you are brilliant!! I adore this story, it is the funniest story i have read in ages.
i really wanna know what bink is up to...it is irritating me not knowing!! (i do love a good mystery!!). Ohhh when is James gonna realise he is madly in love with Avery???
I love how you have written James, he is ace!! I love him lots! lol

Keep this up cause I completely love this story!! cant wait for the next installment!! xxx

Author's Response: I'm so glad you love it! It's so much fun to write! As for Bink, I have a feeling (what am I talking about? I know because I'm the author) you'll figure that out relatively soon. He's such a tricky guy. As for James and Avery, trust me, it's worth the wait. Trust me. I'm glad you love James :) I love him too!

Thanks so much for the wonderful review! I promise to update asap!

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ah!!! I LOVE this! You are sooo hilarious. Do you know...in a really wierd way I would love to have that wonderful sarcastic little voice in my head like Rose has...All I would do is laugh all day long! lol. Even in the most horific situations I either want to laugh or give her a big hug.
She is such a great character...can you update like around three times a day? I would be eternally greatful! lol xxx

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this is great!! aw i just want to give rose a big hug!! Though i did burst out laughing at the end bit!! opps...I have a funny feeling that things are not going to get too good for rose any time soon? bless her
anyways keep up the great work!! Im so loving this story! x

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aww this was great but really sad. The ending of this made me feel so sorry for Rose. umm I may be completely wrong but i think there is a link with Richard (i dont wanna say incase i ruin it for everyone else!!). ahhh i cant wait to find out what happens!!!
update soon. x

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ohh love this already! James is great... I already want him to fall in love with Avery...ahhh. oh and Meta is hilarious- please make sure she is in this story lots!!
10/10 update soon! x

Author's Response: Oh, I promise. Meta will be annoying you for a very, very long time :) I do love her. Thanks for the fab review!

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aww this was brilliant. Also one of my fav songs, that always brings a tear to my eye.

I thought it was hilarious when Harry slammed the door in Lily's boyfriends face...classic!

Beautifully written as always! x

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ohhh I wonder whats going on here then? I just don't know where you get your ideas from!! I adore James and I love how his storyline is unfolding. Aww it would be such a shame if Kylie is just spying on him for some reason, she seems cool.

Ginny and Harry fighting? I wonder who's side they will take when the whole story comes out!

Ah and you have also got me wondering about lovely Scorpious...I wonder what the reason is that he can't be with Rose. They make a great couple!!

I cant wait to find out so please, please, please updat soon!!

10/10 as always! x

Author's Response: I know, I don't know where my ideas come from either. I mean, next chapter totally blew me away. I had half of it planned, then a bit in the middle wasn't, and then the end...weird.

Thanks so much!

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aw...this is great! I adore these two characters, they are so believeable. I love this chapter- I like that Vic has finally realised she is in love! 10/10 xxx

Author's Response: thank you so much!

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yay you are back! i love this story, it's so funny...it seems to come naturally from all your characters as well.

hahaha i think it would be any kids nightmare to find dad suddenly headmaster at school...i love it!!!

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i adore this story! sorry i havent reviewed the other chapters but i have just came across this story and i couldn't wait to read each chapter!
I love how you have written the two characters. It is clear there has been alot of thought put into how they have been written. I love scorpious! He is a wonderful character and i love how the relationship formed between the two. It is refreshing to see a different storyline other than the head girl/head boy thing.
I cannot wait to find out what will happen after that little incident at the end of this chapter!!!
10/10

Author's Response: Thank you so much for this review!

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aw this was beautiful. Lily was fab...I adore how this started in the middle of a fight that James knew nothing about, it made me want to read more!
James is so sweet..he loves her more than quidditch eh? haha.
I love how this has been written, and as always I am a sucker for a lovey happy ending!!
10/10

Author's Response: Yay! I'm glad you liked it. Thanks for reading and reviewing!

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first- wow a sequal already!!

omg!! married? this is fantastic!
I adore how it is not set immediately after the first story and Rose is still fabulous!
This already sounds like it is going to be brilliant! I cant wait to see what you have up your sleeve for this one! xxx

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I really love this story. I adore how you have written the romance between them, it is a brilliant story line. I especially love the ending of the chapter where Teddy leaves- beautifully written. Its easy to see the love he has for her- it's almost like he is so desperate to prove it and make her love him back, that he would do anything to prove it. Such a sweet guy!!

I feel so sorry for Victoire though, she is a little confused and I love how you have written her. She has this endering innocence that makes her a wonderful character to read.
x

Author's Response: thank you so much - endearing innocence.. i guess that's exactly what i was going for!! thank you so much :D

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yay!! what a great prezzie. This was interesting...Rose arguing with teachers?! that girl could be headmistress one day! ohhh and scorpious- im interested to know whats been going on with him lately, but hey a kiss is better than nothing right?! x

poor nat, having to go to the scan without Al...I hope they sort themselves out soon. Oh i cant believe its only 5 months into the pregnacy!!! that means theres still lots of action to take place!! yay!

I loved how you got a bit of everyone in this chappie- nat, Rose & Scorpious, Lily (go Lily!!) and James as well. Im really loving the story with him, I hope he sorts himself out.

