It's good, but it feels a little awkward when Arthur and Harry are talking about when Harry's going to marry Ginny. They aren't even dating yet! That kind of threw me off. And also, just a little grammar, the your in you're welcome has the apostrophe 're because it's a contraction.

Other than that it's good though!!!

Author's Response: I was of the same openion (Spell-check is my friend) I hated the Arthur Harry conversation in the barn, I was hopeing that the readers would pay more attention to what was going on rather than what was being said. This was written for a monthly competition for SIYE. If you thought what Grammar problems you found were horrific, you should have see it in it's entireity. This draft is missing about another 400 or so words. I cut a whole scene that really was crap. But, even with all of the flaws that are left the story was fun and left you with a good feeling. That in it self makes it worth publishing, don't you think?
It has been found that my writing has Grammar issues and that I do tend to drift in and out between first and third person. But I am just learning about things like that. My teachers in school followed the first rule (There are no rules in writing) and never corrected me. They even taught spelling by sound at the time. I'm trying to correct myself of these flaws now. Thanks much for the review.

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yay!!! thank you for finally bringing them back together!!

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it's so good! my only complaint is that you aren't updating fast enough! just kidding, i'm just a very impatient person! lol, keep it up!

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It's soo good! I love how different Hogwart's is than what you usually hear! And the story is really good too! it's so different from all the other James/Lily stories I've read! I've also liked your other stories too! Keep it up!

Author's Response: Dear prongsflower4ever,
Aw thanks so much! I thought it would be horrible making Hogwarts seem like a different place, but people actually enjoy it! Thank you so much for reading my other stories too;)
Your Obedient Servant,
The Phantom

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it's really good! and thanks for reviewing mine as well!
keep it up!

Author's Response: No problemo, and thanks~

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I can't really tell if Sirius is just being a good friend, or if he likes Lily. It'd be nice if you could make that more clear.

Author's Response: haha - it becomes a lot more clear in the next chapter - just read on!

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It's really good! I don't know if you want to add songs, but the song Yes I Do by Rascal Flatts is perfect for James. Please update it soon!

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it's a good plot, but it's kind of confusing. you might want to space things out, and not switch views as much.

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it's good, but i think you spend a little too long describing Lily, and you forgot the xoxo after 'you know you love me'. like:
you know you love me
xoxo
Gossip Girl

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i think that there are heads dorms, but i think that like the regular dorms, while males wouldn't be allowed in the head girls dorm, females would be allowed in the head boys dorm. you know, because the founders trusted girls more than boys?

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please get lily and james back together!

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It's good, but it's kinda confusing to have it in italics. Btw, how do you do italics and bold?

Author's Response: Wen you're typing it into that little box there's the little bold underline and italics boxes across the blue bit. And I usually write my fanfics in Word first so the italics and bold sometmes get messed up and I haven't had the chance to update it and check it over yet. Sorry! Thanks for reading!

:)

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Didn't Snape create the Sectumsempra spell? And therefore, Dumbledore wouldn't have been able to research it because it wouldn't be in a book.

Author's Response: you're probably right. but dumbledore has ways of researching without books, and he rarely misses anything that goes on in his school ^_^ *mysterious*
Rhona

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I liked you using Taylor Swift's name! I love all of her songs, and it just made me smile. Thanks!

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i'm sorry, but Lily would never be a Slytherin. i thought this would be better.

Author's Response: Dear prongsflower4ever,
Keep reading, it gets better;)
Your Obedient Servant,
The Phantom

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it's good, but you might want to edit it for some spelling and grammar mistakes. otherwise i like it a lot!

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it's good! i really like it, but please bring james back soon! and please update it often!

Author's Response: Hehe, I KNOW. Everybody wants James!! Keep reading....

Thanks.

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good job! you did a good job keeping the characters personalities the same. update it soon, please!

Author's Response: thanks prongsflower4ever....i try my best :)

Nym

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It's really good! I especially like the last scene, in the rain. The characters are portrayed well. Please update it soon! 100/10

Author's Response: thanks!! i'm glad you like it :)

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really good! please update it soon!

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it's REALLY good! i love how you included the mauraders and fred and george! i also like that scopius malfoy is nice and in gryffindor. great job! please update it soon! 100/10

Author's Response: Thanks so much for the great review. I'm so happy that you like it. Wow, that's some rating you give the chapter.

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it's really good! at first i was doubtful that it'd be that good, but now i'm seriously laughing out loud! good job! update it soon!

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad to hear you're laughing! It makes me feel all happy inside! :)

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It's really good! Update soon!

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really good! i've been waiting for this since i finished the seventh book (aka since the day after DH came out)! good job sticking to the personalities! please update it soon! 100/10

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it's good, but you can't conjure food. other than that, though, it's good.

Author's Response: You can't create food out of thin air! You can, however, conjure food from another place as long as you know where it's coming from. Lily got it from the kitchens. ♥ I appreciate your insight and review, though! Thanks!

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