{reviewid: 1890542, reviewer: 'katie_Sparrow101'}
9th April 2008:
haha, i liked the beginning of it
you introduced hermione's 'cousin' very well as her 'opposite'
greeat first chapter, can't wait for more :)
8/10
Author's Response: Thanks!! I like the idea of someone being Hermione's opposite. :)
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{reviewid: 1876730, reviewer: 'katie_Sparrow101'}
25th March 2008:
wow..thats was scary*shivers*
great writing though, i luv all the detail..lol
plz plz update soon =]
i'm anxious to see what happens next :p
10/10
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{reviewid: 1871341, reviewer: 'katie_Sparrow101'}
21st March 2008:
sounds like a really good plot
can't wait for more :)
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{reviewid: 1865236, reviewer: 'katie_Sparrow101'}
16th March 2008:
that was cute
enjoyed that =]
Author's Response: Thank you, glad you enjoyed it!
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{reviewid: 1864118, reviewer: 'katie_Sparrow101'}
15th March 2008:
this is a pretty good start
keep up the good work so far =]
8/10
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{reviewid: 1862166, reviewer: 'katie_Sparrow101'}
13th March 2008:
thatt was really god, i enjoyed that!
great job
10/10
Author's Response: Why thank you Katie Sparrow101, i'm really pleased you enjoyed my story, and i must say i thoroughly enjoyed your story too, and i can not wait for you to update. Please Update soon. Good luck!
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{reviewid: 1861637, reviewer: 'katie_Sparrow101'}
12th March 2008:
pretty interesting start
Author's Response: thank you.
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{reviewid: 1860653, reviewer: 'katie_Sparrow101'}
11th March 2008:
that was pretty good, i really enjoyed that =]
keep up the good work
10/10
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{reviewid: 1856889, reviewer: 'katie_Sparrow101'}
8th March 2008:
great chapter, can't wait for more =]
Author's Response: up for validation, but will be there more soon!
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{reviewid: 1855702, reviewer: 'katie_Sparrow101'}
7th March 2008:
that a cute, good start, can't wait for more!
9/10
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{reviewid: 1852116, reviewer: 'katie_Sparrow101'}
3rd March 2008:
interesting chapter, can't wait for more!
9/10
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{reviewid: 1851337, reviewer: 'katie_Sparrow101'}
2nd March 2008:
this is a good start, please continue!
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{reviewid: 1847742, reviewer: 'katie_Sparrow101'}
28th February 2008:
great story , please continue!
9/10
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{reviewid: 1845643, reviewer: 'katie_Sparrow101'}
26th February 2008:
i like the first part, considering it's your first fanfic,
i also think that you could've made it a llittle longer with some more details also, but otherwise, it was a good start
please keep up the good work and i hope to read more in the future :)
8/10
Author's Response: i know i was thinking about how i could make the second chapter a little well alot longer with alot of details casue i don't wanna be known as a bad writer so after they put up the second chapter and you read please feel free to comment i enjoy the criticizm p.s. i'm still writing second chapter so i don't know when it'll be posted
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{reviewid: 1845399, reviewer: 'katie_Sparrow101'}
26th February 2008:
intresting, please update, i want to know what happens next! :)
8/10
Author's Response: i am going to update soon,it's just that i got inspiration and wrote a chapter or two,went to update, and they had closed the queue!annoying.however if you are a seasoned user of this website,please give me any useful information,like if closing the queue means just new first chapters or everything? thanks for reviewing btw.
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{reviewid: 1844721, reviewer: 'katie_Sparrow101'}
25th February 2008:
that was really cute
a little bit rushed, but it was all good and well written
-i really hope that you'll UDate really soon :) i'm looking forward on reading the rest :D
~k.S101
8/10
Author's Response: thnx!!! :D i'm about ready 2 type up the next chapter now!!
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25th February 2008:
THAT WAS SAD, AND YET HAPPY
I REALLY REALLY ENJOYED THIS STORY, EXCELLENT JOB
LOVED IT
~k.S101
*ps, you should really get a banner* :) - the-dark-arts.net
Author's Response: Thank you so much. Am so glad that you enjoyed it will you please help me with the banner and also give me pointers on how to put them up. Thanks
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{reviewid: 1840659, reviewer: 'katie_Sparrow101'}
22nd February 2008:
poor harry, so loney w/o mione
hope he finds her :)
do keep up the good work
8/10
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22nd February 2008:
good start,interesting as well
do keep up the good work =]
~k.s101
Author's Response: Thanks!
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{reviewid: 1838362, reviewer: 'katie_Sparrow101'}
20th February 2008:
pretty sad, but great story
11/10
keep up the great work!! :D
Author's Response: Thanks! I took a long time writing that story, longer than usual, so I'm glad you like it.
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19th February 2008:
wow
great start, loved it pleaase update soon!
9/10 :)
Author's Response: Thanks! And Yeah, I'm working on the Second Chapter now should be up by next week.
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{reviewid: 1836246, reviewer: 'katie_Sparrow101'}
19th February 2008:
omg.omg.
im hooked on this
you so have to uupdate ASAP!!
11/10
Author's Response: I'll update soon, thanks for the review
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{reviewid: 1835787, reviewer: 'katie_Sparrow101'}
18th February 2008:
interesting, can't wait to read more :)
please update
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{reviewid: 1835707, reviewer: 'katie_Sparrow101'}
18th February 2008:
wow
great chapter very interesting start, please update ASAP!
10/10
Author's Response: Thanks katie_Sparrow101 =]
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{reviewid: 1833558, reviewer: 'katie_Sparrow101'}
17th February 2008:
lol
that was very cute
Author's Response: Thanks - I'm glad you liked it :-)
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