Wonderful chapter as always!
merry christmas and happy new year x

Author's Response: thanks! there's def. something going on with him.

that sucks, but I think Al's getting the worse end of the deal. There's tons left, and I keep adding more every day!

Thanks! I wanted a little bit of everyone to finish out the year. Thanks!

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awww! this was a fantastic chapter, the one i have been waiting for!! beautifully written definately my fav chapter of your story do far! I adored the ending! wow. Nice to see scorpius again! Who thought he was gonna be a little sensitive after the way he broke up with Rose. Oh and i really want to know that secret.
aw poor nat & al. They are such a great couple I hope you dont keep them apart forever.

I am so loving this story, I can't wait to find out how this one is going to work out!!
Fab as usual! xx

Author's Response: Thank you! I think Scorp is still very much in love with Rose, they just hit a bad patch in their relationship and he did the only thing he could think of to do.

Thank you so much!

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Yay!! fab chapter! Im so pleased you updated today!
Awh Jay dumped her? makes sense i guess, he would have been blind not to have noticed what was going on with sirius and addie. I knew he was only seeing that girl to make her jealous!!! boys are useless! x

as always the chapter was written beautifully, I loved it. I especially loved how you wrote her reation to her split with jay...i thought that was the best part of the chapter. Oh yeah and Sirius appearing at the end! that was brilliant!!
10/10 as always! x

Author's Response: thanks!!! =] hah.a yeah, he would have been getting a bit annoyed. haha. thanks!!!

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awww!! this was amazing...im so sad it's all over!
Rose is officially one of my fav characters and I love how you have written her. I adore the relationship with scorpius and how it is a little awkward, even after the baby has been born, but it's so clear they are totally in love.
You are a brilliant writer, I am definately looking forward to the sequel...so get writing :).
This was one of the first next gen fics i have read and you have got me hooked...i have been checking out others now and have found that there are plot bunnys working away- so thanks for that!!

Anyways just want to say thanks for keeping me entertained with Rose's hilarious personality & keep up the writing- you definately have a talent!
xxx

Author's Response: I'm so glad you liked Rose. I know she was bordering on the point of annoying there for a while when she was getting all emotional and whatnot! Thank you so much for your kind review, I never actually considered my ability to write nonsense a talent, but if you say so!!

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awesome!!! yay i got it right!! awh and now i feel sorry for Al. Your doing such a great job of the characterisation in this that i adore all the characters!!
well i cant believe how fast your updates are! awesome again!
xxx

Author's Response: Yay! Thank you so much!

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wow this chapter completely works as just Teddy's letters. It is quite good to read without any character reaction as it just shows Teddy's actual termoil in having to break up with her.
Aw I really love this story- good stuff!
xx

Author's Response: Thank you:)

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I love this story!! aw poor Victoire, they are in the same flat? AWKWARD. Anywhoo I love Dom already- im glas shes going to be in it lots!
ohh and Ted has a little bit of explaining to do...cant wait to find out what happens next!!

x

Author's Response: I know, awkward barely covers it, lol:P
Thanks for reviewing!:)

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aw this was so great! i love how you wrote this because a subject like this is not easy. the different pov's worked great! i hope they get back together- they are a little silly really for breaking up, bless them!

I have a really random thought- can you write a story about auntie audrey? i love how you have written her and it would be hilarous!! Every time i read that yoo-hoo i feel the tears of laughter come on! heehee
aww only two chapters left. i hope you are going to write another one!

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oh this is good! i cant wait to see what they have found on the map! I loive how you slowly introduced other characters like james then lily with their own stories. It's like whilst the girls are trying to find out whats going on with Al these other stories come into light. it has given the story a real edge and i love how you have written each of the characters. I think aklot of people just think the potter kids will be little angels, so i love how you have made them-teenagers are never angels!
as usual still loving this story!!
x

Author's Response: Thanks so much! It felt to thin having it just be about Nat and Al, so I'm glad you like all of the sub-plots that have cropped up. Thanks!

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woho!! yay i love this story. I cant believe how much i laugh out loud at each chapter! you are hilarious!!!
aw i cant wait for the next bit now- im sure it will be brilliant!
aw and teddy is going to be a daddy? so sweet!
I love how you have written audrey! could that party be any more fitting for her character? fabulous!

xxx

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ah great 2nd chapter! aw teddy is so sweet...im dying to know what actually happened to make her leave the country!
xx

Author's Response: Haha I'm glad you liked it :) Teddy is a sweetheart, I love him. I'm not sure exactly when all will be revealed but it'll be sometime in the near future and probably take the form of a flashback, haven't wuite worked that one out yet. Thanks for reviewing!

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ohhh i like this! Victoire running away? what has teddy done?!!
I like that this is set in France and away from Hogwarts, it makes a nice change. This first chapter has been written well and I cant wait to read on...
xxx

Author's Response: Thank you so much for reviewing! I've never written a story outside of Hogwarts so I'm happy you like it :)
It's not so much what Teddy has done but who he has done *wink wink*
Alright, that was a bit pervy on my part.
Anyway, thanks again!

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