All the founders, umm isnt that a bit much? pardon me its not criticism, i mean i enjoyed the story and all but i was betting on at least two founders not all though. good job on this piece though, especially with fawkes and the O.O.T.P by the way is this a HG fic?Author's Response: if you meant HG by Harry/Ginny then yes it is, but romance wont be over done here as I cant write romance lol. Action is more my style lol lol.
As far as the founder's being too much, well yes in a way it is, but it is necessary for a major act that occurs in a couple of chapters time!! You'll just have to wait and see!! (it wont come as THAT much of a surprise but oh well lol)
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Hm.interesting, the orders after harry? whatever for I wonder? anyway great effort and two thumbs up on the chapter, although I was sorta hoping for general blood and mayhem. Yours is the first story that I have ever read that has dumbledore leaving harry a will at gringotts(waves original flag in the air), great job, keep it up...Author's Response: slightly sadistic arent you? lol lol lol Thank you very much!! I can give you a little hint for later in the story: There WILL be lots of blood and mayhem in the story, just be patient because it will be a little ways away!! lol lol
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OOohhh.plotting an escape now are we??? EXceleeent.what next I wonder? diagon alley? matters not, I like the way this story is shaping up. Does he come back later and torture them??? dont tell me, Ill stay tuned he he he he eh ok, Good story, nice effort and hope you keep it up so I can find out what happens!Author's Response: Thank you very much!! It is always nice to have another reviewer!!
I hope that you will enjoy this story!!
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Another intense hit, you know I really got lost within that one...why dont you write more longer ones, stories I mean? just curious...I really like the part about remus reading and tonks tripping, again! It was sad but inspirational...hmmm, harry raising ted(a morphing wolf?)??? another hit in the works, I wonder!!!Author's Response: I really like one shots. It really helps me write. I am writing two short stories at the moment. I have problems with plot, but I'm working on it. I love that part when Tonks trips over him. Thanks for the ted idea. mulling the idea in my head.
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WOW! That was pretty good, I have to admit I'm not much of a sev fan, personally I think sirius was right he is a greasy git but that...wow...that was awesome, you know put in that light snape seems more broken I think, just an observation. But I love the way you got the details to enhance your story, who knows keep writing more good fics about good ole sevvy like this and you just might convert me!!!
_DMC_Author's Response: I hope i converted you. I love snape. In HBP I really disliked him with a passion. Then in DH I found the truth and I loved him again. Thanks^_^ Gypsy_mask Report Review
thats a cool ending my friend...this chapter rocks! Report Review
ohhh nice!!! more power? so does this means theres gonna be more action? Report Review
awww come on...that cliffy was tottally wicked by the way hope theres more where that came from. Report Review
and than the clock slowly starts ticking...tick...tick...tick, sorry just needed to get that out, so ole lucious made himself comfortable in ole snakys hut huh? blonde git, I pray the author leads him to a wholesome gruesome death after all medieval times are hard. can you make godric eat him? after all he is a lion... Report Review
and here I was expecting ole voldie to make an appearance, o well one can only hope! Report Review
woah that was a shocker...patronus blood? that one's a rarity that is...nice to know such a thing exists, you get ten points for that, go on pat yourself on the back...(i know you want to hehehe) Report Review
good god mahn what is it??? dont leave me hanging off the edge of my seat.garrrh! Report Review
heay my heart leaps with joy at the words approaching danger, not that I dont like the story!!! I'm just a sucker for action...shall we get on with it than? Report Review
let me guess...he got busted by the lion himself??? well only one way to find out, on to the next chapter!!! Report Review
ah the plot thickens, i wonder what happens when the storys done? guess i'll just have to read to find out more... Report Review
ohhh somethings got ole magister snake on the run...sik me 'arry, lol really like this chapter although its probably due to what the lessons are..! on to the next chapter than... Report Review
not bad, not bad, has more of a filler to it, this chapter does but I aint complaining...in fact its quite good since now the real fun can begin, i mean the real learning heheheh. Report Review
hahahahaha misalo'dge ee az emerged, loooks like the rats outta the cage now mate, kinda sad though salazar actually had to look through his mind for that? wonder what that crafty ole fox rowena is up to??? anyways nice chapter loved it... Report Review
well i have to say I was kinda dissapointed, I was expecting harry to put up more of a fight and maybe get into a tussle with the almighty magister slytherine??? anyways onward and upward. Report Review
This keeps turning out better and better but I dont understand why rowena knew so much? was she reading the wands for spells cast? just curious... Report Review
Deatheater following him.??? interesting if I do say so myself. It was short but sweet, cant wait to read the next! Report Review
OH MY GOD...that was one of a kind, why don't you write a story out of it, although some parts are tricky like;
(a) giving him voldemorts wand?
(b) rons jealousy and hermione's forgiveness...
(c) harry sacrificing his soul?
(d) killing voldemort with a gun?
(e) the burrow? wouldnt they move if they knew harry would give up himself?
But I digress, (laughs) im just ranting away like a madman forgive me...I do like it though. its a awesome idea, such great thoughts can only lead to even greater stories.Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing. Report Review
I saw a pattern in the way you wrote your conclusions for chapters but I'm way impressed at how you develope your stories, would love to read more...
_DMC_Author's Response: Well, honestly i don't want to do a lot for summary. I think that's a problem, but yeah that's all i can give. ^_^, i do really hope you'll continue to read. It'll be great if you can keep to review too. I want to know about my work. Thanks a lot for reviewing. Report Review
I got abit confused mate about the tests and the voice but thats on purpose huh???
i hoping you make more chapters soon, cant wait.Author's Response: ^_^, someone told me something similar to those. I'll try my best to be better. Thanks a lot for reviewing. Report Review
i really enjoyed reading your story please do continue...looking forward to the sequel, keep up the great writing : )Author's Response: Thanks very much i will do so Report Review
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