Im so glad Clem is going to get help. I really like her character. I'd hate to see her gone. Lucy on the other hand, I don't see how she is going to win her battle. Just how long is Scorpius going to deal with a depressing girl friend. A guy can seriously take so much.
Great chapter, see you next time :)Author's Response: Thank you :) Clem is one of my favourite characters, which I guess is kind of stupid of me to say because I wrote her. but anyway, I like her :P Thank you for reading my story :) Report Review
Newbies! lol I was wondering if you were around the year they decided to do away with all the usual characters and only ship one girl, who at the time only had one story. The link took you to a whole new website. Thought that was a good one. Then the year that if you tried to get onto the site it showed a picture of Fred and George. Read a lot on SIYE that day, lol Think that was when I found stories by Melinda Leo on Phoenixsong Ultimate premeditated writer of the final book of the potter series, so close to the real one, yet written way before Rowlings, the 7th horecrux I believe it was called. if you haven't read it yet, please do, it's unreal.
Back to this story, Im rambling...
Rose has an amazing memory. She is in the perfect line of work. Scorpius, the poor guy, I can't wait to find out his back story. That's not enough sleep to live on. why so worried?
I really enjoyed reading this chapter. You write, and I feel involved. Loved it!Author's Response: I came across the site from a random google search when I was looking up pics of Ron/Hermione in like my freashmen year of highschool, so that would have been around 2007/2008. Although my mother was a total hippy and I didn't have internet all through school so I never could get on as much as I'd like, it wasn't until my dad gave me a smart phone to spite my mother that I truly became obsessed so the first prank that I got tricked on was the kid proof.
I'm hopping to actually read more this summer, although if you are looking for a good Scor/Rose read check out The Other Women by Irishmyth, that one is outstanding, even though its not complete she has this blog where you can ask her and the characters questions and it is so cool. Another good Ron/Hermione/Draco love triangle is called Regretfully Yours by SpringTime, which I was obsessed with and she updated every sunday I followed her through two pregnancies which she left a/n about and two novels one of which is a sequel to RY and is Scor/Rose and it's called Oh, The tragedy of it All. Anyways now i'm rambeling.
I'm so glad that you enjoyed the chapter yeah I have been in a serious debate with myself about how and when Scorpius backstory will be revealed, also I have one for Rose which I'm "Planning" to reveal in chapter 9. Planning being the key word there. Scorpius will be a little bit later but (and this is entierly my opinon) it will be so juicy and awesome along with the current plot points that will be going on at the time, I am crazy excited about it Just thinking about it is giving me Big Evil Smiley Face!
Anyways thank you so much for the review and I'm working on the next one right now. Thank you for reading glad you feel involved. Report Review
Loved this chapter! Seems Hermione already has chosen a side if there is a side to be had. She called Scorpius handsome :) I hope Scorpius makes a good impression on Ron. Rose needs a good start to her future relationship, or if they ever get married, Ron may need to be sedated. lol See you next chapter!Author's Response: Thanks! I think Hermione was just glad that Rose wasn't dating Toby anymore. ;) And you'll find out in the next chapter, although not in a tangible way... If that makes any sense... :) And marriage?? Steady on- they're only in fourth year! ;)
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
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I adored your ending. I love that Scorpius cant look Rose in the eye after all that time passing. Also, what of this Simon man? He has to be something special for Rose to say I do. Yes, I think a one shot would be a good idea,
Im sad it's the end already. I hope to see you again very soon.Author's Response: Thank you! Your reviews have really helped me keep writing since I know someone is reading :) I'll probably work on a one-shot when school is a little less busy, so hopefully I'll see you soon :D Report Review
sounds like he escaped a dicey situation. I hope their talk works out.
enjoyed the chapter very much :)Author's Response: Thanks for the review! Report Review
Oh, my goodness! I'm sure Rose just got traumatized. She just skimmed through a very personal possession of Scorpius's. She found out about a girl that has never even been mentioned before in their whole friendship so far, why... even that afternoon Scorpius had his hand on her thigh, was kissing her in places that made her shiver. If he was so worried about the other girl, what made him cross the line with that relationship? Can she even trust him? Maybe she should play a little hard to get? Though if she started doing that, I'm sure Scorpius would demand an explanation at some point. What does Rose say? I read your journal, who is Danielle? Scorpius wouldn't be able to trust her either. I wonder if Scorpius left the Journal out for Rose to find, so he wouldn't have to tell her about the other girl himself? Boy, the next chapter is going to really be something. Scorpius has some decisions to make. He's getting awfully close to Rose for this to be a friendly vacation. After vacation, it's back to school, it's not like he is never going to see her again. Time to put up or shut up soon Scorpy.
Great chapter, loved it when Ron licked the cup and put it in the dish water. I know someone who would do that. Same guy that when he was putting away a stack of plates, got really mad at his wife and dropped them, they all shattered on the floor, he looked up into her faced and said... dishes are done. They both laughed.
see you next chapter!Author's Response: HAHa. Seriously. You just pretty much summed up all of the conflict in one paragraph. Well, all of the Danielle-related conflict anyway.
I love that story about the plates. That is amazing.
Thank you! I really hope you enjoy the rest of the story! Report Review
Just when he finds courage, he has to wait for Teddy. Report Review
Wonderful ending, im so glad she got it figured out and made it home.Author's Response: :))) thank you so much!
