How? And why? And - uh, stupid Artemis. Stupid knowing the future. I blame it for your plot-mover-on-er, accursed creature.
(Aside from how frustrating the development was, lovely chapter.) Report Review
I like the whole switchey-switch thing. I feel sorry for Scorpius...Author's Response: Hehe, thanks! Yay, mission accomplished! Scorpius is indeed a sad, you-can't-help-but-feel-sorry-for-him kind of character... Report Review
Ahh... that was a nice break from Greece and Rome. Lovely, very nice view on the new gen. And the chapter titles are great, too.Author's Response: Ooo, you're in Greece and Rome? That sounds fantastic! (Otherwise, you're just learning about them? Which is also kinda fun?) Report Review
Why yes, you did. I agree, with you... a lot of the plot was some exceptionally twisted version of the book. I like the story so far.Author's Response: Ugh, yes, it was very frustrating. Thanks so much for reviewing again! Report Review
Interesting take on all of them. I can't wait to see where it goes!Author's Response: Thanks! Keep reading :) Thanks so much for reviewing! Report Review
Yes, it is definitely worth continuing. It's a nice style, and I like the shoe-thing. Plus, it's Luis!Author's Response: Oh good, I'd be in quite a lot of trouble if it wasn't :P
I'm glad you like the style and the shoe-thing, it's my personal favourite as well :P Plus, it's Louis - although I imagine my attraction isn't quite on the same level as yours. Thanks for reviewing, look out for Ch.2 soon! Report Review
Ha! That was awesome. I like the choppy-ish journal style.Author's Response: Aw thank you ^^ I like it as well! So much that I decided to write a novel with it XD Report Review
I liked it, but you might want to look over it and repost. There's a good few typos and other dumb little things.
... Lysander! Or rather, Dominique! Why must you be so obtuse in your ways? Report Review
New banner and an update!?! Wicked. I love the banner, am happy for Rose and Charlie, and mad at Splinters.Author's Response: Thank you for the review! Report Review
Nooo! Why must they be so frustraiting? And then Riddle and Myrtle and Umbridge... Grr. Still loved the chapter, even if it didn't suit you. Hopefully you'l find the next one better?Author's Response: I'm asking myself the same question. Why can't they just be happy with one another, but I guess their personalities are of the conflicting sort. >.<
The next one should turn out better. I've already started planning it out, and it should work. The story's heading toward the end - maybe another five chapters? Less than eight, I'm sure. It'll be sad to end it.
Anyway, thank you very much for reading and reviewing! I really appreciate hearing from you, and it's great to know that you loved this chapter. That means a lot. ^_^ Report Review
Oh- there was a lot of description in this one! I liked it; it as easier to visualize the scenes. I can't wait for the next one!Author's Response: I did have a pretty clear picture in my head, that riding a thestral -- at least, one of these particular thestrals -- would be a lot like riding a horse. I kind imagined the sensation of an airplane taking off, combined with being on a horse that was sort of rushing a jump. But really -- who wouldn't want to ride a flying horse? Even a carnivorous, hairless one?
Thank you very much. I will try to have a chapter up before too long. Report Review
I feel so sorry for Sev... Great first chapter, though!Author's Response: I know! I've always been such a Snape fan. He's SO misunderstood. :-) Glad you liked it and thanks for the review! Report Review
Oh... poor James! Lily better fix things.
Great chapter!Author's Response: They should soon, don't worry :) Thanks for reading! Report Review
No! What has Skeeter done? Evil little reporter-thingy...
I love your story. Sorry I didn't review the past few chapters, but I was on a friends account.Author's Response: Oh, I totally understand that sometimes you just can\\\'t review. Thanks for taking the time now, though.
Yes, Skeeter is an evil woman, isn\\\'t she? I\\\'m not fond of her at all, and I think it shows in my writing.
Thanks for taking the time to let me know you\\\'re enjoying the story. I love to hear from readers!
-N.E.P. Report Review
That was an awesome chapter... I loved Hermione's line about the Marauders, Salazar's monster room, Godric's sports in general, and Helga's descrtion. :DAuthor's Response: Thank you very much! I'm glad you liked it :) Report Review
I like it so far. Keep it coming! :DAuthor's Response: Thank you so much! Report Review
Wow! This is awesome! I've never seen a fic staring a dementor... Great first chapter!Author's Response: Haha, thanks for the feedback :D Report Review
Ha! Now Neville is pulled into it, too. Great chap!Author's Response: Neville? Did you read ahead, or did you guess?
Thank you. I appreciate your comments a lot. Report Review
Teddy and Vic must be an extremly odd couple... Nice chapter!Author's Response: I don\\\'t know that they are such a terribly odd couple. It\\\'s just that Teddy is a bit insecure and Victoire, while Veela-rifically gorgeous, is not an intellectual.
Thank you for the very nice review. Report Review
I like your Scorpius; he's so original! :DAuthor's Response:
JKR doesn\\\'t tell us anything about Scorpius beyond the fact that he exists and who his parents are. It\\\'s fun to sort of write against the Malfoy grain.
I have to acknowledge, however, that this started out as a \\\"challenge\\\" story, in which Scorpius was a mandatory character.
Once again: I\'m delighted you enjoyed the story and I really appreciate your taking the time to post reviews. Report Review
wow, Ted just sounds like bucket loads of fun :D Interesting chapter... why does he need the Quidditch robes? Anywho, I liked it.Author's Response:
Well, Ted is an anxious young man. But I certainly have been having fun with him.
The Quidditch robe mystery will be answered shortly.
Thank you so much for writing. Report Review
Shel Silverstein is amazing, especially that poem. And poor Sirius... all angry and mad and stuff, but not really meaning it. Report Review
I liked the authors note just as much as the chapter, which was great. I can't wait to find out what happens next, so onward! :D Report Review
I liked the first little scene, but poor James!Author's Response: Thank you for reading and reviewing! Report Review
I liked Harry's apperance, and all the detail was good, too. Great one-shot!Author's Response: Thank you! Report Review
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