Lavender is a butt-hole, honestly. Poor Hermione, Ron is stupid lol. Goodness I need more! Please update soon! :DAuthor's Response: Haha- yes, butt-hole is a BRILLIANT way to describe her in this story! ~writergirl8 Report Review
aw I love this :) I want a ron/mione relationship.Author's Response: Uhg, don't we all? Thanks for reviewing! ~writergirl8 Report Review
Ahh this story is adorable and Ron is ridiculous. Love the Hs thing- I always thought that too, but Harry, Ron and Hermione sounds way better than Harry, Han, and Hermione.Author's Response: Thanks so much! I was surprised more people didn't notice the Harry, Hermione and Han thing. That's always been a bit weird to me, lol. ~writergirl8 Report Review
I LOVE THIS STORY!!! but sadly I must finish the rest tomorrow because I'm about to black out seeing as it's 3:45am.Author's Response: Yes, go to bed! That would probably be in your best interest :) Come back tomorrow and tell me what you think. ~writergirl8 Report Review
Brilliant, I love your writing. Poor Victor- go somewhere, Ron is the Keeper, yoour just a seeker. lol :DAuthor's Response: Wow, you realized that it's Viktor's job to catch the item that gains 150 points, right?lol, thanks for the review! ~writergirl8 Report Review
I feel like Sluggy is up to something. LOL oh and I love how the teachers are gossiping about the students, I always knew that's what went down in the Staff Room.
Very interesting storyline, I'm loving it so far- great writing skills by the way.Author's Response: Sluggy IS up to something. Good for you!!! I know, right, it implies that some teachers actually care enough to pay attention and bet but I'm sure there are some in this world. ~writergirl8 Report Review
awesome beginning, loving the cliffhanger. Good start, can't wait until you update!!!Author's Response: thank you so much! I'm glad you like it :) More will be coming soon! Report Review
You know what I love though it may not be entential. The fact that Natty is kind of like Remus when he was a teenager, quiet and stuff. I think it's kinda sweet, like he's best friends with his dad.
Can't wait until you update! Update quickly!!!Author's Response: DUDE! THAT IS SICKNESS! Definitely not intentional AT ALL! Thanks for pointing that out!
You're the sweetest! I'll update as soon as you can! :) Report Review
Loving this. It's so sad. Ted's a bee-otch. Victorie's thoughts are funny. They curse like real teenagers at my school. Loving this!!! (as previously stated)Author's Response: I tried to make them realistic teens :) Thanks! Report Review
LOL! Dang Victorie! Violent much!Ted's an a-hole! Loving this! About to continue reading, but im about to pass out since its 2:00 in the morning.Author's Response: I know, Victoire is quite the angry person. Report Review
Hil-ar-i-ous! I'm loving this. Reminds me of John Tucker Must Die (which I am conveniently watching right now). Lindsay reminds me of this girl Lindsay I know, I think you're stalking my life. Loving this! However, I find that the spawn of a part veela and a smexy weasley could be 'undesireable' hard to believe. And the bit with Ted's arse made me cry tears of laughter.Author's Response: Ahaha, I've been told that :) Ahaa, Victoire isn't necessarily 'undesirable' (although her personality is rather out there), Lindsay and Victoire just have a unique friendship. I'm glad I made you laugh :D Report Review
Pretty good beginning, I just think Lily comes off with a bit of an attitude. Good Job though!Author's Response: thank you, I did give Lily a little bit of attitude, more then I normally would, but I was trying to go for a different diagramic then most ppl have Report Review
Very good beginning, I love how James is. Just work on spelling and puncuation though, because it made it a bit hard to read at the beginning. Anyway, great job, update soon :)Author's Response: Thank you! I swear I got all that good stuff :/ I looked over it only a billion times haha. I'm glad you like it though!
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GREAT START! You captured James and Lily quite perfectly I believe. How one minute Lily doesn't really care much about James, but then suddenly hates him after he says one word to her. Plus Lily's thoughts are hilarious and when she said "Swagger" I nearly died laughing. Anyway, great start so far, please update and thanks for the virtual cookie.Author's Response: Thank you so much! Lily's thoughts are mostly me just amusing myself and yes, I do seem to like my 'odd' words. I'm definately going to update but I'm not sure if it'll go up before the queue closer. And you're very welcome for the virtual cookie - this review made my day. Report Review
Good start, I'm liking the plot, and calling Vernon a fat whale was hilarious. And I love Lily's letter at the end, asking for a favor then saying she'll kill him- haha, typical lily.Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it! Thanks tonnss for reviewing :) Report Review
I love how you did the beginning with the 1st year and shows how sweet and innocent young James is, then flash it to 7th year when he's all toerag-ie, lol. Loving the beginning, I shall continue.Author's Response: Yep well that's James ;) Lily must really love him taking him 'warts and all.' XD Hope you like the rest! Glad you enjoyed it so far :) Report Review
Twizzlies, haha, that cracked me up! I love this story, please update soon!! Report Review
It is so funny, I was planning on writing a story with this exact same storyline but i could never get it together, good thing I didn't :P It's a good story so far, I trying to figure out how James and Lily's relationship is right now, I can't really tell- it cant be hate since Lily wasn't blowing up about the fact that she had to open her home up to James. I shall continue now. Report Review
Wow, that was one of the best fanfictions I've read on here. It was a very good storyline with great dialogue and it fit all the characters well. You developed every character flawlessly in 7 chapters and you brought each of them to life. I love how you ended it with Lily asking James, and I loved every moment reading this story. It was probably the sweetest thing I've read on HPFF, you are a great writer.Author's Response: I can't tell you how much I appreciated all of your reviews. They meant a lot to me, and your compliments definitely made my day! Thank you so much for reading, and I'm very pleased that you enjoyed it. I wish I could express just how thankful I am for your feedback, but I find myself just sitting at the computer and smiling a lot, so this will have to suffice! Thanks again! :D Report Review
This was the sweetest and saddest chapter so far. I would give anything to have a guy tell me that and Lily goes all stupid caring what people think. I love the note James wrote, oh and when he finally spoke, that was probably the best line ever. It shows how much he cares about her in this chapter and I completely love it. I can't wait to see how this ends! Report Review
Aw, I love this chapter, Lily was hilarious and James was so sweet. I shall continue reading, only 2 more chapters to go. Report Review
“I never realized how much I expected and… enjoyed James talking to me this year until he stopped…” FINALLY!! I love how much Lily is in denial at the beginning when she smells the cinnomen, then she realizes it and she's all freaked out. Loving this story, now I shall continue reading. Report Review
That's awesome, I love the ending and James falling from the tree. Report Review
I love how you did the great hall scene, it was so funny. Report Review
That was cute, I'm liking this story so far. Report Review
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