Im glad you enjoyed it! Report Review
Wow Tom, I think I enjoyed this chapter even more than the last. I can immagine all those butcher shops. We have a street here with a little famousness attached to it. Word is that it was in Guiness twice. Once for having the most stop lights and another for having the most bars! lol Sounds about right for a lumber city. It's Oliver Street in North Tonawanda New York. and pretty much runs through the middle of the city. It's where I grew up and where I just moved back to.
see you on Facebook!Author's Response: Hi Patty, thats interesting I'll have to have a look at that on Google earth. It sounds a bit like York used to be, it was reputed to have enough bars within it's City walls so you could visit a different one each day of the year except Sunday's without visiting the same one twice. In the same area it was said there were enough churches so you could go to a different one each Sunday too. I guess there were a lot of religious drunks in the city then. These day's closures of both mean it is no longer true.
Glad you enjoyed both chapters and many thanks for reviewing.
Tom Report Review
A new bird for Hogwarts, glad the owl gave in.Birdies need to play nice, nice :)Author's Response: Lol. Many thanks Patty.
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Scorpius sounds smarter than he talks. Good for him.Everyone is already too busey, he should be trying to solve his own problems. Now look how well that worked out :)
Darn stone, they may have to go into the forest and find the tiny bugger. Immagine if it could work like the philosipers stone? A little dip in a cup of water, and wallah! Instant cure.
Great chapter! My mind is working now. Report Review
Good ending, I enjoyed reading your story alot. I'm just glad she is back where she belongs.
I do wish you would have put up a first chapter for the new story already. I could have been one of the first to pop it into my favorites. Hope we meet again soon :)Author's Response: I'm glad that you liked the ending, as I was worried about it! I'm so glad that you enjoyed it, and I always looked forward to your reviews! The first chapter of it should be up in 2-3 weeks :D I hope to see you again:D Report Review
Suppose whatever Percy has to say in the next chapter will seal her fate. She better be a star if she ever wants to face her mother again. I dont think living on the streets is an option for Lucy.Author's Response: She's still at school for now, so I she's got some time to figure out where she'll go after :) Report Review
wow, to convict an innocent man like that?Thing I wonder about is fate. If someone is seen to die, doesn't that set it in stone? Just because one man is out of the equation, wont that mean another must take his place? If Dom is set to die she will. Have to de-bunk the seer. Even Harry had to die.
Enjoyed this chapter, see you the next :)Author's Response: You've got some interesting thoughts... I guess the major conflict right now is whether or not this is a 'real' Seer. I don't want to reveal anything about the future of this story, but I hope you will enjoy it. I'm so glad that you liked this, and thank you so much for reviewing!! Report Review
I think Scorpius really needed that talk. Dealing with the owls will help him also with his own father I think, don't you? Get a different perspective about family.
Wonderful job on the chapter, see you next one :) Report Review
Glad to see your story back, and Yes, writing for fun between school work does keep you sane, and your mind moving. Actualy helps when doing the important school work.Author's Response: Thanks!! I'm glad to be back.
Yeah, I've got buckets of homework and this is so relaxing :) Report Review
Nice they get to leave the castle on occation. What Scorpius didnt know before never hurt him. His friendship with Rose seems to be opening his eyes even wider than before.Author's Response: Thank you for this review!
I'm glad that I was able to convey the changes that Rose triggers.
Never read romance on April 1st. Alot of bananas come flying out of pockets. lol You don't even want to know what I figured out a hamster is!
See, I told you Scorpius didn't mean to do it :)
In the room, Rose seems very lonely. Her body wants human touch. Her mind is a little screwie though. Good luck Scorpius!Author's Response: Hey, at least you caught on I had a lot of people freaking out last night. But this isn't near as bad as the year when they kid proofed the site and put pictures to words, now that was bad. Thanks for the review.
Loved it! Was having a lot of fun figuring out the puppies, purses and hamsters. I was like O-0. lol I thought you lost your mind for a bit there.Author's Response: I thought I lost my mind for a second when I read it this morning!:)) I'm happy you liked it! Thank you for the review! Report Review
And another one bites the dust. I loved that you made this story a family affair. That will mean alot to Rose when she's old, writing the story of her life. I'll be looking for the epi soon :)Author's Response: I think Rose enjoyed working with her parents more than she would have expected. The end of Ambrosia, finally! Thank you so much for reviewing! Report Review
I loved it! I feared for Scorpius every time he opened his mouth. The tea cup was a great dramatic gesture. Haven't read a Rose that threw things as of yet, this is a first. Usually you find a Rose that talks too much when she is angry. I like your Rose. I hope you do something more with her in the future when your done with this challange.Author's Response: Well I am glad that you liked it! :)
Yeah, it's kind of funny because he doesn't really seem to be afraid of what she'll do. I mean, even when she throws the teacup he doesn't seem to be fazed lol. And I am glad that you like her haha, I was trying to take a different than usual approach to both Rose AND Scorpius...
Annnddd this is currently listed as a short story but it may end up being longer than that, we'll just have to see ;) But there will definitely be more than 2 or 3 chapters. It may be closer to 10 chapters unless I decide to make it longer :D
But, anyway, thank you for the review! (: Report Review
I think I figured out who was in Scorpius's room. Girl is going to me a menace, isn't she?
I enjoyed the chapter too :)Author's Response: It's pretty unexpected, so I don't think you could have figured it out but who knows? Maybe you're just awesome :)
Thanks for reviewing,
~RoseWeasley7 Report Review
It's okay, I was only a little confused, I snapped out of it. I'm just happy for Molly. I like her new boyfriend.
see you soon :) Report Review
Most exciting part, the climb into the clouds to capture the snitch.
Loved it!Author's Response: Well I am glad that you loved it :)
And thank you so so SO SO MUCH for reviewing. You seem to hit every chapter and I'm INCREDIBLY touched :D Report Review
Random was good, train rides can be confusing for the passangers. Where are your friends, who are your friends, where to sit, who to listen to. I think you found a bit of it all. :)Author's Response: Thanks for the review :) Report Review
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