I love this chapter, and the whole extra-curricular DADA lessons etc etc add a nice twist to the plot...
It could make for some new characters! :)
I would offer to beta for you (Ive always dreamed of being one...), however, I haven't ever beta-ed a story before, and I didn't find many grammatical errors in this chapter... Plus Im not that harsh (unless the story is appallingly abysmal!)
Cant wait for the next chapter!
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Yaaay! Looks like things are looking up for our lovers! Wayy. Cant wait for next chapter! XX

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Woow
Ive got this feeded on my google, and every day Ive been desperado for it to be validated (it kinda tells you when its in validation :S)
And now its here!
Im a bit gutered how short tis tho, but really entrancing!
Keep it up (but longer next time ;) *hint*)
Still, faaab!
Cant wait for the next chapter (ill be manically checking it everytime i get in from school when Google lets me know hehe)
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Woow!
Thats greeat!
Lmao, poor Hermione...
I wonder whats going to happen to poor Malfoy. Then again, it was quite unfair of him.
I love his little feelings he has tho, its cute!
Anyway, keep up the good work!
Heres hoping for a happy ending...
Luff!
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WO
Yur storys up!
Wayhey!
V gurd!
X

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Wow.
Cant wait till next chapter.
Update ASAP!
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Woo!
Christmas!
And happy birthday ^.^

Author's Response: Thank you!

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Wayhey a 'big fat kiss on the lips' from Draco!
And yup I did enjoy the chapter ^.^
Cant wait till the next!
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Oh wow!
This is mega-good!
My google-feeds tell me the next chapter is in validation so I cant wait!
I love the plot, my buddie reccomended this story (were both in love with HG/DM, but I enjoy HG/SS a tad more ^.^ and were both writing atm too ^.^)
Anyway, great!
Can't wait for chapter 10!
XX

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Wow!
I cant wait for the next chapter!
Im using the Google feed to keep a track on my favourite stories which still have WIP and I see the updates as soon as they happen.
This is some really good work youve got here.
Cant wait for the next update!
X

P.S. I dont know if it was intentional but in some places you wrote 'set' and I think you may have meant 'sat'? But still, I think 'set' means the same anyway, don't it?
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Wow thats really good!
Shame its not finished tho!
I norm only read completed stories but I decided to read one of the 'random stories', and was quite suprised at what I saw because the last 'random story' I read was really bad.
But this is very good!
I love how you capture peoples feelings, but concentrate on Hermione.
Update! =P
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Ahh thats really very good x]
Im writng my first story =D
The first chapters in validation atm...
But I love this story!
V gurd XD
Luff,
X

Author's Response: Thank you very much! I am glad you liked it. I wish you good luck with your story!

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Hey,
I really enjoyed that! I love the whole Draco/Hermione thing, and the twist near the end was such a shocker. They totally deserved a happy ending though!
The only problem I had was you made a few typos and some bits didnt make sence like how all of the Malfoys possesions were to be left to Narcissa although she died at the very beginning. If you wish I can help you out and have a go at the typos and then leave the little bits where I got a bit confused upto you?
Email me with your reply (x-bloo-moo-x@hotmail.com), and in the meantime I'll be reading your other work!
Luffage,
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Wow! I love the whole Draco/Hermione idea... Im sure I reveiwed one of your other stories with my email, if so please let me know when you update next!
Luffage,
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Awhh that is something I have always wished would happen, and I can totally imagine the whole fiasco - very wise of Malfoy but I thought at times that Hermione was in some sort of danger, yet it was just a little thing that while I read on I pushed to the back of my mind.
I look foreward to reading the rest of your stories!
XX

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Woowww!
Please update!
Favouring atm...
XX

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WOOO
I figured out how to do an account and favourites...
Now your one of mine =D
Yay.
Lurrvvee!
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PS I SOOO CANNOT WAIT FOR CHAPTER 13!!!
THE SUSPENSE IS KILLINGGG MEE!!!

Author's Response: Yay you! :) Thanks for the fave and review!

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