Great chapter! I loved learning all about the magehounds and the stuffed Sevvy was wonderful hehe! Poor Sev.. lol. I can't wait until they get back to school and he can re-establish his reputation. ;)Author's Response: Yeah, and just wait until you see what happens next! I'll give you a hint, it involves Fireflash. Report Review
Yay! I am so glad that you have the sequel to The Very Best Thing up so soon! I loved the first chapter and look forward to the rest to come. ( I really loved Snape becoming a godfather... hehe)Author's Response: And just wait till you see what happens next! Report Review
This was really good. I loved the story.. my heart broke for Sev, but the ending was wonderful. Thanks for writing it!Author's Response: Thank you for reading it. I had lots of fun writing it. Report Review
This is breaking my heart! They are so stubborn! Mostly Lily was then Sev... still. my heart breaks for Severus. He was and is always my favorite.Author's Response: I love him too. I wrote this because I didn't like lily so much after Dh and I wanted to believe that she liked him more than she showed. Report Review
This was great! Maverick reminds me of my dog Jack... almost to the tee. lol. It was also great getting Maverick's POV. I can't wait to read some more of your stories, I love how you portray Severus.Author's Response: Wonderful, and I've a sequel written as well! it's even funnier! Report Review
This was the very best chapter! I simply loved Severus's re-action to the girls trying on shoes! I was laughing the entire time.. lol... as well as when Arista and Sev recieved the dog from Jenna and Colin.
The ending was perfect. Really, truely great. I found myself tearing up going, "Awww! For once everything worked out for Severus..."
Really wonderful. I look forward to the sequel.Author's Response: Yeah, I'm a huge fan of happy endings . . .which is why all of my books tend to end like that. because everyone deserves to be happy, especially Sev. Report Review
I loved the chapter, but i am now wondering... is Severus cruel enough NOT to let Arista go to the Yule Ball?? Or if he does, how much spying is he going to do on his daughter and the poor boy who goes with her? lol.. Author's Response: Of course he's not THAT cruel! And if he trusts the guy she goes with, he won't be watching her too closely! Report Review
I am totally addicted to your story! I LOVE it and I really love how you portray Severus. He is still the grumpy strict man I love, but with that soft side... just like in Deathly Hollows. Totally great! Author's Response: Wow, I'm so glad. I was never sure if I was doing a good job or not with him, I was afraid I made him too nice, but then again, he's really sweet when you get to know him and when he loves you he'll give you the shirt off his back, so . . .anyway keep reading and reviewing please! Report Review
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