Hey! Great start! I can't decide who I like better between Lynn and Cat. lol. Anyhow, I thought it was a bit odd that Lynn made up with her father so quickly after not seeing him for 13 years.

*makes fist and takes a swing* That's for Draco. He needs someone to perform an obliviate charm on him and maybe he'll forget to be the prick he is.

As a suggestion I think it'd be a good idea to either have this chapter italized or put a little note at the top saying this is about 13 years ago because it took a little bit for me to realize this was actually back in the Marauder's time. Maybe even both would be good.

Again, good plot, although I wouldn't mind if the chapters were a bit longer. lol.
9/10
Adding to faves.

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(shudders) I can't even imagine two-three days without sleeping, much less three weeks (That would mean three weeks of no dreams and I love dreams)! (Usually)lol.

I'm just curious, how long after the Trio's seventh year is this?
I'm of the opinion that something happened three weeks prior to this scene that's preventing Hermione from sleep and, because Harry and Ron don't seem to be having any problems, similar or other, it must be something they're unaware has happened.
Great start!
Note(I just had to come read after all the wonderful reviews you left me! Thanks for all your input!)
Also, I noticed you're banner request and would love to make one for this story if you don't mind, (unless someone else has already taken up the offer.) lol.
Thanks again for taking the time to both read and review my highly confusing story!

Author's Response: Yay! A review! And a long one at that! A true reviewer! :D

It is two or three years since Hogwarts. Not for sure yet, but later on I will be sure to make it noticed.

You're on a good start there, btw. But I won't give too much away! Then you wouldn't have to come back and read! ;_;

You're welcome for teh reviews! I hate when people read and don't review. So annoying. So I make it a point to review at least once, if not for every chapter.

And I would LOVE a banner for this story! Just email me!

Thanks!

-Dem

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It's actually against the rules to "threaten" not to update until you have a certain amount of reviews. You can neglect to update but aren't allowed to say in your story it's because you want more reviews. Everyone loves them. Me and my stories thrive on them but generally, unless you're a well known author unlike me, saying you'll not update until you have a certain amount of reviews won't do any good. I have four stories some with nine chapters, six chapters etc.. and I don't think I've ever gotten twenty reviews for one chapter.

Now onto the story. I think you have an excellent plot-line and will read on to see if Hermione's dreaming or why in the world she's married to *chokes in revulsion* Lucious.
There are minor things that I'd like to point out for this chapter first being that Hermione wouldn't act as she just did immediately after learning her parents were dead. She wouldn't want to go shopping and playfully ask Draco to take her. Maybe she'd go to get her mind off everything but still wouldn't be in the mood you've put her in.

I also noticed your comments about not being very good with spelling and grammar and I think you're doing fairly good. There are errors but then what author doesn't make those errors. There are sites that have tons have people willing to read stories and fix such errors. I think one of them is HPFF(dot)net
Sorry for the long review!

Author's Response: I'm glad you like the story. I wasn't aware that threatening was against the rules, but this isn't my story. Chrissy (also known as Katie) is no longer here on earth. She's singing with the angels in heaven. I'm going to finish her stories best I can, but I have a son (even though I'm 16) and I need to take care of him. Two more children have also been placed in my care and I have to work hard to care for all three of them. I will try to focus on the spots you've pionted out when I write the next chapter. :')

Jenny

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Hey! Great story so far! I just want to point out something crucial that I noticed. Hermione really shouldn't be saying Voldemort in the presence of his followers. It's a key pointer that she's with the rebellion who are generally known as the only ones who dare speak his name aloud.

This story is extremely well written from what I've seen with only minor spelling and grammar errors!
10/10

Author's Response: Thanks for the honest review!

I'll update soon :)

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First review for this chapter! lol the others were probably deleted when the site went down. I found this story only recently and I really like all the plots you have! I think it's a really good story-line and hope you'll update soon! It's been nearlly five months!

