i been checking every day 4 an update...
i know u r busy n all but pls pls try n update as soon as possible...
chap 4 on ur other story was really good... cant wait to read the next one here...
good luck with ur final yr !
alifiyaAuthor's Response: i'm sorry that i've been so elusive due to law school, but i hope to have some updates for you this month. i'm in my last semester for law school, and while i still have things to do, i'm not as busy as i was this past semester. i will update as soon as ch 38 is stamped with my approval. lol. Report Review
amazing is all i can say.
worth the wait...
pls pls pls keep writting both ur stories.
good luck with ur final yr !Author's Response: lol. i'm glad you are enjoying both of my stories! this is my last year of law school so my time has been pushed more in that direction. i hope that this last semester will remain as free as possible so i have time for my writing as well. thanks for reviewing! Report Review
if this is just scene 1 then i don know what suprises u have 4 us in the whole chapter ! loved the chapter so far.
the wand thing was just too good !!! amazing.
u make voldy look so foolish n a looser !
"You've just been had by a Marauder". what a statemant n what attitude yaar ! love it.
pls update soon pls !
dying to read more... pls dont hurt lily n james too much !
i have loadz of questions. when does snape come into view ??? does he help in the escape.??? when will harry come to lily n james life ?
i know u have planned all this but i just cud not help, but ask.
update soon !
happy writing & happy summer !
alifiyaAuthor's Response: lol. i'm glad you liked the start of ch 36. i just posted the rest of it so hopefully it meets your expectations! as for your questions: snape will have a small appearance in this chapter (albeit indirectly), but then not until later (prophecy, etc). in the story, the timeline is about mid-april 1979 right now so harry will come toward the end of the year. everything is all planned out so have no worries! ;) Report Review
how did the LAST final go ? all set n free now ???
well read the chapter once again so tot of reviewing again !
pls post soon yaar.. cant wait to read more... n i know its a james n lily fic... but, the way u write ur characters makes me think abt them too... just like lily n james... its ur story n i just love to read it... its perfect. cant wait to read more.
happy writing !
alifiyaAuthor's Response: all of my finals went as well as can be expected. lol. i won't really know until the end of the month. i'm glad you like how i write the characters and develop the story. more is definitely on the way! Report Review
sorry 4 the late review... was busy with loads of stuff.
n e ways.. the wait really paid off... it was too too good !
really funny n i love james even more after reading this !
he is a real darling !
u write really well... how come u landed up with financial aid papers ?!?
on the whole a grt one shot ! loved it !Author's Response: thanks! i'm glad you liked the short! :) i've been madly in love with james since forever, i think. hehe. anyway, i'm in law school and it's that time of year for financial stuff; since i'm an independent in the US, i file all of that stuff myself. and then there's the school paperwork, and i wanted to study abroad this summer... let's just say i'm glad everything's turned in for the most part. now, i just have registration, papers, and finals to worry about. lol. oh, the lovely days of graduate school... Report Review
AMAZING is just not the word to describe this chapter... by far my favourite n i bet loads of ppl here will tell u same thing !!!
seriously u r one hell of a writer n the way u potray james n lily... its like... u make me fall 4 them all over again !
n the sirius part with potion ! hats off to u !
"i treat u wonderfully chrissy !!!" hahahahahaha to c sirius like tht... its just too too good !!
pls pls pls update soon...
u r doing a grt job though v know the end is now pretty close
i just cant wait to read more n more of it !
happy writing !
alifiyaAuthor's Response: i'm glad you liked it! happy to hear you are in love with lily and james as well as sirius and christina. more will be posted as soon as i can. you can read my short in the meantime... hopefully, it will post by sunday! Report Review
really sorry 4 the late rewiew.
wonderful chapter. amaging the history stuff was just too too good !
i just cant wait to read more n more of it.
pls pls update as soon as possible !!!Author's Response: no problem, happy to hear you enjoyed the chapter, more should be posted soon. Report Review
it was indeed a really sad chapter but u ended it really well.
i don know how but... u seriously potray realtionships really well... b it friendship or a romantic one or bteween sibbling or b it parents.
u really show the essence of the whole relationship n thts the bestest part of ur writting.
i love chrissy 4 being such a great friend.!
