{reviewid: 2164793, reviewer: 'RAB'}
16th July 2009:
Hey, this is Astoria_Greengrass from the forums...
I really love the start of your story! It's very attention grabbing. You did a great job of showing the character's emotions and her struggle over love. I can't wait to read more of it!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reviewing! I'm working on the next chapter as we speak!
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{reviewid: 2155686, reviewer: 'RAB'}
5th July 2009:
So cute! Loved it. Oh Teddy.
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{reviewid: 1949383, reviewer: 'RAB'}
11th June 2008:
A couple of grammar issues, like at the very end you use "you're" for "your", but other than that its pretty good.
Author's Response: Thanks so much! (I really should reread my stories before I post them lol)
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{reviewid: 1947973, reviewer: 'RAB'}
10th June 2008:
i thought Scorpius was a chaser, not a seeker. You should make sure you stay consistent.
Author's Response: I KNOW. I'm very sorry, that is my greatest downfall as an author.
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{reviewid: 1947356, reviewer: 'RAB'}
9th June 2008:
Interesting story plot, though I do believe I have seen it before. Nonetheless the story is still very good. Update soon.
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{reviewid: 1919660, reviewer: 'RAB'}
10th May 2008:
So cute! I really do enjoy Victorie/Teddy stories.
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{reviewid: 1919311, reviewer: 'RAB'}
10th May 2008:
Good so far and it is interesting to see someone besides Rose pregnant. wow that sounds weird. haha.
Author's Response: i know i thought it sounded weird when I wrote it, but it's a sad but true fact. thanks for the review, next chapter should be up soon...hopefully :P
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{reviewid: 1918882, reviewer: 'RAB'}
9th May 2008:
Its interesting; I never would have imagined Ron a Death Eater, but it is an interesting thought.
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{reviewid: 1918866, reviewer: 'RAB'}
9th May 2008:
It's good so far, but it kind of seemed like you rushed too fast into Lily and Scorpius hating each other to them being "friends"
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{reviewid: 1908391, reviewer: 'RAB'}
27th April 2008:
I love your story. It seems like right now there are a lot of Scropius/Rose stories with Rose being pregnant, but yours is without a doubt the best. Seriously, I cannot wait until the next chapter.
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{reviewid: 1906436, reviewer: 'RAB'}
26th April 2008:
Yeah! I'm so glad you updated! I LOVE this story! It is a fantastic story and I really love the plot.
Author's Response: Well, I'm glad 'it' updated! Heehee Thanks for the comment, I'm glad you like this story. :)
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{reviewid: 1902992, reviewer: 'RAB'}
22nd April 2008:
I love Roger Davies now. haha they are sooo cute together.
Author's Response: Roger Davies is the shiz
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thanks for the review
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{reviewid: 1898482, reviewer: 'RAB'}
17th April 2008:
very good! Alice and David are so cute!
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{reviewid: 1893570, reviewer: 'RAB'}
12th April 2008:
I really love when people use these lesser known and used characters, such as Roger Davies! Your story is coming along wonderfully!
Author's Response: Yay! I was worried that people wouldn't like it because there aren't any big canon charries. I'm glad you like it though!
xo
hula
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{reviewid: 1849343, reviewer: 'RAB'}
1st March 2008:
loved it! I love Blaise/Hermione fics, and as much as I love Ron--I love seeing Hermione with others...
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