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First Review!
You are utterly amazing! An entire story up in three-four days! (Probably less). I wonder if Scorpius's father knows anything that would help. He seems like the most likely source right now seeing as how Lincoln and his mother are, of course, going to be of no help at all.
10/10

Author's Response: Yeah, exactly...
Thanks for calling me amazing! I don't think I am, but I guess that's just me :D
Anyway, I don't know where the information is going to come from yet!
Thanks for reading and reviewing!

xoxox

~ginny_malfoy22

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I'm loving this story a lot so far! I think it would be nice to have a chapter from Rose's point of view that's maybe like a memory of what actually happened or what she's been doing all this time or where she is.
If Parkinson is the kidnapper she wouldn't have any idea who he is or why he'd kidnap her (unless he told her) so it wouldn't let the cat out of the bag to early if you didn't want it to be.
10/10!

Author's Response: I think I'll have Rose telling them what happened after, but until then I don't want to give away what's happening with her...of course, I don't know yet anyway! Thanks for reading and reviewing!

xoxox

~ginny_malfoy22

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lol. Your Snape stories are hilarious. I loved the first one! I can't wait for the scene in which Snape finds Harry and Ron outside after they crashed into the whomping willow!

Please update soon!

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This is a wonderful start and I'm liking Draco a lot! However, not to be mean or anything, I find it odd and maybe a bit pathetic that one "low" grade is enough to drive Hermione to alchohol. I would think that her typical response to a B would be extreme disappointment and a resolve to study harder. No way would she resort to drinking over something as petty as one bad grade.

I'm still liking the plotline so on to the next chapter!

Author's Response: Hehe... thanks forthe R&R. And I agree that it seems like something really minor... but as you read on you'll find there's a bit more going on behind the scenes :)
Can't wait to see what you think of the rest of it!

~Moon~

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Ah. All caught up now! I'm loving the story so far and I don't think the relationship between Draco and Hermione is moving too quickly.
I have a small request though that I hope you'll give a little thought. On the tv show the Batchelor has a certain number of roses which he picks up and calls out the name of each of the girls he's chosen until the roses are gone. I love the emotion and feeling during it and would love if, (now that we're down to only five girls) you could incorporate that in the story for these last three rose ceremonies.
However whether you do or not the story is excellent! I just miss that part of the rose ceremony.

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what i would give to see 27 year old girls skipping around a table!

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Thank you for doing memories from each year! Most authors I've seen do flashbacks like this do first year, second year, maybe third year then skip to sixth or seventh.
I burst out laughing when I read the second year one. I would have paid gold to see that!

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Pity he couldn't send Parvati away, but I guess it's something to look forward too!

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I know it's a little tiring to get reviews that consist only of the words Amazing! Great Job! but I can't find anything to critique and I'm loving the story!
I love how you actually put French words in (Even though I've got no clue what they mean) because it adds to the story a lot!
Pansy's reaction was priceless. Can't wait for Hermione's reaction to when she sees that Draco is the Batchelor.

And because I didn't leave a review on the previous chapter I'll add a little about it here.
I loved Hermione's daydream about the batchelor. He'd love books, open the door for her, etc... It made me laugh (not because it was bad) Great Job so far!
~butterfliesneedwings
lol(someone's gonna have to pull me away so I get something done today other than reading this!)

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I love this idea! The scene in which Ron and Harry are filling out the form is simply hilarious!
Adding to faves!

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Loved it! I've always wondered what their reaction would be but everything I thought up was going overboard or not too far. Excellent!!

Author's Response: Aw wow.

Thank you so much for your lovely review!

I'm glad you enjoyed this one!

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I think you did wonderful with this chapter! Although I do hope nothing happened to Lily. When Voldemort saw his death eaters closing in on Frank and Alice that wasn't now was it?

Author's Response: *blushes* Thank you!

It might have been Frank and Alice - that was probably my idea at the time. Though it might have been Lily and James for one of those times that they eluded the Death Eaters.

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I wonder if Snape knows the change in Emilia is because of him. What would he do if he found out her dreamy looks the teachers keep pulling her out of are when she thinks of him?

