Oooh, very interesting. I'm not sure if I reviewed the previous chapter (if I didn't, I'm sorry) but I liked that as well. So, at a guess, Salazar's parents are trying to set him up with someone? I hope it's Rowena. That is, I hope it's Rowena if they do end up together. If they don't, I hope he ends up with Rowena. But you probably guessed that already.
Please continue! I can hardly wait for the next chapter.Author's Response: thank you so much :) I'm glad you're enjoying it. Yes Salazar's parents are trying to set him up with Rowena, but it's a little more complicated than that... I haven't actually decided how everyone is going to pair off yet, so we'll both just have to wait and see. ;)
thanks again for the great review Report Review
This is amazing! I really hope you update soon! (And, yeah, Joaquin Phoenixx makes a great Salazar, doesn't he?)Author's Response: Thank you so much, Update! And yes, I completely agree. Joaquin makes the perfect Salazar with his brooding, moody visage. ;) The next chapter should be posted soon. I hope you have a great week!
celticbard Report Review
While I completely and totally respect the staff's right to limit the content in this archive, I do think that in historical fiction, i.e. the pre Hogwarts or founders eras, the rules might be loosened a little. My reasoning for this is that arranged marriages were an integral part of society at that point, and it was very rare indeed for the woman to be asked her consent in upper-class matches. Therefore, many stories set in that era might partially or largely center around the subject of arranged marriages. I understand that this is a sensitive issue and I appreciate that you are dealing with it to the best of your abilities. Report Review
Aw... My god, poor Rowena! Tell me who the other guy is so I can hunt him down and kill him: THERE IS NO COMPETITION FOR SALAZAR!
Love this! It just breaks my heart, though... She has those nightmares every night?!?
Can't wait for the next chapter! Report Review
You know, it really annoys me when people write really excellent stories with better grammar and spelling and punctuation and so on than I have come to expect from eighty percent of the English-speaking population, and then English turns out to be their second language. (Yes, I'm joking.) It makes me feel so inadequate. (I mean, I am a long way from writing a fic in French, let me tell you.)
This is really amazing! I like how he's all trying to be cool about it at first, like 'Oh, so you've got a date, how nice' but he just can't keep his mouth shut. The last line was a killer, too. Nice work! Report Review
Aw. So sweet! I love how he stayed up all night. And the mind games were very Salazar. Love it! Report Review
Oh! What happened to her? Did she hurt Salazar? How? Hang on...
...But this is a public review system. Bah.
I have a theory...
I guess we'll see if I'm right.
You know, I wondered what was wrong with her... Report Review
That's so sad! And now she's leaving... But not for good.
...Right? Report Review
Ooh, Salazar likes Rowena!!! *grin*
That's so like Helga, fussing over a complete stranger. I love it!
*waits for validation of next chapter* Report Review
Wow, awesome! *chuckles* 'Not-so-sweet' eh? Love it! I'm glad you updated!Author's Response: Yeah.
Helga's always been described as like, "sweet" and "cheerful." I figured I could put a spin on some things.
Thanks for reading! Report Review
I'm not usually a huge fan of Round Table/Founders fics, but this is really sweet.Author's Response: Hahaha, thanks.
I hope I can partially change your mind. :] Report Review
Um - look, this is really good - and I mean really good... But Helena is Rowena's daughter. The founder of Hufflepuff is Helga.Author's Response: gah thank you.
I hadt realised that was what i put, but i'll fix it asap.
im glad you liked it!
Thanks for the review Report Review
Oh, Lord, you can't do this! (Even though you just did, obviously.) Please continue this. Please!Author's Response: lol thxs but I don't think I should
~Lyn Report Review
Lord! Poor Cynewulf - although he is a bit of a prat. Please update soon!Author's Response: Yeah, Cynewulf hasn't had a very easy life... and he is a major prat; but a very proud one! :)
I will update as soon as I can (and as soon as I'm allowed by maintenance)
Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Quill88 Report Review
"Nice Story" or something of the sort.
I'm so glad this has been updated! I meant to add it to my favorites before, but I think I forgot... I'll do it now... Report Review
*cheers* Yay, Rowena! Poor Prince... *snicker*
I'm not going to take an outright guess at who the vampire is, but I have an inkling - which may be completely wrong, of course. Please update often! (This is going on my favorites.)Author's Response: Woo!
Hehe yes poor Prince indeed *cough*
The vampire shall make a bigger appearance pretty soon x]
Really thrilled that you like it. I'll update as soon as i can =] Report Review
Going on my favorites.Author's Response: Thanks, Update! ♥ Ginni Report Review
Wow! Please update very soon! Report Review
Oh God!! Wow!
(That's a positive Oh God!! Wow! by the way.)Author's Response: Thanks! :) Report Review
Accckkk! You can't do that. *ignores the fact that you just did* Update really soon!Author's Response: Update~
your name cracks me up! and so do you!
lol, thanks for the review.
kbav Report Review
Awesome! I love this! And your pictures are great, too. Please update soon.Author's Response: thanks for the review...someday...someday soon, i'll finish the already drafted next 5 chapters...don't know why I've stopped...maybe its all these collage applications Report Review
Accck! You can't do this to me! (Actually, you can, obviously, but that's not the point.) Update soon! Please? I'll give you virtual... er... virtual... VIRTUAL EVERYTHING! Please! Report Review
If I give you virtual presents *gives virtual gift certificates, cake, brownies, ice cream, cookies, money, autographs of the founders* will you update soon?Author's Response: next chapter is going up now Report Review
Gaah! Update very soon! Please?Author's Response: Oh, I am so sorry it's taking me so long. I promise to update soon. Report Review
Wow! PLEASE update soon! Report Review
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