OMG that was great!! Please tell me that there's going to be a follow-up story. And I LOVED the third person writing.Author's Response: Thanks so much, and I doubt it >.< x Report Review
AH i loved it! Very impressive wit, and adding in the part about Lee being gay was a great idea! Poor Ron; ah well, we all still love him, do we not? all in all, excellent. Report Review
all i can say is that this story is beautiful. it made my heart ache. absolutely wonderful. Report Review
Omg what a great one-shot! You displayed the tension and the romance incredibly! i give it a nine out of ten for a few gramatical errors, but other than that absolutely marvelous!Author's Response: GAH! Gramatical Errors?! Where?! (Lera cries...I thought I found all those) Thank you for the complimentary and constructive review. We love those kind. So thank you. Lera and Genie Report Review
this is cute, but a little bit of grammar and punctuation would be appreciated. a few well-placed commas can make all the difference, but other than that, a cute one shot and a good plot idea.Author's Response: Thanks for the tip! I've been writting since I was little, and yet it didn't inprove my spelling or grammar. Report Review
WHOA. that was incredible!! i loved the details; it sounded like poetry. i would love you to check out some of my stuff, and i can't wait to hear something else from you. PLEASE tell me who it was: i have a few ideas, but i would love to have a hint. it's quite a storyAuthor's Response: sure i read your work. thanks for the review... but sorry a magician never revels its secrets...i couldnt possibly tell you who it is... although i am thinking of writing a full story round this one shot... not sure yet i need to bulk up the story first.. Report Review
EXCELLENT. incredible writing, and smooth words. this is poetry, and i adored it.Author's Response: Thanks Siriuslovekd! Thanks, thanks, thanks!!! Report Review
hahaha!! very cute story, and immensely enjoyable. i especially love the quirky character you have created, considering i play the cello and am also a huge Gilmore Girls fan. great story!Author's Response: Thank you so much! There just aren't enough cello stories on HPFF. There might be enough GG-inspired stories, but not cellorific ones =). Report Review
aw very sweet. i liked it, it was a great little one-shot romanceAuthor's Response: Thank you very much, I'm really glad you enjoyed it! =) Report Review
This is an incredible story!! You had me hanging on to every word. I could feel the passion, and the ending was brilliant. Congrats on a wonderful one shot.Author's Response: Thank you sooo much! Really? Thats fantastic! I was a bit iffy about this oneshot as it was my first ever Dramione... Thanks once again siriuslovekd for the fabulous review! Dixi x Report Review
This story is wonderful, which really makes me wonder about your personal summary. Quite the hypocrite, but a talented hypocrite all the same.Author's Response: Hypocrite? I'm not sure if I follow. Please explain. Report Review
OMG! This story is incredible!!! Between the quote in the beginning, and the totally unexpected twist at the end, this story is IMMEDIATELY going onto my favorites list. I would definitely appreciate it if you checked out my stories, because one of my ships, with hermione/percy is something unexpected as well. but that was really great! 10/10Author's Response: Thank you so much! I am so honoured that you are putting it into your favourites list. And I will definitely check out your story. :) Report Review
It was a cute one shot, I really liked it. There were a couple of grammer mistakes that somewhat took away from the story itself, but but overall, a sweet story. Report Review
I was introduced to your incredible writing at sleepaway camp this summer, and i have been HOOKED ever since. it's so refreshing to know that there are amazing writers like you that can keep Harry's world alive, even though the books are finished. I just want to say thank you, and I can't wait for the next chapter!Author's Response: It's nice to know i was recommended and I was just as upset about the books ending as the next person. It is really difficult to write when I know that there isn't really any hope in the future for more books...but ah well. Thanks for the review. Report Review
excellent!!! definitely continue. very sensual, yet also extremely possible. i could see dramione becoming violently lovable, as you perfectly portrayed in this story Report Review
it was cute, and i especially loved the little thing about fred/george at the end, but seriously, summer or not, bad grammer and IM speech majorly took away from the story. i still enjoyed it, though!Author's Response: thx soo much and ur so rite...still trying to find time to edit...lol...ill get there eventually Report Review
Incredible. Absolutely incredible. That was an amazing story. PLEASE keep up the amazing writing. I adored it.Author's Response: Thank you =) I'll try to write another one soon... we'll see though =) Thank you for reviewing. It mean a lot =) xx Lily Report Review
Cute story. very fluffy and pointless, but still cute and fun. i loved the way you worded it as well. Keep it up!Author's Response: Thnx :) Report Review
I thought this was a great story. It sounded like an actual book, and captured the essence of Lily/James's relationship perfectly. Keep up the great work!Author's Response: Thanks so much :) I had heaps of fun writing this, so I'm really happy when people like it :) Report Review
this was a great story. slightly OD on the drama at a few points, but overall, and excellent read.(i NEVER saw the thing with Goyle coming) keep it up!Author's Response: i know i over did it a little bit on the drama, but it was a slightly depressing week when i wrote it, and i needed to get my feelings out. i knew the goyle thing would surprise some people, but i hinted at it before! Anyways, thank for your reveiw, it means alot! **lanny Report Review
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