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Review #1, by dobbythefreeelf

The next Generation: The Hogwarts Express

3rd June 2008:

Hello!

I'm Flora's friend Amy from school.

I liked your story a lot, it was very descriptive. Hope you put another chapter up soon.

Ps. If you ever need an editor, I edit Flora's, so I could do yours too!

Author's Response: thankyou amy!

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Review #2, by dobbythefreeelf

The Kids: The Sorting

6th May 2008:

Well done!

A lot of listing but still very good. Longness is good!

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Review #3, by dobbythefreeelf

Harry Potter and the Essence of Life: Exciting Experiences in Diagon Alley

17th April 2008:

YAY FLOB! Another chapter (which sadly wasn't edited by me). IT WENT THROUGH!

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Review #4, by dobbythefreeelf

The Kids: The Journey

15th April 2008:

Right NJ, though I ODVIOUSLY think longness is good I like your story and get a move on and write another chapter.

Author's Response: DobbyTheFreeElf, the other chapter is on it's way, being validated at the moment!

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Review #5, by dobbythefreeelf

Harry Potter and the Essence of Life: Returning to Privet Drive

5th December 2007:

ELLO!
As editor in cheif I think it's a wonderful chapter that I umm spell checked and grammar checked and paragraph edited but you wrote! YAY!
Me

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