It gave me warm fuzzies inside to see this new chapter, I'll admit it. I think the rewrite is better than the old one, even though I liked the other one too. :DAuthor's Response: Haha! Thanks so much! Your review gave me warm fuzzies inside xD
But seriously, it did. Anyway, thanks so much for the review. It's much appreciated. And yeah, the first one was nice, but I like the rewrite better. =]
Thanks again! Report Review
Yay! I read the first version of this story and it was okay, but I love this one! Keep updating, it seems really good. Report Review
*Laughing so hard* HAHAHA *Slides off computer chair and struggles to get back up* . . . *decides to type from the floor* That chapter was hilarious; please, please keep it up! Report Review
NO! How could you do that to poor Arya? Don't let her suffer!Author's Response: I know, I know and I felt badly also. I think she will be okay though, I mean, the partners aren't forever. Peyton however, I do not know if she will survive this experience. Let's hope so! Thanks for the review!
~Alassie~ Report Review
Update, I wanna see how it goes along before I dissect the story with advice/criticism/praise. But, excluding a few errors, it seems to be a good story!Author's Response: Thanks so much! I am trying to update more often, but school makes it so difficult, and I am doing my best, promise. I just got myself my beta back, so the mistakes should hopefully go down soon, I do the best I can. You have no idea how much your review means, it is the first one since all of them got deleted when the site went down! Thanks! Report Review
I'm gonna go straight to the point.
I. CAN'T. Watch. A. Good. Plot. Be. Wasted.
I know I sound harsh and you've probably cringed. Sorry 'bout that. Sincerely, I think you could do a LOT better. Write the draft on Microsoft Word, correct spelling mistakes and then paste it unto here. Character developement would help a lot.
If you have writer's block on a story then don't update for the sake of updating. Write patiently and have a good idea of what you're doing.
I know I sound like a teacher, but I suggest you reread the whole thing AFTER it's posted.
Good luck and Great plot! Report Review
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