This story is interesting. i like it. cool idea and emilly is a really good... addition to the story. but (i dont wana sound mean. SORRY!) i think your rushing in some of it... probly only cause this is just setting up the story for when they get to hogwarts. but i just thought i should mention it.Author's Response: I really do appreciate your coment thank you for giving your comment on this story. I think my next chapters get a little slower but if not, just tell me and I will try to do what ever I can to fix it. Report Review
Hey yeah this story is really awesome!!!
i hope you get over your writters block (for my sake lol).
but yeah it one of my fav pairings and you've written it really well!
so ten brownie points to you! lolAuthor's Response: Brownies! Hehe sorry. thanks , I'm glad you like it 8) Report Review
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