be a nice change for Harry to be the one who is afraid, instead of Draco all the time. Just because he's a Gryffindor doesn't mean he still can't get scared about a few things. I rarely fly, but it can be pretty scary. I'm sure Draco would do the same for you. :)
Thanks for your review, Laura!
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