No, not bad news!!! They've been through so much already... Why doesn't he just tell her about "why" he was working with Meghan? Say, I was saving to buy an engagement ring and boom, it's happy families again. Lol, all the angst is getting to me but I love it... Update when you can. Report Review
Poor Al, poor James...lol, poor everybody! I tell you what, I was so happy when I saw that you'd updated. I checked every couple of days - sad, I know - because your writing is just so addictive. Thanks for the update and I hope to read more soon!Author's Response: Hehe, it was a sad kind of chapter. Next chapter's up now. Thanks so much! I hope you keep reviewing, and I haven't lost you in that last vast expanse of time between updates. I really appreciate it. Report Review
WOW. Great chapter. I can't believe that Rose was so - so, well if I'm being honest, kinda crazy at the end. Loved it. Please update soon. And Merry Christmas! :)Author's Response: Thanks! She was kinda crazy...I prefer passionate, actually. Thanks! Report Review
OMG! Poor Albus and poor Nat. When Rose finds out, my god is she going to be feeling guilty. A wedding present *sniff*...Author's Response: Yep, yep, and yep. :O Thanks! Report Review
Thank bloody god for that! I was getting worried for a second there... Poor Nat, she thinks he's cheating BUT HE'S NOT! Lol, uh, sorry, I'm just really really glad that Al was faithful despite Meghan's constant flirting. Loved it, can't wait to see what happens next. Isn't Rose going to feel horrible after this?Author's Response: I'm glad that Albus was being faithful, too. Or was he? J/k, I just can't stop with the lies! :P Forgive me, it's late. Thanks! Report Review
The next chapter is what we've been waiting for? You mean I'm not going to go bald from pulling all my hair out? Hooray! Lol, sorry, but I just really, REALLY want to know. Great update and I can't wait to read the next one...literally. I'm bouncing on my chair just thinking about it!Author's Response: Yep, it sure is! Thanks so much! Report Review
Wow, a lot certainly happened in that. You know, I'm still harbouring some hope (miniscule as it is) that Al isn't cheating. But the evidence is just piling up. Please, please, PLEASE update soon. I'm pulling my hair out wanting to know.Author's Response: True, the evidence is against him. But is it enough? Thanks! Report Review
I'm conflicted, I really am. On one hand, the evidence seems to be piling up. But then on the other, I believe what Nat and Scorpius are saying; Al isn't a cheater. Then again, Rose's memory... I can't help but wonder if Meghan slipped something in his drink, or - oh, I don't know! It's so frustrating not knowing. I feel so sorry for Rose, though.Author's Response: Al really doesn't seem like a cheater, does he? But it was there, plain as day, in Rose's memory...or was it? Thanks! Report Review
Jennifer's part was touching and a little heartbreaking. I still don't know what to think about Al, and all this not knowing 'what' is going on is doing my head in. Great update and I hope to read more soon!Author's Response: Hopefully in the next couple of chapters there'll be more 'knowing' than not knowing...Thanks! Report Review
Al is actually cheating on her? That's horrible... I hope there has been some kind of misinterpretation, or something on Rose's part. Poor Nat and...Hugo. I can't believe he kissed her!Author's Response: Err... Thanks! Report Review
Great chapter as always :) I'm still a little iffy about what Al might be hiding, because obviously it is something with what I can gather from Rose's part at the end... Poor Jennifer, I really don't like her, but still... you wouldn't wish that on anyone. Lol, go Lily! *snickers* I bet her brothers woud 'love' to know what she is up to.Author's Response: I'm glad I could make people go from hating a character (jennifer) to just generally disliking her. Al will find out about Lily soon ;) No comment on the rest :P -momoe Report Review
uh-oh... That's pretty much all I can say. Harry's "heartburn", Rose signing something "she shouldn't have", Kate, Jennifer - as I said, uh-oh. Update soon!Author's Response: That pretty much sums it up. Uh-oh! Thanks! -momoe Report Review
Oh, please don't let Al be cheating! That would be just down right horrible. I could see him talking to Meghan, maybe, about the whole situation and her playing the "sympathetic, but actually homewrecking" friend to try and get him back. But please, PLEASE don't let him cheat on Nat. Oh, and I think something is up with Jennifer. Why won't she just take the pregnancy test...Author's Response: It would be something Meghan would do, but would Albus take the bait? Hmm... That is strange for Jennifer to be so reluctant. Hmm... Thanks! -momoe :) Report Review
Great chapter. Aww, I feel so sorry for poor Hugo! I loved the tension and little contest (Nat kissing Al to make Meghan jealous and Meghan trying to get Al's attention) between Nat and Meghan. I actually liked the first part of the chapter, because it gave us an incite into Meghan's thoughts. Loved the chapter; update soon!Author's Response: I'm glad you liked the first part of the chapter, it was very hard for me to write because I wasn't sure how introducing another character's POV would turn out. And I had to throw in Hugo's scene. Poor kid, right? Nat and Meghan are going to be at war for a while... thanks! Report Review
Trust Hermione to figure it out, being as perceptive as she is. I hate to think what Ron is going to say when he realises that Rose lied to him...I loved Astoria's little outburst - Draco needs a woman to envoke fear in him, that's for sure! ;) Loved this chapter, hope you update soon.Author's Response: Thank you so much for reviewing. I really appreciate the time you've taken to review so thoughtfully. Hopefully I'll be able to update soon, but I have yet to finish chapter 10. Thanks again for reviewing! Report Review
Have I told you how much I dislike Jennifer? Lol, loved the chapter and had to aww at Hugo's promise ring. Can't wait to read more!Author's Response: Erm, not lately, but it's always lovely to hear how much someone hates my characters :P no really, I hate her too! Hugo is my new favorite character to write, hence all of the recent one-shots with him! Thanks! -momoe Report Review
I was so upset when the crash took place as I lost 'most' of my reviews, you however, lost ALL of them. I can't imagine how disheartening 'that' must have been. As it is, I love this story and how you have managed to make each character very realistic. I can't wait to read more.Author's Response: Ah, thanks so much! I was just heartbroken and I know that it just wasn't any fun for anyone who lost theire beloved reviews, you included! So, I thank you so much for reviewing. I should be updating soon because I'm now a TRUSTED AUTHOR! Yay! So faster updates will be happening. Thanks again! Report Review
I really like this story because not only is it humorous but its got the emotions there as well. I hope you can update soon :) Report Review
That was amazing. It was so well written and I actually liked the fact that there was no dialogue in this. I can understand how hard it must have been to resist one word here or one word there. It takes a lot of skill to be able to portray something so thoroughly but without words. Great story.Author's Response: thank you so much. what a wonderful review ^_^ Report Review
I really, really liked this. First time i've checked out a Scorpius/Rose fic and I was pleasantly surprised. Great job! Report Review
That was a really good start. A few spelling mistakes but you didn't really notice it until the end. Hope you can update soon. Report Review
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