{reviewid: 1938637, reviewer: 'cluckboy'}
1st June 2008:
Great Chapter!
Do more!more!more!
10/10
P.S Review 500 yay!
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{reviewid: 1911227, reviewer: 'cluckboy'}
1st May 2008:
very good chapter!
I like the fact that you don't carry on with dialog for too long, you describe things VERY well
Do the next chapter VERY VERY quickly
Author's Response: Thanks. I'll try to get the next up quickly.
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{reviewid: 1830949, reviewer: 'cluckboy'}
14th February 2008:
very good story so far NEVER STOP WRITING
Author's Response: Thanks, I hope to post the next chapter soon.
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{reviewid: 1816635, reviewer: 'cluckboy'}
3rd February 2008:
Really good chapter
please write and submit the next chapter quickly!
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{reviewid: 1801554, reviewer: 'cluckboy'}
22nd January 2008:
A Great start to your fan fic!
i am wanting for more chapters to come
my only thing is that alot of what you said in the prophecy was too childish for my liking, i know its only 12+ but i think you could've used better words than 'evilly'
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{reviewid: 1801090, reviewer: 'cluckboy'}
21st January 2008:
very good an unpredictable ending
Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you liked it.
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{reviewid: 1793831, reviewer: 'cluckboy'}
16th January 2008:
very good chapter!!!
but it was a bit too short for my liking, i thought you could have elaborated on things a bit more. Like i said thats just my thoughts on it
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{reviewid: 1783341, reviewer: 'cluckboy'}
8th January 2008:
very very good chapter!
and a very very good and annoying way to end it!
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{reviewid: 1750865, reviewer: 'cluckboy'}
13th December 2007:
great one-shot
you still amaze with your writing ability
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{reviewid: 1747480, reviewer: 'cluckboy'}
10th December 2007:
oh what a great chapter
Please! finish the next chapter very very fast
i dont even care if you lose your job that get that chapter on this website lol
from cluck
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