Super fantabulous. Both original and good. I think it'd be hilarious as video (like on YouTube). Seriously, I do.Author's Response: Yes, it would be funny on video! And nice word: fantabulous. Love it to bits. ♥ Report Review
Fantastic. The story feels natural, like it really could have happened. I also particularly love this remark: "We could enslave them!" I can just picture a young, bright-eyed Sirius with an I've-found-the-Fountain-of-Youth look on his face. It's kind of funny. The guillotine scene was great, too.Author's Response: Thank you for your review. I'm so sorry I never replied - I took a rather long hiatus from writing. I may continue this story at some point in the future but I have some other plot bunnies in the works at the moment.
I am glad you liked it. :) Report Review
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