Very lovely.

Sweet and cute and fun and a very enjoyable read. Great job with this, keep up the awesome work!

 Report Review

very lovely.

this was unique and beautiful and overall a very sweet and simple story. i really enjoyed this read and you did a wonderful job writing this. keep up the fantastic work!

 Report Review

very lovely.

this was beautiful and very inspiring. i am not really sure why, but the depth with which you wrote this is incredible and i enjoyed it very much. easy to read, but so very complex. beautiful. you did a fantastic job with this, keep up the amazing writing!

 Report Review

Very lovely.

This is so amazingly beautiful! I absolutely loved this. You are an amazing writer and this plot was incredible and the story was very well written. Absolutely beautiful.

 Report Review

very lovely.

this was an enjoyable and exciting read. i loved how Draco finally found out it was Hermione. it was a different twist than i was expecting but it fit nicely. wonderful job on this. keep up the amazing writing!

 Report Review

very lovely.

i definitely wasn't expecting the twist at the end there. nice job! way to keep me on the edge of my seat! this was a cute little one-shot and you wrote it very well. although it was short, it fit with the mood and didn't feel to rushed, which is great. overall, lovely job with this story. keep up the fantastic writing!

Author's Response: Yes, I didn't like how short it turned out, but I really had nothing more that I wanted to cover. (: Thanks for reading.

 Report Review

very lovely.

i quite enjoyed the ending of this. very well-written, short, and pleasant. keep up the amazing writing!

 Report Review

very lovely.

sweet and beautiful. this was very enjoyable. keep up the amazing writing!

Author's Response: Thank you :)

 Report Review

very lovely.

i enjoyed this story very much. it had a different twist and a style that set it apart from other stories i have read. you definitely made this your own. i am very interested in reading the sequel and will hopefully find it and be able to do that soon. thank you for the lovely read. keep up the awesome writing!

Author's Response: Thank you :) I have to admit, its been a while since I wrote fan fiction, but I always wanted tgo finish the sequel for this story. Perhaps someday I will :)

 Report Review

very lovely.

this story was beautiful and intriguing and so incredibly wonderful. i really don't know how else to describe it apart from the fact that i simply enjoyed every part of it. it was so originally and complete and everything connected so well and made perfect sense in the end. i honestly loved this and am so pleased that i was able to read this story. this was beautiful. wonderful job. keep up the amazing writing!

 Report Review

very lovely.

just the fluff fix i needed! this wasn't to fluffy at all, just the right amount, and i enjoyed it very much. this was a very pleasant story. great job. keep up the amazing writing!

 Report Review

very lovely.

this was a wonderful one-shot. the story was set up well and i enjoyed it very much. great job on this. keep up the wonderful writing!

 Report Review

very lovely.

i don't read many harry and hermione stories anymore, but i enjoyed this one very much. cute and sweet and a great little story that brought a smile to my face. wonderful job on this! keep up the fantastic writing!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm so very glad that you liked it. :)

 Report Review

very lovely.

i enjoyed this story very much! it was quite original and beautiful and your writing style is very developed, especially considering this is your first fan fiction. overall, i thought this was strong and creative and exciting and i am very pleased to have read it. keep up the wonderful writing!

Author's Response: Why, thank you! It's good to hear that the language is also understandable since English is not my native language ;) As I just commented on the previous review, another fic has been laying around for a while now, still waiting for me to finish it (might take quite a while...).

 Report Review

very lovely.

that ending was so beautiful! So beautiful! the whole story was. i enjoyed this very much and really like your writing style. this story flowed nicely and plot had an original twist to it that made it even better. wonderful job! keep up the amazing writing!

 Report Review

very lovely.

this was cute and enjoyable. you have a wonderful writing style and your plot was set apart from other dramiones i have read which i liked a lot. the flow of this was great and overall it was a very fun and simple read that left me quite please. great job on this. keep up the amazing writing and have a great day!

 Report Review

Very lovely.

This was very sweet and beautifully written. A different idea going here, but I must say that I enjoyed it very much! This is a nice play on characters and the cannon story and this was fantastic! Keep up the amazing writing!

