Aw, SUCH an amazing chapter! Update soon! Report Review
Naww, such an amazing chapter! Update soon! Report Review
Wow, an AMAZING chapter, as always! I can't wait for the next one! Update soon!Author's Response: I'm so glad you liked it! I hope next chapter will be out sometime during the first weekend of June, but it might be a bit later, because I need an HPFF admin to look through it and I need to run it by my new beta! (Yay, finally a second beta!)
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Wowzas, awesome story! Update soon!Author's Response: awh, thank you so much! :D
ellie :) xx Report Review
Ooh, cool story! Update soon.Author's Response: Thank you! And I am trying! I hope to get something in the queue during this week sometime!
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Love this story! Update soon!Author's Response: So glad you enjoy it! Chapter 10 has been with the beta for a while now, I hope she'll get to it soon! Thanks for the review!! Report Review
I love this story! It's so amazing. Update soon!Author's Response: Thanks for the review :) Report Review
Wow, such an amazing story! Update soon! Report Review
Ooh, really cool cahpter/story!
Update soon!Author's Response: Thankyou so much!! :)
I'll try! :D
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YAY! Amazing chapter, as always! Update soon!Author's Response: Thanks so much :) Report Review
Yay! Such a cutesy story! Update soon! :)Author's Response: thank you!!! Report Review
Aww, SUCH a cute story, I absolutely love it. I have discovered the whole Next Generation era, yay!
Update soon!Author's Response: Ah I love NextGen...but I think it's more because as a writer I so much more freedom in NextGen. Though it can be a mixed bag quality wise sometimes. I'm glad you like the story, thanks for the review! Report Review
yay, so glad I've found this story again! Update soon, can't wait to see some rehearsals! Report Review
Awesome story! Update soon! Report Review
Yay! Brilliant chapter, as always! Report Review
Wow, such an awesome story. I love how it's.. more real than most stories. Alice seems like a complete character, and I'm looking forward to finding out more about her!
Update soon!Author's Response: Aha, THANK YOU!! =] That is the effect I'm trying to go for! You know, because, most stories on HPFF are about this drop dead gorgeous girl who gets boys throwing themselves at her or she is dating a marauder/makes a marauder fall in love with her. Now, don't get me wrong, I love those stories but I wanted to make mine a little bit more realistic. So I asked myself what if I went to Hogwarts?
I didn't base Alice's character off of my own, I based her off of the idea of realistic - how someone's life would really be if they went to Hogwarts. Obviously, not everyone can be popular like the Marauders and get dates so easily nor be gorgeous.
But Alice is pretty, not really popular, and lives a "normal" life (it gets more interesting now that the story is starting to really pick up).
Unfortunately, the story is going through revision due to the fact that I don't think that the earlier chapters were that good - but I'm on chapter 5 now!
THANK YOU, again! I truly and honestly appreciate your feedback! =] Report Review
Yay, such a cool story! Update soon! Report Review
Ooh! Cool story. I like the plot line so far, but maybe try and give us more info on Miranda? Also just little things like spacing between the lines and stuff. :)
Good story, update soon!Author's Response: Thanks, and I kept thinking about adding more things on her, but I couldn't think of anything, but I think I'll have the next chapter be more of a fill-in for her. :)
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Your grammar is getting better! (The story is of course, as fabulous as ever!) One last thing though, whenever there's a quotation, you need to remember to put punctuation at the end. E.g. “I just want to know that you are alright”
becomes "I just want to know that you are alright."
It makes it much easier for people to read.
Hope I haven't put you off, it really is a great story idea. :)Author's Response: oh gosh no, you haven't put me off. I'm just having a little break from writing i'll be getting back to the story soon x Report Review
Woah, fabulous story! Update soon!Author's Response: Thanks so much! :D Report Review
Ahahaha, such an awesome (yet cutely kooky) story! Update soonies! Report Review
Ooh, cool story. Can't wait for the truth to come out. XDAuthor's Response: Aw, thanks for the review! I should be getting a chapter out soon :) Report Review
Cool story! Update soonies!Author's Response: why thank you (: and im already working on the next chapter, dw! Report Review
Woah, such a cool story! I love the plot line.
One piece of advice though; grammar, grammar, grammar! Fullstops and commas are really important. You've gotten better, though!
Can't wait for the next chapter! :DAuthor's Response: Glad you like the plot, and i know, my friend is forever picking up on my grammar. I'll learn someday :) Report Review
Fabulous story! Update soon!Author's Response: I'm so glad you're enjoying it! Next update should come within two weeks or so, I try to update every fortnight :)
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