Reading Reviews From Member: HJPB_Snape
  
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Review #1, by HJPB_Snape~~Forgetful love~~: The news

24th January 2008:
I agree with the others this story is starting out well, I would just love to see a bit more detail. First chapers are usually the shortest anyways. I am keen to read more, just take some time and build up the story a bit more in the next chapters. Looking forward to reading more

Author's Response: thank you plus this is my 1st eveeeer story so im working on it

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