Reading Reviews From Member: SkitzoChikc
  
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Review #1, by SkitzoChikcA Blessing to magic: A sleeping angel

26th July 2004:
I have to agree also; it's deffinetly not "the best" but it could deffinetly be better. I think that if you elaborated on the details a little bit, and tried to refrain from making everything sound like slug lines, it might not be too bad. And also, another thing, I didn't like how you just jumped into the story, you have to ease your way in, explain in details how it got to the point that Dumbledore is sitting in his office thinking about this monster.

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Review #2, by SkitzoChikcTruth be Told: Chapter 4: A Matter of Trust

22nd July 2004:
Just a question...in the fifth book it said that the order had taken up residence within Hogwarts didn't it?

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Review #3, by SkitzoChikcTruth be Told: Chapter 2a: Confession and Flight

22nd July 2004:
Ewww...something to critisize, though, not really. In one of the last paragraphs you wrote "How could she possibly think that it was her fault that his mother had died" But I think what you meant to write was more along the lines of " How could she possibly think that it was HIS fault that his mother had died" Just a thought, I could have read it wrong.

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Review #4, by SkitzoChikcTruth be Told: From Past, With Love

22nd July 2004:
You're a brilliant writer ... I found it hard to tell wether or not I was reading JK's own work or someone elses. Amazing and I love it. Keep up the good work. I'd give you some sort of constructive critisism, but I have so far found nothing to critisize.

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