all in all a perfect chapter once again !
pls update ch 31 asap... pls
n hey !just a little in hint of whats coming up next apart from the marriage. will do wonders 4 me !
good luck !!!Author's Response: i'm glad you like how i portray relationships. it's my favorite part of the writing... chrissy rocks, period. lol. i have lots still to write for ch 31, but i will do my best not to keep everyone waiting. as for what else is coming besides a wedding, i do believe it's about time for us to see some action at some point. ;) Report Review
just read the whole story toady.
too good ! loved it...
pls update soonAuthor's Response: thank you so much.
espically thanks for taking the time to review
**Arielle** Report Review
i dont know what to write... i m speechless.
u r too good man.
serious... i was like having butterflies myself !
n it feels too good to c sirius embarassed !
all in all amazing work !
u rock !Author's Response: that's very sweet of you. :) i'm happy that you like the writing. i am hoping to post ch 30 this weekend. Report Review
sorry was not a ble to review coz was out of town :(
well first of all. AMAZING CHAPTERS as usual.
finally sirius n christina r together !
i really missed reading the fanfic... seriously u r really too good...!
just keep updating more n more. waiting 4 the next chapter !!!
one more thing u have started adding action n stuff to the story but pls let not the romance element go down. please !
n e ways its ur story so pls do what u think is the best for it. i
was just making a suggestion !!!
whatever u write. i ll always review sooner or later !
u rock !
good luck !Author's Response: thanks! i'm happy to hear you are enjoying things. i will do my best to keep the romance in there. i think you'll like ch 29. :) action is going to be a forefront now though. Report Review
have u abandoned this story ?
come on its really nice..
do post soonAuthor's Response: Yes I have. SORRY. Report Review
too too too good !
the wait was completely worthed. loved the way u wrote abt exams n sirius charms prac was just awesome !
james panicing slightly n all... so detailed n well written. i loved it like n e thing.
n the celebration after the last exam n all of them sleeping in the heads common room was very touching n cute.
i love the way u write.. seriously ! hats off to u !!!
i wanted to b the first one to review but the moment i read the chap once i cud not help it but read it again again n again !
i hope u become a trusted author soon.
good luck with ur home work !
n ya pls post soon.. too many ppl waiting !Author's Response: lol. i'm glad you liked the chapter. i really enjoyed writing it, particularly tthe exams part. i will do my best with the chapters. ch 27 will be posted this afternoon. Report Review
finally. long wait but completely worthed !
awesome chapter... i have fallen in love with james all over again.
he is just too too good.
waiting 4 the next chapter. want to c how they manage after graduation, with work life n the order n all... i know james will make things extremely easy but still.
waiting 4 some action between the order n the deatheaters.as well as james n snape.
seriously ya.. i just cant wait to read more.
pls pls pls post soon.
well... last but not the least. "u rock" !
awesome work !!!Author's Response: lol. i'm in love with james myself. :) anyway, the next chapter will deal with NEWTs and graduation, but after that, we do have to get petunia's wedding, the order, jobs, etc. hopefully, action will pick up a bit for most people. however, good action also tends to end in heartache... ch 26 will post after teh queue closure. i have actually lots to update after the queue closure because i have a few things to edit within all of my stories. Report Review
hey... this chapter is so good.. its really nice to c james blend with the evans family so well... n the way u have potrayed petunia n marge is so good.
the best part of the chapter was james make a self potrait of himself just 4 lily.
keep up the good work.Author's Response: awww... i'm glad you enjoyed this chapter. i like writing the characters so i'm glad you think my portrayals are pretty accurate. :) Report Review
amazing chapter... loved it...
its so cool to read it from lily's point of view ! seriously.. too too good !!!Author's Response: Aww, thank you very much! I like writing from Lily's point of view, it's rather entertaining for me. So I'm glad you like it as well. Hugs. Report Review
this is a completely wonderful chapter... n to read from snape's point of view.. its just great...
james n lily were made 4 each other n i think i m in love with JAMES ! awesome work ! 100/100Author's Response: apparently, you're not the only one in love with james! lol. not just others, me too, come to think of it. i'm glad you enjoyed the snape bits! more should be posted soon! :) Report Review
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