Author's Response: He would probably scowl and run away - at least, he would in DH canon. For this story, he would probably just scowl. :P

Thanks for reviewing! :)

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Utter Crap? This chapter? NO! This chapter was awesome and definitely worth the nearly three month wait (I think) I loved it and can't wait for the next. I hope it's as long as this one was! I loved Hermione's response towards Mrs. Weasley's gift!(laughs)
20/10

Author's Response: Wow, thank you! I doubt it was worth the three months, but thanks for saying so anyways. The next chapter will likely be as long as this one at the rate it's going now, so that's good news. I loved writing Hermione opening her presents (especially Mrs. Weasley's) so I'm glad you liked reading it!

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I loved this! Each of the characters were believable (which is an important factor for all stories). I've never read a story where a squib was born into a magical family so I decided to read this when I came to your page. I absolutely loved the ending. I only wish I could see Harry and Ginny's reactions when Rose tells them that not only is Dora not a squib but she is a very powerful witch! 10/10
Thank you so much for your amazing reviews on my story! I just had to thank you some how so I hope this is good!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review. I love feedback so I leave as much as I can for others. There is so much talent on this site, it is amazing. I will keep watching for more of your writing.

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Hey! You asked me to review this story so here I am!
I really love the idea for it (there aren't many stories about Luna) This chapter is more like an introduction so the readers know exactly where your starting off from and going to. I'm guessing from the abrupt ending that the next chapter is going to be about when Josef received his Hogwarts letter.
If I'm correct than I think it'll be extremely interesting to find out about what his life was like growing up with Regulus as a father. how old was he when Regulus died? (Old enough to know about the locket and maybe be asked to keep it safe?) ((Just an idea)) If Regulus died when he was young who did he live with?
I can't wait for your next chapter! Please update soon!
Also thanx for your wonderful review on my story!

Author's Response: Hey, tanks 4 ur review!

Um, well all the raiseing details and parent stuff is explained in the second chap, which is awaiting validation.
It's actually all like the books. So if you've read the 7th book you now that Regulus dies before Voldemort even kills harry's parents.

No problem, your story was great!

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A werewolf (sighs) Poor Holly. Is she a muggle? Or a muggle-born witch? Either way she's going to spend the next seven years wondering what's wrong with her. You're summary was one of the strangest I've ever read! I thought I'd read it to see how it was before adding it to my faves but now that I've read it I have to see what's next.
I wish I could say I was one of those authors that don't pester you to review but I can't. My stories literally thrive on reviews. Well please update soon!

Author's Response: Actually, a vampire. I have made up a definition on vamipires that hunts at the full moon. She's a pureblood. :(

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An update! Finally! I love the Hermione/Victor pairing, although I've grown used to hearing (well reading actually) Victor's Bulgarian accent and it just adds more to the character. In this he could just be any guy at Hogwarts. (To me he's not really Victor without his accent, and because he doesn't have one he just seems to be portrayed as a totally different person) I'm not trying to be picky just thought I'd point this out as a suggestion.

Also I noticed your request for a banner. I don't make them (I'm a terrible artist believe me) but I have helped quite a few people on this site get one and I'd be more than happy to help you. Just email me at lily2james@hotmail.com and I'll help ya! Update soon please!

Oh and one other thing. I don't know if it was intentional or not but I just thought I'd let you know that your story doesn't allow anyone to review it unless they're logged in. I can see why you'd want this but I've found that reviews left by anonymous reviewers are a wonderful boost for inspiration (actually all of them are). I just thought I'd point this out so if you wanted to change it you could. To change it all you have to do is login and go to Edit Personal Information then click on the box that says allow anonymous reviwes.
10/10 for this chapter!

Author's Response: ahh i didnt ever think about the accent but i'll try to get better. thnx :D

yeah i'll definitely email u!!

oh yeah i'll fix that--thnx!! :D

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This story is awesome! I'm so glad there is going ot be a sequel! Will you email me once it's up? My email is lily2james@hotmail.com.

One thing I don't get is if Fergie can't take it then why doesn't she go back to being Hermione? I'm guessing from the note that she mean the way she was pretending to be someone other than Hermione but then again I could be wrong. Can't wait for the sequel!

Author's Response: You're on the right lines- You'll have to read the sequel though! Thanks for reviewing, an email is on its way =)

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I have dreams like that all the time! Every time i wake up i feel like saying what she did! I'm glad you finally updated and I hope you do again soon!

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