Author's Response: Thank you!!

I tried to get a different theme going through this story; something that wasn't read very often :) I'm actually on planning wiring a novel/novella about Gellert/Ariana at the moment :D

Thank you

 Report Review

Very lovely.

I haven't really read many Snape/Lily fanfictions but I enjoyed this one very much. It was tender and sweet, yet full of a passion that is difficult to comprehend. You wrote this beautifully. Great job and keep up the amazing writing!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! :)

 Report Review

very lovely.

this was a very enjoyable one-shot with a lot of depth to it. i thought you did a beautiful job in your writing and plot portrayal and the characterization of Draco and Hermione were done well also. great job on this. keep up the amazing writing!

Author's Response: Thank you! You're very kind :) I tried my best, I'm glad you enjoyed it.
I have a lengthier piece of Dramione in validation at the moment that views their relationships at certain points of its growth and it's really angsty, with a plethora of depth.
Once again, many thanks for the review and kind words!

Hoping a good day for you,
~RavenclawStudent.

 Report Review

very lovely.

you definitely weren't predictable! i honestly had no idea where you were going for most of the story (a good thing!) but i am so happy with how things ended up! this was an amazing read and such a beautifully written story. i loved every single minute of it, even though it was so long. you developed it very well through the length and made the story flow well. your characterizations were also predictable and fun. absolutely wonderful job on this story. keep up the amazing writing and have a great day!! (:

Author's Response: confusedlover,

Your reviews are so very lovely! It makes me so happy that I kept your interest without being too predictable. That's so lovely to hear.

And 'beautifully written'? Awe, Thank you!

You really did make my day with your reviews. (More than you could possibly know). Each one so much appreciated!

Thanks so much for giving this story a chance.

*smiles*
Dark Whisper

 Report Review

very lovely.

wow...i never saw that ending coming, but that certainly presents some new problems, doesn't it. wonderful, amazing story! this plot is so addicting and original and i am absolutely loving it. fantastic job. keep up the great work!

onto the last chapter!

Author's Response: confusedlover,

Ah, yes... a bit of a serious plot twist at the end of the second chapter. The tables turned and there are definitely a new set of problems.

You give me wonderful compliments... especially 'addicting.' Yeah! My author heart soars.

You are so sweet to review each chapter.
Thank you!
Dark Whisper

 Report Review

very lovely.

wow. this story plot is incredible and original and so darn enjoyable! i am having a wonderful time reading this story so far and cannot wait to see where it goes over the next couple chapters you have posted. i love your characterizations. Narcissa's characterization is especially appealing. usually she is portrayed as more of a victim, but this version of her has a backbone and an opinion to match. i love it! wonderful job on this so far. keep up the amazing work!

onto the next chapter!!

Author's Response: confusedlover,

Ah, you found my Winds of Azkaban story. :D

Your comments have made my day! Thank you! Regarding the plot... This challenge had me thinking about how I could make the Obliviation spell "sad" and that's what I came up with. I'm so glad that you like it!

Yes, Narcissa is still very opinionated, even after everything and is even strong enough to choose her end. :( I'm so glad you like her characterization in this story.

Thanks so much!
Dark Whisper

 Report Review

very lovely.

aw...very, very cute! i honestly had no idea what Draco's plan was at the end of the story but it made perfect since. this story was very well written and a very enjoyable read. you did a wonderful job on this. please do keep up the fantastic writing and i hope you have a great day. overall, i thought this story was awesome! (:

Author's Response: Thank you. I'm glad you liked it. :)

 Report Review

very lovely.

cute so far. for the most part this story is realistic and i'm enjoyed the read. every now and then i just need a little fluff! great job so far.

onto the second chapter!

Author's Response: Thank you. :)

 Report Review

very lovely.

quite an interesting ending there...definitely not what i was expecting. great job on this chapter! i can't wait to finish reading the rest when i get the chance. you are an excellent writer. please keep it up!

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you're finding this enjoyable :)

 Report Review