OMG I love your story! I can't wait to read more!
Keep up the great work, I beg of you!^^

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Can't help but wonder: waht the heck is L e s l a f i n d e l e s o r i g i n e supposed to mean?
Otherwise, great story. And I just love your disclaimers^^
Continue writting. You'll be hearing from me^^

Author's Response: It means "the end of the beginning" in French haha. Thanks so much!

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No! It's close to 1AM and I've got to get up early tomorrow but damn it, I wanna know if they finally get it out of their system!^^
I know I'm repeating myself, bug oh my God, the way your write is juste perfect!
You made me laugh like mad, I almost cried and got a few times goose-bumps.
Bravo!

Author's Response: Aww, getting up early is the pits -_-. Thank you soo much! I doubt it's perfect, but that's wonderful to hear. Hope you didn't cry too much (sorry, and thanks for the review!

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Dear! You've achieved the unthinkable: you've fascinated me! Reading you was like eating a yummy rainbow cake. Lo-ve-ly!
If you ever publish, give me a sign and I'll be your most fervent admirer, I can promise you that.
Can't wait to read the next chapters. Keep up the fantastic work.
And I know I sound like a creepy fanatic (but you've really thrown my world upside down!) but OMG! Bless us all with your words!
xoxo. ;)

Author's Response: O_O I suppose you've rendered me speechless...so I'm glad I'm able to write, instead. Thank you so so very much! "Like eating a yummy rainbow cake"--a bit insane, but that makes the best people :P. And it means so much. If writer's block ever let's a completed original story through it's towering gates, I'll letcha know. I'm so glad you like this so far. Thank you again and again for your lovely review!

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Wonderful style... You are one a rare kind!
I'm looking forward to read the following.

Author's Response: Wonderful style, rare kind...that means so much. Thank you!

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Re-read your story and I still lov it It s from far your best work, I'd say!

Author's Response: thank you! :). its my fav story too!

-WP

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quite interesing. Im keeping an eye on this^^

Author's Response: thanks! glad that it interests you :)

-WP

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Good start! I'm keeping an eye on this fic!

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Interesting plot and story. But you should take your time when you right, you tend to (almost) jump from one thing to another, it breaks the rythm (long and hard) that kind of story should have. Try to describe how desperate and hateful Hermione feels. Describe how pathetic and terrible her mother is.
When you write, you need to feel it. "It" is everything, feelings and such. It's really hard (I myself can't really master it) but it's worth it.
Keep up the good work, I'll keep a lookout for your story.

Author's Response: Thanks, I began writing this story a couple of years ago and I keep going back through and editing it because it's still not where I want it to be. I appreciate your review a lot. You should check out my other stories, my most recent one is Father's Son, I would love to hear what you have to hear about that one.

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Awww I love your story! At first, I didn't really think it could catch my attention that badly because of the way you write but. Man, you've got a little something that makes it fascinating!
[8/10]

Author's Response: Im glad you love it.
What is it about my writing that you don't like then? What should I do to make it better? :)

- C

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I LOVE your story! Update asap!^^

Author's Response: Yes, of course!
chapter 5 under validation!

tks!

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I think your fanfic is the first I read that is really involved with the original story. Great work! It's a maing to read you so keep up the amazing work as I really want to know how you finish this!
[10/10]

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You're story is great!
Keep up the exellent work, hon, coz I really want to know what happens next!^^
[10/10]

Author's Response: Thanks for the great review! I'm glad I've been able to keep everyone guessing so far, heehee!

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Wow. I'd really like to read more from this; you write about such a touchy subject in a very interesting way!
Keep up the amating work; I dare to say you might be a support for girl that go through that kind of phase.

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Nice! Even if a tat OOC, it's still a nice idea you got there.
Update soon!^^

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Mmmh, quite nice. Bravo, I'd say!
Keep up the good work and update soon!

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'll try!
-love-
LM

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Hey! Great story; keep up the great work; it's a real delight to read what you write!

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It's a nice start but you should know that the temples are not between the eyes; on the contrary, the eyes are between the temples ;)

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Very nice! I'm totally looking forward to read what comes next.
Keep up the great work!
[9/10]

Author's Response: Thank You :)

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Very nice! Though I sense real drama coming up soon...^^
Keep udating, your story is worth it.

Author's Response: You are very right about that...just wait and see. ;) Thanks for the review!

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Very cute indeed.
Though you might want to change the word "boum" to "bal masqué" (masquarade) for "oum" is a word or, let's say, children disco ;) But I found it quite cute^^

Author's Response: Oh, okay! Thanks for the tip! I'll definitely keep that in mind when I go back and edit (which I will do once I finish this story, if that day will ever arrive...)

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MMMh... LOVE IT! Please update asap^^

Author's Response: Thanks! My chapter got rejected on this site so you'll have to try another to read farther. I have 19 chapters written so far.

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Gee... I really like the story, but hell when you wanna write sth in french, don't be a lazy cow and write it IN FRENCH and not in a lousy approximativ thing...
‘I may be a wizard but I never knew what real magic was until I fell in love with you,’”
Je suis peut-être un sorcier mais je n'ai jamais su ce qu'est la vraie magie avant d'être tombé amoureux de toi.
The most poetic way to say this would be: Je suis peut-être sorcier, mais je n'ai jamais su ce qu'est la véritable magie, avant d'avoir connu ton amour

Now get a grip a remember; when you start something, finish it. Quickly if you want, but not badly...

6/10

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aaah! Need to know what happens next!^^
Update asap please!^^

Author's Response: I will update as a Christmas gift, I think.. I hope.. :) Thank you for your review!

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Very nice!
I'll look forward to a following!

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