{reviewid: 2734971, reviewer: 'jenkent'}
26th August 2012:
Nice story. I liked the development of their relationship. Great job. The only criticism I have is that the ending was kinda abrupt, but other than that, wonderful writing.
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{reviewid: 2729718, reviewer: 'jenkent'}
9th August 2012:
Aww.I loved it!! So romantic!! Beautiful job!!! Very well-written too!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review :)
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{reviewid: 2729626, reviewer: 'jenkent'}
9th August 2012:
LOL. Wonderful story. LOVED the ending!! Great job!
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I'm glad you liked it. :)
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{reviewid: 2729442, reviewer: 'jenkent'}
8th August 2012:
Beautiful story! I was worried for a moment it would turn out like a tragic Romeo/Juliet story, but I'm glad you let them be together in the end. :) Great job. Interesting plot line as well.
Author's Response: jenkent,
Thank you! I'm so happy to read your comment about this story.
It really could've turned into tragedy, but I just couldn't do it. I just love these two so much.
I love writing (and reading) sad, emotional stories, but I enjoyed writing the Obliviation twist. I think it helped to keep things interesting and still highly emotional.
I'm so happy that you took the time to tell me how much you liked it.
Thank you so very much.
Sincerely,
Dark Whisper
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{reviewid: 2728361, reviewer: 'jenkent'}
6th August 2012:
Very nice. Would have loved to see if anything could have developed later for them, but understand leaving it where you did. Nice job. Overall, loved it.
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{reviewid: 2728355, reviewer: 'jenkent'}
6th August 2012:
Interesting story. Very nice. Great story idea.
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{reviewid: 2728353, reviewer: 'jenkent'}
6th August 2012:
Very nice. Well-written. I like the fact the Draco seduces Hermione into staying with him after the discovery. :)
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{reviewid: 2728204, reviewer: 'jenkent'}
5th August 2012:
I really rather liked the adventures Hermione and Draco went through. Liked the second ending better. Still craving more tho. Understand about not writing more tho. Great job!!
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{reviewid: 2728129, reviewer: 'jenkent'}
5th August 2012:
Very nice. I really liked it. Very well-written and great job with the development of the characters feelings throughout.
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{reviewid: 2727413, reviewer: 'jenkent'}
3rd August 2012:
Quite nice. I thought the whole relationship went a bit fast tho. I would have liked some backstory or a more detailed account of a date or the wedding. Very good grammar and writing.
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{reviewid: 2663467, reviewer: 'jenkent'}
22nd February 2012:
Very cute! I loved it! Very unique plot. Wonderful job.
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{reviewid: 2620372, reviewer: 'jenkent'}
24th November 2011:
Great story! Loved it from beginning to end. You mixed just enough mystery, romance, and drama into the story. Wonderful job!
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{reviewid: 2617229, reviewer: 'jenkent'}
17th November 2011:
Very cute story! I loved it. The plot was very unique and the story quite well-written. Great job!
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{reviewid: 2614661, reviewer: 'jenkent'}
11th November 2011:
Cute idea. Very nice.
Author's Response: thanks very much
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{reviewid: 2614045, reviewer: 'jenkent'}
10th November 2011:
Very cute. I like how Blaise and Ginny are both trying to talk them out of it and aren't having any luck. Great idea.
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{reviewid: 2609360, reviewer: 'jenkent'}
29th October 2011:
Interesting. I liked it a lot. A few typos throughout, but other than that.great writing.
Author's Response: Damn those typos! Thank you so much for the review and I'll make sure I correct those! Must have overlooked them in the frenzy to meet the deadline for the challenge :P
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{reviewid: 2608974, reviewer: 'jenkent'}
29th October 2011:
Very nice! I loved it! Just the right amount of drama mixed in with the humor and romance. Great job.
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{reviewid: 2605805, reviewer: 'jenkent'}
22nd October 2011:
Very cute story! I absolutely loved it! I also liked how you switched between the different points of view. Wonderfully entertaining and well-written story. Great job! 10/10
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{reviewid: 2602841, reviewer: 'jenkent'}
15th October 2011:
Very nice story. I was a bit concerned about how you would work out the unfaithful Ron angle, but I thought you took a unique avenue and did a great job! Again, wonderful story. 10/10
Author's Response: thank you so much :) I'm glad that you liked it. I tried to make it different from the other stories I've read where Ron is the unfaithful one. I'm glad you liked it :)
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{reviewid: 2598717, reviewer: 'jenkent'}
5th October 2011:
Very nice. Well-written. Great job!
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{reviewid: 2598565, reviewer: 'jenkent'}
4th October 2011:
Great story. Very cute. Loved the rebellious Scorpius.
Author's Response: Haha, thanks I'm glad you enjoyed it
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{reviewid: 2598302, reviewer: 'jenkent'}
4th October 2011:
Loved it! Very cute and unique idea. Great reaction by Hermione at the end. :)
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{reviewid: 2597682, reviewer: 'jenkent'}
2nd October 2011:
Very cute. I really liked it. Great job. I liked the idea of having her scare off each guy one at a time.
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{reviewid: 2595933, reviewer: 'jenkent'}
28th September 2011:
That was amazingly good. I loved it! Great job on the fluff and romance end. Neat idea to have Hermione scared of thunderstorms. :)
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{reviewid: 2595598, reviewer: 'jenkent'}
27th September 2011:
Cute. Very nice. There's a bit of capitalization and grammar issues, but the flow went well.
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