{reviewid: 1800818, reviewer: 'dracoluver87'}
21st January 2008:
very good story and i hpe you keep up the good work in ur writing
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{reviewid: 1800804, reviewer: 'dracoluver87'}
21st January 2008:
it is very good everything is happening so fast though
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{reviewid: 1800796, reviewer: 'dracoluver87'}
21st January 2008:
wow really good i cant wait to read more
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{reviewid: 1800781, reviewer: 'dracoluver87'}
21st January 2008:
wow really great short but great
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{reviewid: 1800771, reviewer: 'dracoluver87'}
21st January 2008:
so what does red mean im confused and draco must have had known tis was gana happen since he gav the ring to her.wow it is a great story so far
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{reviewid: 1800751, reviewer: 'dracoluver87'}
21st January 2008:
o it is grat so far i cant wait to read more
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{reviewid: 1799736, reviewer: 'dracoluver87'}
21st January 2008:
OK LIKE THIS WOULD HAPPEN YOUR VERY FUNNY WHY COULDNT RON GET HIS GROVE ON.LOL.IT WAS A WOUNDERFUL CHAPTER AND I CANT WAIT TO READ MORE
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{reviewid: 1797056, reviewer: 'dracoluver87'}
19th January 2008:
Hermione.Revenge...its all a twists but a god one..
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{reviewid: 1797051, reviewer: 'dracoluver87'}
19th January 2008:
Very rushed when and why did draco start liking hermione??? you have to include these things but it is still good.
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{reviewid: 1797042, reviewer: 'dracoluver87'}
19th January 2008:
very interesting.i still cant stop reading so your doing great
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{reviewid: 1797030, reviewer: 'dracoluver87'}
19th January 2008:
very rushed but still good.
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{reviewid: 1797027, reviewer: 'dracoluver87'}
19th January 2008:
its good. i hate cliffhangers though...lol...no its great i hpe you keep me this intrested through the whole story
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{reviewid: 1796478, reviewer: 'dracoluver87'}
18th January 2008:
OK real funny chapter and i cant waitto read more so please hurry with the next chapters
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{reviewid: 1796453, reviewer: 'dracoluver87'}
18th January 2008:
GAY? RON GAY!?!?!?! i cant bepive the twist and turns you put in a story ur god! please keep writing it is aweome
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I try :P
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{reviewid: 1796433, reviewer: 'dracoluver87'}
18th January 2008:
Yoh r a fantasic writer and i hope ur next story is just as wounderful
Author's Response: Thanks! Please leave a review there too! I love reviews!
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{reviewid: 1792746, reviewer: 'dracoluver87'}
15th January 2008:
ok every good and i now know why it takes peolpe forever to udate there stories its this site. but hey you are doing great maybe if you have time you can check my story out i only have two chapters posted and the third is waiting to be validated...i cant wait to read more of your story.
Author's Response: I will definitely check out your story! Yes, validation can take up to 10 days sometimes, and then if you are rejected because of sexual content (this has happened to me a few times and I had to tone it down lol) it can take up to 2 weeks or more! A bit frustrating at times. I will go read your story now :D Thanks!
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{reviewid: 1787681, reviewer: 'dracoluver87'}
11th January 2008:
ok good story but but come on and keep writing the story im waiting for the next chapter
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{reviewid: 1787597, reviewer: 'dracoluver87'}
11th January 2008:
Keep writing and cant wait for the next chapter
Author's Response: VALIDATE FASTER!!! The suspense is killing me too!
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{reviewid: 1787595, reviewer: 'dracoluver87'}
11th January 2008:
By far a great story you inspired me to write my own story!
Author's Response: Thanks Sis! ;)
I try...
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{reviewid: 1786451, reviewer: 'dracoluver87'}
10th January 2008:
Ok come on you got to write more it is awesome story and im waiting on a limb here just to see wat happenss
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{reviewid: 1778599, reviewer: 'dracoluver87'}
4th January 2008:
Now thats a sex scene gosh your good you have to keep writing it is fabulous.
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{reviewid: 1778089, reviewer: 'dracoluver87'}
4th January 2008:
Come on chica this is one hell of a story lets se more of it
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{reviewid: 1759579, reviewer: 'dracoluver87'}
20th December 2007:
Come on waiting on the new chapter its great so far
Author's Response: I have been waiting for 8 days for validation from the moderators on this site :( It isn;t because I haven;t uploaded the next installments....I have...just waiting for them :( Unfortunately they are closing the queue on the 22nd for Christmas...and won;t reopen until january so...I really hope they upload the next chaps of mine before then. I can and will lodge a complaint tomorrow if the chapter isn't up, as it is my right to do so per the TOS of this site. Thanks and I apologize but it is coming!!
Jenny
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{reviewid: 1751789, reviewer: 'dracoluver87'}
13th December 2007:
nice very good its geting much better but i do say its already good so keep up te good work.Penis>lol
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{reviewid: 1749589, reviewer: 'dracoluver87'}
11th December 2007:
Come on im waiting on an updtae this story is as good as the first so update please
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